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mere gam pe hasne waale ( a nazm ...close to my heart ) - 11th October 2001, 08:38 AM

mere gam pe hasne waale
ye to kismaton ki baat hai
jo meri shareek-e-gam thi
wo teri shareek-e-hayaat hai

tumhaari bhi mehfil saji hai
apne yahan bhi raunak hai
gale mili hain tere khushiyan
apni gamon se mulaqaat hai

ye tere ghar ka aaftaab
gaya hai mere dar se utth ke
ab teri raaten hai subah jaisi
mera ab din bhi raat hai

tere daaman mein giraa hai
aasmaa(n) ka ik sitaara
sambhaal ke rakhna ise tum
mera mehboob ik saugaat hai

tumko ho mubarak ae dost
shatranj ye mohabbat ki
bichhao tum apni bisaat
ab hamari to maat hai
jo meri shareek-e-gam thi
wo teri shareek-e-hayaat hai

woh teri shareek-e-hayaat hai.....!!!



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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai

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Thumbs up 11th October 2001, 01:01 PM

Excellent..!!

Wah maikashji..Waqaii bahut acchi nazm hai....


kabhi kisi ko muqammal jahan nahi milta
kahiiN zameeN to kahiiN aasmaN nahi milta!!
   
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its wonderful - 11th October 2001, 03:15 PM

hello maikash!!!

sahi main dil ko chuh gayeah tumhari yeah nazam... i m sure insaan tabhi aisay kuch likh pata hai jab usnay yeah batien mehsus ki ho.... bahut sahi kaha!!!


ye tere ghar ka aaftaab
gaya hai mere dar se utth ke
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mera ab din bhi raat hai

bahuth sahi kaha .. bahuth sahi

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Uff......Maikashji .......itni achi nazm....!!!!
No doubt...its a really really really good one .....


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Thumbs up 12th October 2001, 07:17 AM

aap sab ka dil se shukarguzaar hoon.....bahot pehle ye nazm likhi thi....aur yeh nazm us shayri mein se hai jo main post nahin karta...!!

ashaar mere youn to zamaane ke liye hain
kuch sheyr faqat unko sunaane ke liye hain

aapki hausla-afzai ka ehsaan hua dil pe...!!

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12th October 2001, 09:50 PM

Aadab MaikaH Ji,

Aapki nazm padi mashaa-allah aap to bahot bahot bahot he acchaa likhte hain. Agar aap ko bura na lage to main jaanna chahunga ke aapka profession kya hai?

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adaab kahsif ji.....

zarra-nawazi ka shukriya janaab.....!!

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22nd October 2003, 03:21 PM

Mujhe nehi pata kyu mere dil rorahi hein, aise jeise ke chubta hi chali gayi ke mein rok nehi parahi hu. Shayed yeh meri dil aapke dard ab puri tarha se mehsoosh kar rahi hein!! Ab aur mein nehi parsakungi. Later on again. Kyu ke ab meri dimaag nehi kaam kar rahi hein aur jab woh nehi kaam karte hein toh replies aksar jiyada hojati hein. Ha yeh hein ke meri dilhi kehti rahti hein aur mein likhti jati hu. Lekin nehi aur nehi. Shukriya. Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless you.


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