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ek pyase ko kyun saagar dikhaya aapne? -
20th July 2004, 03:49 PM
ek pyase ko kyun saagar dikhaya aapne?
marr rahe the ham kyun jeena sikhaya aapne?
kaise tumse keh de kya kuch kiya hai aapne
ham to sazde mein the kyun kaafir banaya aapne?
aap hi ke khayalon mein guzarte hai raat or din
khud ko bhulae baithe hai kyun apna banaya aapne?
ab to shaayad umar bhar dag_magayenge kadam
madbhari nazron se kyun ham ko pilaya aapne?
intezaar mein tumhare ashq peete rehte hai ham
kya khata thi meri kyun itna rulaya aapne?
har ghadi bas aap ki hi yaad mein tadapta hai dil
tum hi bolo kyun hamein itna sataya aapne?
-Manoj Kureel
apne usoolon par ham apne andaaz se chalte hai
karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein.
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Receive it with a smile... -
20th July 2004, 04:00 PM
Dear Manoj Jee, I was waiting for your new post...but at this moment...lafz nahin sath derahi hain. Ek baat kehti houn, zara sochiyega...sabhi Pyaar karnewalon ke liye bhi hain: "Exchange of Hearts" kisi ke dil mein jab basjaate hain lekin puri tarha basne ke liye dard tou sehna padta hain...aapka yeh kyuon ka jawab tou nahin hain mere paas lekin itna kahoungi ke Jo hona hota hain woh tou baas ho hi jaati hain...hum khudh thodi hi aisa chahte hain...Nahin ke nahin? I will talk to you later on...I am still so very busy but I will be back...Dilse nikli houi Daad kubool kijiyega...younhi likhte rahiyega. Mujhe bohot achha lagna hain.
Khush rahiye yeh Duwaon ke sath ijaazat chahoungi. Take care. God bless you.
Keep smilling.......
*Aapni Parwaaz-e-Takhayyull Hain Zamane Se Juda
Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche
Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain
Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche**
*~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~**
*Pure Love**
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Kureel
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Re: Receive it with a smile... -
20th July 2004, 04:11 PM
shimul ji
kaisi hai aap???? behad acha laga aap ka reply paa kar,,,,mujhe bhi aapke reply ka wait rehta hai.....aap ne sach kaha hai is "kyun" ka jawab kisi ke paas nahin....isiliye is gazal mein meine khud se jaanna chaha tha is "kyun" ka jawab....behad shukrguzar hoon aapki hauslaaafzai ke liye....apna khayal rakhiye.....khush rahiye...
-MANOJ
apne usoolon par ham apne andaaz se chalte hai
karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein.
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Main kuch nahin samajhti houn... -
20th July 2004, 04:16 PM
Dear Manoj Jee, main isswaqt keisi houn yeh mujhe khudh nahin pata...aap samajhte hain ke main shayad hi aap yea aur doston ko bhavnaon ko theek tarha nahin samajhti houn...dil jaanta hain ke main keya jaanti houn...khair, nice to know you wait as well.
Khush rahiye yeh Duwaon ke sath ijaazat chahoungi. Take care. God bless you.
Keep smilling.......
*Aapni Parwaaz-e-Takhayyull Hain Zamane Se Juda
Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche
Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain
Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche**
*~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~**
*Pure Love**
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hi -
20th July 2004, 05:58 PM
intezaar mein tumhare ashq peete rehte hai ham
kya khata thi meri kyun itna rulaya aapne?
har ghadi bas aap ki hi yaad mein tadapta hai dil
tum hi bolo kyun hamein itna sataya aapne?
bahut hi achha likha hai manoj ji...behad umdaa..khair bahut dino baad aaye hai aap...jab aap nahi hote to aapki kami bahut khalti hai is mehfil mein...isliye..aapko koi haqu nahi is mehfil ki shaan kam karne ka...gayab ho kar...
take care..
aapki dost,
pari
Chadha hai aaj bhi uska Rang, jisne kabhi Ranga hi nahi :-)
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kuch baatein kuch yaadein
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bahut khoob -
20th July 2004, 11:13 PM
maonj ji
bahut khoob likha hai aapne
bas hameshaa ki tarah aise hi likhte rahiye
sonal
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21st July 2004, 12:12 PM
ek pyase ko kyun saagar dikhaya aapne?
marr rahe the ham kyun jeena sikhaya aapne?
intezaar mein tumhare ashq peete rehte hai ham
kya khata thi meri kyun itna rulaya aapne?
Priye Manoj...
kaafi dino baad aaye aap yahan aur phirse bemisaal lafzon mein jazzbaat bayaan kar diye...ishq aur dard do pehloo hain aashiqee ke...bahut dard hai aapke shabdon mein...bus dua hai ki aapko aisaa dard kabhi mehsoos na ho...yeh masoom sa sawaal bebasi mein...
kya khata thii meri kyun itna rulaaya aapne...
bus kya kahein...yahin pe dil aakar tham sa gaya...aur aage badhne kee himmat nahin huyi...haan kuch sher yaad aa gaye...
sataa sataa ke hame.n ashk_baar karatii hai
tumhaarii yaad bahut beqaraar karatii hai
vo din jo saath guzaare the pyaar ke hamane
talaash un ko nazar baar baar karatii hai
gilaa nahii.n jo nasiibo.n ne kar diyaa hai judaa
terii judaa_ii bhii ab ham ko pyaar karatii hai
--Wafa Roomani ka likha hai....
paras
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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bohat khub -
21st July 2004, 04:08 PM
manoj ji waqai mein bohat acha likha hai ap nein har lafz tareef ke qabil hai manein ke mujhe ap kii ye ghazal par kar kisis ki yad aa gayi same yehi situation menein bhi kisi ke sath ki hai is waqt bohat yad aa rahai hai us ki ,,,,,,,,,,,,asif
udas shamon ka hamsafar.,.
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hi -
24th July 2004, 03:11 PM
hello manoj ji
kya aur kin lafzon me tareef karoon ye mushkil sa kaam hai,,,!per phir bhi ek koshish kerti hoon,,,,
ek pyase ko kyun saagar dikhaya aapne?
marr rahe the ham kyun jeena sikhaya aapne?
ye sawal acccha hai,,,jeeney aur merne ke beech ka!!!!
aap hi ke khayalon mein guzarte hai raat or din
khud ko bhulae baithe hai kyun apna banaya aapne?
shayad aisa hi hota hai,,jab koi dil ke jyada kareeb hota hai,,,,!
intezaar mein tumhare ashq peete rehte hai ham
kya khata thi meri kyun itna rulaya aapne?
ye bahut dil ko choo lene wala ehsas hai,,,,sach,,!!!!
har ghadi bas aap ki hi yaad mein tadapta hai dil
tum hi bolo kyun hamein itna sataya aapne?
,,ye baat nahi hai ki koi satata hai,,per jab koi derd barh jata hai hud se,,to wo satana jaisa hi ho jata hai,,,,,
apki is rachna ko parhker ek sher yaad aa raha hai,,,,
"aya hi tha khayal ki ansoon nikal parey
ansoo kisi ki yaad ke kitna kareeb they"
..kahair..itne acchey jazbaat ke liye daad kabool kijiye....
swati...............some words about tears in!
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24th July 2004, 04:46 PM
intezaar mein tumhare ashq peete rehte hai ham
kya khata thi meri kyun itna rulaya aapne?
har ghadi bas aap ki hi yaad mein tadapta hai dil
tum hi bolo kyun hamein itna sataya aapne?
Manoj Sahab,
Hum to kabse aapke post ka intezar kar rahe the, kahi aisa to nahi ke maine hi der kardi padhne mein ?
Waise janab, aapki andaze shayri ke bare me kuch kahu ye to aisa hi hoga ki jasie Suraj ko Chirag dikhaye.
Kambakth mere paas to aapki tarif ke liye alfaz hi nahi rehte, kuch samajh mein nahi aata ki kya likhu..
Tahe Dil se dad kabul kijiyega..
Take Care,
God Bless U,
Ajay..
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