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15th November 2004, 09:27 PM
ek aur sher....
PHIR CHUPKE SE YAD AA GAYA KOI,
IN HASTI AANKHO ME AANSU DE GAYA KOI,
KAISE SHUKRIYA ADA KARU UNKA,
IS NACHEEZ KO PYAR KARNA SIKHA GAYA KOI...........
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16th November 2004, 01:19 AM
wahhhhhhhhhh p!nk wahhhhhhhh
shu shayri che........................ahahahahahahahaha...!!!
kai khas maja na aaivi..!!!
be!maan mohabbat.....!!!
Sal!m.....!!!
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16th November 2004, 10:10 AM
thanx sal!m......
ema maja na aavi hoy to aa tara mate...
VISARTA VISARTA A YAD AAVE TO SHU KARU?
YAD MA NAYAN ENI ASHRU VAHAVE TO SHU KARU?
KHULLA CHHE MARA DIL NA DHVAR SADANE MATE,
E SANGDIL SANAM CHHE- NA AAVE TO SHU KARU?
JOINE PAN HU JOTI NATHI KOINE,
BADHAMA TUJ NAJAR AAVE TO SHU KARU?
aa gami?
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16th November 2004, 12:54 PM
Hi Pinky Ji,
Aur ek bohot khoob sher. Hmmm lagta hai humorous effect khatam hota jaa raha hai aap mein kyu??? Waisay bohot hi pyare khayalat. Agey bhi zaroor likhtey rahiye aur mere humnaam ko ignore karna.
Luvs,
Salim
If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul
Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you.
We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly
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16th November 2004, 04:37 PM
pink dil garden garden thai gayu .................
maja aaivi pan bhau khas maja aaivi.............
VISARTA VISARTA A YAD AAVE TO SHU KARU
YAD MA NAYAN ENI ASHRU VAHAVE TO SHU KARU
KHULLA CHHE MARA DIL NA DHVAR SADANE MATE
E SANGDIL SANAM CHHE- NA AAVE TO SHU KARU
JOINE PAN HU JOTI NATHI KOINE
BADHAMA TUJ NAJAR AAVE TO SHU KARU
tara matein kai lakhu che
ke
"je aksharo kagaar upar lakhiya hata,
Ae lagni ne takne takya hata....
Te kafan kholi ek var joyu nahi...
Mein swas thoda sachvi ne rakhya hata...........!!!
be!maan mohabbat.....!!!
Sal!m.....!!!
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16th November 2004, 05:28 PM
WOW SAL!M......it's too good..
have aa lakhu chu... j mane bauj game chhe...
shayad tane pan gamse....
JIVAN MA AVI XANE TAME STHAN LAI BETHA,
ZINDGI BANI GAI XAN ANE TAME JIVAN THAI BETHA....
and candyboy....
kyu aapko mera ye andaz pasand nahi aaya? are meri humorous effect to kabhi khatam nahi hogi....
jankar khushi hui ki tumko mera likha pasand aaya...
bye......
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16th November 2004, 05:38 PM
qatra-e-ashq* bahate ishq main mile
sehra-e-gham** muskate ishq main mile
har dar pe thokare khayi is kadar humne
jhakam-e-dil khud jalate ishq main mile
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** registan gham ka
pinky ..
aapka isteqbaal karta hun .. mere is parivar main... chand alfaz aapne likhe par khayalaton ne fiza rageen banayi... meri daad teh dil se kabool kare ... aapki roshni main yahi likh paya ...
khaksar
kunal
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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thnks -
16th November 2004, 11:04 PM
p!nk yar tane gaimi...........thnks
Biju shayri mein khas "tara mate" lakhi hati kadach aavu bane
toh dhyan rakhjo ..........!!!
tari shayri ma pan thoda jor thi pan dhima jatka aapi jai che...!!!
be!maan mohabbat.....!!!
Sal!m.....!!!
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17th November 2004, 11:52 AM
Hi Pinky Ji,
Are aap ka andaaz to kaafi pasand aaya. Hum to bas yehi kehna chahte the ke abhi itni serious shayri likhna shiru kardi hai aur humorous se to bilkul hi gayab ho gayi hai. Hmmmm bas isliye socha ke....
Khair, likhte rahiye.
Luvs,
Salim
If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul
Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you.
We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly
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