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Smile nour-e-khuda - 15th July 2010, 05:32 PM
main tujhe khuda kahun ya kahun rab
jo tujhse manga hai maine paya vo sab
sar jhukaye aayi main fir se tere dwar
sheesh jhukaye khadi hun
karlo parnaam swikar
karke dukhon ka ant ab karwa apne deedar
teri sundar chavi dekhne ko man hai bekrar

jo bina vighan puran karen kaam
har kaam se pehle le unka naam
jo is jag k hain bharam mahesh
vo hain gauri putar bhagwaan ganesh

Natkhat hai vo,man hai chanchal
makhan churana hai jiska kaam
baja bansuri mohe sab ka man
krishan kanhaiya hai jiska naam...

jo karen dukho ka ant
den saath maa baap bankar
jo saath mere rahen hamesha
haan hain vo mere gauri shankar....

jo bigde banaye sab k kaam
jinke sevak hain hanuman
jag gaye unke hi gun gaan
vo hain mere bas sita raam...

If you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it, change your attitude......
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subha nalla it's such a beautiful lines with amezing feelings.....

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16th July 2010, 02:25 AM
So tochi thought's and amazing expression......... keep going on dude..... no more word's for you.........

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So tochi thought's and amazing expression......... keep going on dude..... no more word's for you.........
parwaas ji shukriya bt its not dude its dame........

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17th July 2010, 12:17 AM
Gazzal jee AadaaB!

Bahut hi achchi kavita likhi hai aapne........ bhakti bhav to samate nahi samaya hai lafzoN meiN....

Aapke is behtreen khayaaloN per dil se daad aur koshish jaari rakhiye..... aapke khayaal bahut khoob hai.......... aage bhi aisi achchi achchi kavitaoN se bazm ko roshan karti rahiye.......

Khush rahiye.......
Khuda Hafez......

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Gazzal jee AadaaB!

Bahut hi achchi kavita likhi hai aapne........ bhakti bhav to samate nahi samaya hai lafzoN meiN....

Aapke is behtreen khayaaloN per dil se daad aur koshish jaari rakhiye..... aapke khayaal bahut khoob hai.......... aage bhi aisi achchi achchi kavitaoN se bazm ko roshan karti rahiye.......

Khush rahiye.......
Khuda Hafez......

apka bhot bhot shukriya khawahish ji k apne meri kavita ko apna waqt daya or achi bhi lagi......

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mohtarma janaab ghazal jee ko shaad ka aadaab.. ye meri badkismati hai jo aapka likha AAJ padha.. kaash ki pahle nazar gai hoti aapki tahreer pe to kab ka main shaad ho chuka hota.. khair der se nazar gai par durust gai.. aapki likhai waqai kabile tareef hai.. alfaaz aur ehsaas dono pasand aaye aur aapke is kalaam me jis taarah se aapne hindi likhawat aur urdu tahreer ko mix kiya hai usme ruhani sukoon milta hai dil se daad pese khidmat hai is kudrati kalaam ke liye... likhti rahen.. khush rahen.. khayal rakhen
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mohtarma janaab ghazal jee ko shaad ka aadaab.. ye meri badkismati hai jo aapka likha AAJ padha.. kaash ki pahle nazar gai hoti aapki tahreer pe to kab ka main shaad ho chuka hota.. khair der se nazar gai par durust gai.. aapki likhai waqai kabile tareef hai.. alfaaz aur ehsaas dono pasand aaye aur aapke is kalaam me jis taarah se aapne hindi likhawat aur urdu tahreer ko mix kiya hai usme ruhani sukoon milta hai dil se daad pese khidmat hai is kudrati kalaam ke liye... likhti rahen.. khush rahen.. khayal rakhen
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27th August 2010, 08:37 AM
Nice Poetry........ehsaas bahut khoobsurat lage mujhe... dil se daad hazir hai... yunhi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath...



YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
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Nice Poetry........ehsaas bahut khoobsurat lage mujhe... dil se daad hazir hai... yunhi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen...

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bahut pyara likha hai aapne ..............
   
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bahut pyara likha hai aapne ..............

thanks ashu ji.....bhot acha laga k apko hmari rachna pasand aayi...........god bless uh.............

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24th September 2010, 01:01 PM
behad khubsoorat likhkha hai aapne.
thanks for sharing

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inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii

lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste
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ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa
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ghazal ji bahut hi acchi kavita likhi hai aapne dil ko choo gai yun hi likhte rahiye. bahut shubkamnayen.

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thanxxx very much aarya ji.......khushi hai k u lykd it.............

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Ms gazzal Sahiba!
Aap ne apne dili jazbaat-o-ehsaasaat ki achchhi tarjumaani ki hai apne is qeemti takhleeq mein, paRhkar kaafi mehzooz hua. Dili daad qubul kijiye aur apne afkaaroN se isi tarah nawaazti rahiye.

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Ms gazzal Sahiba!
Aap ne apne dili jazbaat-o-ehsaasaat ki achchhi tarjumaani ki hai apne is qeemti takhleeq mein, paRhkar kaafi mehzooz hua. Dili daad qubul kijiye aur apne afkaaroN se isi tarah nawaazti rahiye.

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main tujhe khuda kahun ya kahun rab
jo tujhse manga hai maine paya vo sab
sar jhukaye aayi main fir se tere dwar
sheesh jhukaye khadi hun
karlo parnaam swikar
karke dukhon ka ant ab karwa apne deedar
teri sundar chavi dekhne ko man hai bekrar

jo bina vighan puran karen kaam
har kaam se pehle le unka naam
jo is jag k hain bharam mahesh
vo hain gauri putar bhagwaan ganesh

Natkhat hai vo,man hai chanchal
makhan churana hai jiska kaam
baja bansuri mohe sab ka man
krishan kanhaiya hai jiska naam...

jo karen dukho ka ant
den saath maa baap bankar
jo saath mere rahen hamesha
haan hain vo mere gauri shankar....

jo bigde banaye sab k kaam
jinke sevak hain hanuman
jag gaye unke hi gun gaan
vo hain mere bas sita raam...

bahut khoob..................................

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