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Love Ajab Paagal Si Ladki Hai - 19th September 2008, 08:18 AM
Ajab pagal si ladki hay
kabhi kabhi mujhe puchhati hai
mujhe tum yaad karte ho
tumhe main yaad aati hu
meri baate satati hai
tumhari ninde udati hai
tumhari aankhe bhar aati hai
jab main online nahi aati hu tab
online pe aaj bhi intezaar karte ho
kisi khamosh raste se koi aawaz aati hai
titharti sard raato me
tum ab bhi chhat pe jate ho
falak ke sab sitaro ko
meri baatein sunate ho
kitabo se tumhare ishq me koi kami aai
ya meri yaad ki shiddat se
aankho me koi nami aai
ajab pagal si ladki hai
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19th September 2008, 08:22 AM
nice krenil.................... ok bye


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19th September 2008, 08:24 AM
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bohut acha likha hai apne krenil aisay hi likhte rahiye.
ok bye tc
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nice krenil.................... ok bye



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bohut acha likha hai apne krenil aisay hi likhte rahiye.
ok bye tc
ALLAH HAFIZ




shukhriya muskaan ji ki aapko ye pasand aaya aur aap jaise dosto ka saath hoga to aise hi likhte rahenge
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19th September 2008, 02:07 PM
Karnail Paa jee.....namaskaar
vaise yeh paagal se ladki hai kauN, jo karnail paa jee se aise ulte-pulte sawaal karti hai....

par hume uske sawaal pasand aaye aur us par aapki jujlahat bhi hume pasand aaye...

kush rahiye
aapki diiii

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Karnail Paa jee.....namaskaar
vaise yeh paagal se ladki hai kauN, jo karnail paa jee se aise ulte-pulte sawaal karti hai....

par hume uske sawaal pasand aaye aur us par aapki jujlahat bhi hume pasand aaye...

kush rahiye
aapki diiii




thank u very much di mujhe bahot hi achha laga aapka reply dekhkar aur achha laga jankar ki aapko ye pasand aaya bas aage bhi aise hi saath dete rahena apne is paaji ka
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22nd September 2008, 07:42 PM
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Ajab pagal si ladki hay
kabhi kabhi mujhe puchhati hai
mujhe tum yaad karte ho
tumhe main yaad aati hu
meri baate satati hai
tumhari ninde udati hai
tumhari aankhe bhar aati hai
jab main online nahi aati hu tab
online pe aaj bhi intezaar karte ho
kisi khamosh raste se koi aawaz aati hai
titharti sard raato me
tum ab bhi chhat pe jate ho
falak ke sab sitaro ko
meri baatein sunate ho
kitabo se tumhare ishq me koi kami aai
ya meri yaad ki shiddat se
aankho me koi nami aai
ajab pagal si ladki hai

Bahot khoob Krenil ji ....achha laga aapke eheshash padh ke ....hi re kitna soch te ho aap ..... Aise yeh larki hai koun..Hume bhi batao yaar ...doston se koi v baat chhupana nehin chahiye ........

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22nd September 2008, 07:46 PM
gajab,khuub ahsaas rahe apke,asan aur khuubsurat lahja,share karte rahe,sukriya

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wonderful poem!!mujhe to bhai ye bahut pasand aayee!!aise hi likhte raho bhai!!
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23rd September 2008, 03:38 PM
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hey nice yr..............cary on like dis itself..........





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Bahot khoob Krenil ji ....achha laga aapke eheshash padh ke ....hi re kitna soch te ho aap ..... Aise yeh larki hai koun..Hume bhi batao yaar ...doston se koi v baat chhupana nehin chahiye ........

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ji shukhriya diya ji aapne hamari ye gazal padhi aur pasand bhi kiya aur ye ladki to abhi sirf khayalo me hai jis din milegi dosto ko hi bataunga aise hi saath dete rahiye
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khamoshi - 23rd September 2008, 03:41 PM
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Ajab pagal si ladki hay
kabhi kabhi mujhe puchhati hai
mujhe tum yaad karte ho
tumhe main yaad aati hu
meri baate satati hai
tumhari ninde udati hai
tumhari aankhe bhar aati hai
jab main online nahi aati hu tab
online pe aaj bhi intezaar karte ho
kisi khamosh raste se koi aawaz aati hai
titharti sard raato me
tum ab bhi chhat pe jate ho
falak ke sab sitaro ko
meri baatein sunate ho
kitabo se tumhare ishq me koi kami aai
ya meri yaad ki shiddat se
aankho me koi nami aai
ajab pagal si ladki hai
BHUT KHUB LIKH HAI AAPNE AAPNE AAHASAS KO SHABD NAHI KUCH KAHANE KE LIYE
AASHA HAI AAGE AOUR BHI ACHHE AAHASAS MILIGE .DUA
KARTE WO LADKI AAPKO JARUR MILE JO AAP SE YE SAWAL KARTI HAI.

KOUN KAHATA HAIK HAMOSHI KHAMOSH RAHATI HAI ,JARA KHAMOSHI KO KHAMOSH HOKE SUNO,SHAYAD KHAMOSHI WO KAH DE JISKI AAP KO LAFJO ME TALASH HOTI HAI.
   
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wonderful poem!!mujhe to bhai ye bahut pasand aayee!!aise hi likhte raho bhai!!




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ravinder ji aapka shukhriya karte hai ki aapne hamari gazal ko padha aur pasand bhi kiya gujarish aapko nahi hum aapse karte hai ki bas aise hi saath dete rahena
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AASHA HAI AAGE AOUR BHI ACHHE AAHASAS MILIGE .DUA
KARTE WO LADKI AAPKO JARUR MILE JO AAP SE YE SAWAL KARTI HAI.

KOUN KAHATA HAIK HAMOSHI KHAMOSH RAHATI HAI ,JARA KHAMOSHI KO KHAMOSH HOKE SUNO,SHAYAD KHAMOSHI WO KAH DE JISKI AAP KO LAFJO ME TALASH HOTI HAI.





bahot shukhriya aapka shiv ji ki aapko hamare ye ahesas pasand aaye aur hamare liye dua bhi ki uske liye tahe dil se shukhriya karte hai waada karte hai aage isse bhi ahesas aapko padhne milenge bas aise hi saath dete rahena
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Ajab pagal si ladki hay
kabhi kabhi mujhe puchhati hai
mujhe tum yaad karte ho
tumhe main yaad aati hu
meri baate satati hai
tumhari ninde udati hai
tumhari aankhe bhar aati hai
jab main online nahi aati hu tab
online pe aaj bhi intezaar karte ho
kisi khamosh raste se koi aawaz aati hai
titharti sard raato me
tum ab bhi chhat pe jate ho
falak ke sab sitaro ko
meri baatein sunate ho
kitabo se tumhare ishq me koi kami aai
ya meri yaad ki shiddat se
aankho me koi nami aai
ajab pagal si ladki hai

krenil aap ki ye post sab ko pasnd aai he,
jara sochiye jis ladki ke liye ye post aapne
likhi he use kitani pasnd aai hogi..
me bahut khus hu ki ye aap ki post sab ko bahut
hi pasnd aai..
kaas muje bhi aap ki tarh likh na aata
to me jarur aap k liye kuch aisa hi likh ti
krenil u r the best..
keep it up..

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Mujse Itana rista banaye rakhna
Mera Pyaar dil mai basaye rakhna..
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krenil aap ki ye post sab ko pasnd aai he,
jara sochiye jis ladki ke liye ye post aapne
likhi he use kitani pasnd aai hogi..
me bahut khus hu ki ye aap ki post sab ko bahut
hi pasnd aai..
kaas muje bhi aap ki tarh likh na aata
to me jarur aap k liye kuch aisa hi likh ti
krenil u r the best..
keep it up..



aapka tahe dil se shukhriya karte hai anshika ji ki aapne time nikal ke hamari is koshish ko padha aur koi baat nahi aap bhi hamari tarah achhi gazal likhoge koshish karte rahena aur aise hi saath dete rahena
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Arey bohot achha likha hai krenil ji aapne to par itna sab puch rahe hai to bata hi do ki yeah itni pagal si ladki hai kon...............................................

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Arey bohot achha likha hai krenil ji aapne to par itna sab puch rahe hai to bata hi do ki yeah itni pagal si ladki hai kon...............................................





sukhriya ada karte hai aapka pooja ji ki aapko ye pasand aaya bas aap jaise dosto ki maherbani hai ki hum aisa likha sakte hai aur ha sab ke puchhane par maine ek hi jawab diya wo ye hai ki abhi wo ladki sirf khayalo me hai real me mili hi nahi aise hi saath dete rahena
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