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24th February 2006, 08:03 AM
Tere joothe sawaalon ka jawaab nahi dena
Rehne de teri wafaaon ka hisaab nahi karna
Khafaa hun tujhse magar itnii hi iltezaa hain
Gairon se to milkar mujh pe waar nahi karna
Zidd karta hain dil-e-naadan milne ki tujh ko
Magar aankhon ko teraa deedaar nahi karna
Jo tum bhi naa samjhe vo baat samjhaate ho
Ab aaise to waqt kisii ka barbaad nahi karna
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24th February 2006, 08:08 AM
Zidd karta hain dil-e-naadan milne ki tujh ko
Magar aankhon ko teraa deedaar nahi karna
ye sher itna bara kaha tum ne ko bas dil ko choo jaye tum kam likhtee ho par bhaw bahut hain tum main tumhree zimmedaree ahi aur likho bahut sa likho intazar hai
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mere ashar ko mahoob samjh ke chhoomte the jo
kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai
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Re: jawaab nahi dena. -
24th February 2006, 08:43 AM
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Tere joothe sawaalon ka jawaab nahi dena
Rehne de teri wafaaon ka hisaab nahi karna
Khafaa hun tujhse magar itnii hi iltezaa hain
Gairon se to milkar mujh pe waar nahi karna
Zidd karta hain dil-e-naadan milne ki tujh ko
Magar aankhon ko teraa deedaar nahi karna
Jo tum bhi naa samjhe vo baat
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Dear Parul Kaafi dino baad shayad tumne likha aur maine tumhe padha hai.Acha laga tumhe padhkar.."Wo dard ab tak dil mein baki hai,Teri yaadein meri tanhaiyo ki saathi hai,Khud to door ho In yaado ko mujhse door naa karna,In k sahare hi to zindgi baki hai" Bohat acha likha hai tumne..Likhi raha karo..Hamein padhne ko to mile..Take care Diggaj
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24th February 2006, 09:09 AM
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Tere joothe sawaalon ka jawaab nahi dena
Rehne de teri wafaaon ka hisaab nahi karna
Khafaa hun tujhse magar itnii hi iltezaa hain
Gairon se to milkar mujh pe waar nahi karna
Zidd karta hain dil-e-naadan milne ki tujh ko
Magar aankhon ko teraa deedaar nahi karna
Jo tum bhi naa samjhe vo baat samjhaate ho
Ab aaise to waqt kisii ka barbaad nahi karna
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my dearest parul,
aaj bahut arse baad tumhein yahan kuch post karte dekha. acha laga. but ur words are killing me.its a painful thought which is just piercing me deep inside as i can read u very very well. dil ke hatthon insaan kitna majboor ho jata hai. neways kep penning down ur thoughts ahead too. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters n may smiles are bestowed in every moment of ur life. luv u buddy.
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Re: jawaab nahi dena. -
24th February 2006, 01:24 PM
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Tere joothe sawaalon ka jawaab nahi dena
Rehne de teri wafaaon ka hisaab nahi karna
Khafaa hun tujhse magar itnii hi iltezaa hain
Gairon se to milkar mujh pe waar nahi karna
Zidd karta hain dil-e-naadan milne ki tujh ko
Magar aankhon ko teraa deedaar nahi karna
Jo tum bhi naa samjhe vo baat samjhaate ho
Ab aaise to waqt kisii ka barbaad nahi karna
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bahaut khoob parul...kaafi time baad tumne kuch likkha hai..accha laga.
bilkul mere dil ki baat kehdi hai tumne in 2 sheron mein..
Tere joothe sawaalon ka jawaab nahi dena
Rehne de teri wafaaon ka hisaab nahi karna
Khafaa hun tujhse magar itnii hi iltejaa hain
Gairon se to milkar mujh pe waar nahi karna
yuhin likhti raho.
"Roz Kii Taraah Aaj Bhii Taare
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN
Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN
Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN."
**~*FaRhAnA*~**
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24th February 2006, 03:26 PM
Khafaa hun tujhse magar itnii hi iltezaa hain
Gairon se to milkar mujh pe waar nahi karna
Kya baat kahi hai Parul jee aap ne... Jabardast...
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24th February 2006, 03:57 PM
Tere joothe sawaalon ka jawaab nahi dena
Rehne de teri wafaaon ka hisaab nahi karna
Khafaa hun tujhse magar itnii hi iltezaa hain
Gairon se to milkar mujh pe waar nahi karna
Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhh...!
Zidd karta hain dil-e-naadan milne ki tujh ko
Magar aankhon ko teraa deedaar nahi karna
Jo tum bhi naa samjhe vo baat samjhaate ho
Ab aaise to waqt kisii ka barbaad nahi karna
waaah waaahhh...!
Oye Hoye,
shu baat chhe dikri... Don talking about wafaa and bewafaayi... haan baba.. i know... Don ka dil hota hai... is Don ka to hai... kitna accha likha hai...s sach me its very beautifull...agar pehli line me bhi "Karna" Radeef hota to ek khoobsurat ghazal ban jaati.... but whatever comes from heart is beautiful...I loved it....
bass ab likhti raho yunhi...TC
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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24th February 2006, 04:31 PM
dear parul hope u r fine,aaj aapko padha to bahut pasand aaya aapka kalaam yakeen maniye bahot sukoon mila.plz guzarish hai yoon hi likhte rahiega.
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bahot khub -
24th February 2006, 04:46 PM
PARUL
SIMPEL & SWEET.BAHOT ACHA LAGA, KITNI SADGI SE KAHA HAI.
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24th February 2006, 08:32 PM
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Zidd karta hain dil-e-naadan milne ki tujh ko
Magar aankhon ko teraa deedaar nahi karna
ye sher itna bara kaha tum ne ko bas dil ko choo jaye tum kam likhtee ho par bhaw bahut hain tum main tumhree zimmedaree ahi aur likho bahut sa likho intazar hai
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Anil ji,
Aap aaye aur apni raaye di iss ke liye bahut bahut shukriya. aap ko pasand aaya yeh jaan kar bahut achha laga. aap bhi likhte rahiyega aur apna khyaal bhi rakhna....
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24th February 2006, 08:33 PM
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Dear Parul Kaafi dino baad shayad tumne likha aur maine tumhe padha hai.Acha laga tumhe padhkar.."Wo dard ab tak dil mein baki hai,Teri yaadein meri tanhaiyo ki saathi hai,Khud to door ho In yaado ko mujhse door naa karna,In k sahare hi to zindgi baki hai" Bohat acha likha hai tumne..Likhi raha karo..Hamein padhne ko to mile..Take care Diggaj
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Dear diggaz,
Tumhara sher bhi bahut pasand aaya. tum bhi likhte rehna. take care!
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24th February 2006, 08:40 PM
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my dearest parul,
aaj bahut arse baad tumhein yahan kuch post karte dekha. acha laga. but ur words are killing me.its a painful thought which is just piercing me deep inside as i can read u very very well. dil ke hatthon insaan kitna majboor ho jata hai. neways kep penning down ur thoughts ahead too. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters n may smiles are bestowed in every moment of ur life. luv u buddy.
with luv
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Jasoooooooo dear,
I can understand... I know everything but......................... anyways, I will not hurt anyone dear, you know that. sorry for these words. I am waiting for to read something from you. do take good care of yourself dear and keep in touch. Have a nice day...
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bahaut khoob parul...kaafi time baad tumne kuch likkha hai..accha laga.
bilkul mere dil ki baat kehdi hai tumne in 2 sheron mein..
Tere joothe sawaalon ka jawaab nahi dena
Rehne de teri wafaaon ka hisaab nahi karna
Khafaa hun tujhse magar itnii hi iltejaa hain
Gairon se to milkar mujh pe waar nahi karna
yuhin likhti raho.
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Hey faru.....
tumhe achha laga jaan ke mujhe bhi achha laga. hmmmm, tumhari baat meine keh di yeh to aur bhi achhi baat hain. take care!
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25th February 2006, 07:05 AM
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Khafaa hun tujhse magar itnii hi iltezaa hain
Gairon se to milkar mujh pe waar nahi karna
Kya baat kahi hai Parul jee aap ne... Jabardast...
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hey mayank........
why you calling me parul jee Anyways, thanks for reading dear.
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25th February 2006, 07:10 AM
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Oye Hoye,
shu baat chhe dikri... Don talking about wafaa and bewafaayi... haan baba.. i know... Don ka dil hota hai... is Don ka to hai... kitna accha likha hai...s sach me its very beautifull...agar pehli line me bhi "Karna" Radeef hota to ek khoobsurat ghazal ban jaati.... but whatever comes from heart is beautiful...I loved it....
bass ab likhti raho yunhi...TC
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Hey pulkit.... kem chho?
he he he. you made me laugh...yeah, yeah whatever you say...lol... anyways, thanks for comments. and I will try to watch on radeef next time thanks for instruction dear...take care!
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25th February 2006, 08:46 AM
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Tere joothe sawaalon ka jawaab nahi dena
Rehne de teri wafaaon ka hisaab nahi karna
Khafaa hun tujhse magar itnii hi iltezaa hain
Gairon se to milkar mujh pe waar nahi karna
Zidd karta hain dil-e-naadan milne ki tujh ko
Magar aankhon ko teraa deedaar nahi karna
Jo tum bhi naa samjhe vo baat samjhaate ho
Ab aaise to waqt kisii ka barbaad nahi karna
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priy parul,
tumhare khayal fir shabdo mai paaye ...
Jo tum bhi naa samjhe vo baat samjhaate ho
Ab aaise to waqt kisii ka barbaad nahi karna
kaash sab yah kah paate ...
achha laga ... kahte aana hi chhaiye ... waqt kaha aa kar barbaad hone lagta hai yah samajne lage gar insaan to sahi raste par chlane ke moad bhi nazar aane lagenge ..
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25th February 2006, 06:03 PM
Jo tum bhi naa samjhe vo baat samjhaate ho
Ab aaise to waqt kisii ka barbaad nahi karna
Hello Parul
Bahut dinon baad tumhari Rachna padhi....kuch alag si hay yeh Rachna....I liked it....mere daad kabul karna......yuun hi likhti raho...
Take Care
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25th February 2006, 06:50 PM
parul
bhaut achha laga , aapko padhna
aise hi likhte rahiyeTere joothe sawaalon ka jawaab nahi dena
Rehne de teri wafaaon ka hisaab nahi karna
Khafaa hun tujhse magar itnii hi iltezaa hain
Gairon se to milkar mujh pe waar nahi karna
Zidd karta hain dil-e-naadan milne ki tujh ko
Magar aankhon ko teraa deedaar nahi karna
Jo tum bhi naa samjhe vo baat samjhaate ho
Ab aaise to waqt kisii ka barbaad nahi karna
mujhe bhaut psand aaya ye
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26th February 2006, 07:33 AM
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dear parul hope u r fine,aaj aapko padha to bahut pasand aaya aapka kalaam yakeen maniye bahot sukoon mila.plz guzarish hai yoon hi likhte rahiega.
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Samir,
I don't write as beautiful as you do. but nice to know you like this one...take care!
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26th February 2006, 07:34 AM
Meeta dd,
tame maari post par aavya ane aa rachna vaanchi to ghanu saaru laagyu... hope everything is fine at your end. take care!
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priy parul,
tumhare khayal fir shabdo mai paaye ...
Jo tum bhi naa samjhe vo baat samjhaate ho
Ab aaise to waqt kisii ka barbaad nahi karna
kaash sab yah kah paate ...
achha laga ... kahte aana hi chhaiye ... waqt kaha aa kar barbaad hone lagta hai yah samajne lage gar insaan to sahi raste par chlane ke moad bhi nazar aane lagenge ..
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dear meena dd,
Tame saachu kaho chho... aa rachna ne vaanchva badal ghano aabhaar... take care
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26th February 2006, 07:45 AM
Sukanya ji,
Aap ko yaha dekh ke bahut achha laga... aapne isse parha aur pasand kiya iss ke liye bahut bahut shukriya...
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26th February 2006, 07:55 AM
Shaddha ji
Aap yaha aaye jaan ke achha alga, pasand karne ke liye shukriya...
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26th February 2006, 08:13 PM
jawab kaise nahi de madam yeh to jawab dene like shayri hai....................aacha likha hai......................yuhi likti rehna...............mere pass bhi ek shayri hai jo tumhari thought se milta hai i like to share with u here it is................hope u like it here it is.........
khayi kasam hai humne aab mu na kholenge
dil se hume bhula do kuch na tumhe kahenge
aarman bhi kuchal do khamosh hum rahenge
darde majhar par yeh diya fir bhi jalega
humne diya hai jo tumko wo pyar tha hamara
humse juda na honge ikrar tha tumhara
wada tumne bhulaya to chen nahi milega
jalte rahenge hum yu tum dhekti rahogi
rishtayi kya hai inse duniya tum kahogi
tuta hai pyar mera tujko duva hi dega
tu chod kar chali ja duniya ki lakh mere
sapno me dekh lunga surat me firse teri
khandhar me pyar ke es phir bhi diya jalega
jakho na ankh me tum ansu waha nahi hai
tadpe hai raat deen hum peeda waha nahi hai
seene me dard hai jo ankhon me kya milega...........
bye and take care always
passionate.............
chand ho pari ho ya koi afshara
pyar kare jo hume sone sa khara
jiski ankhon me ho pyar hi pyar bhara
me uska "veer" wo meri "zarra"
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26th February 2006, 09:26 PM
Dear passionate,
How are you? It's so nice to see you here buddy. I notice that your writting is getting better. thanks for sharing wonderful creation here. aur iss rachna ko parhne ke liye aur pasand karne ke liye shukriya. tum bhi likhte rehna aur apna khyaal bhi rakhna.
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21st February 2010, 02:21 AM
Dear Parul ...
yeh ghazal meri fav rahegii ...har sher dil mein sama gaya .....
likhti rahoo
khush rahoo
duaon ke saath
aapki
Mandy
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21st February 2010, 08:59 AM
Khafaa hun tujhse magar itnii hi iltezaa hain
Gairon se to milkar mujh pe waar nahi karna
mujhe aapka yeh khayal bahut pasand aaya......bahut khub parul ji....
aapko abhi tak jitna padha hai......bahut acha likhti rahi hai....phir se likhna shuru kariya na....aap bahut achha likhti hai.....
dil se daad
khush rahen...
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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23rd February 2010, 11:21 AM
Khafaa hun tujhse magar itnii hi iltezaa hain
Gairon se to milkar mujh pe waar nahi karna
very nice parul ji..
keep writing...
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23rd February 2010, 03:32 PM
Hi parul ji
bahut gussa bahut krodh hai har lafz mai
lekin utna hi masoomiyat se byaan bhii kiya hai
main ise nafrat samjhu ya mohabbat yahi nahi samjh aa raha hai
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