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jawaab nahi dena. - 24th February 2006, 08:03 AM

Tere joothe sawaalon ka jawaab nahi dena
Rehne de teri wafaaon ka hisaab nahi karna

Khafaa hun tujhse magar itnii hi iltezaa hain
Gairon se to milkar mujh pe waar nahi karna

Zidd karta hain dil-e-naadan milne ki tujh ko
Magar aankhon ko teraa deedaar nahi karna

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bahut khoob - 24th February 2006, 08:08 AM

Zidd karta hain dil-e-naadan milne ki tujh ko
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ye sher itna bara kaha tum ne ko bas dil ko choo jaye tum kam likhtee ho par bhaw bahut hain tum main tumhree zimmedaree ahi aur likho bahut sa likho intazar hai
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Re: jawaab nahi dena. - 24th February 2006, 08:43 AM

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Tere joothe sawaalon ka jawaab nahi dena
Rehne de teri wafaaon ka hisaab nahi karna

Khafaa hun tujhse magar itnii hi iltezaa hain
Gairon se to milkar mujh pe waar nahi karna

Zidd karta hain dil-e-naadan milne ki tujh ko
Magar aankhon ko teraa deedaar nahi karna

Jo tum bhi naa samjhe vo baat
Dear Parul Kaafi dino baad shayad tumne likha aur maine tumhe padha hai.Acha laga tumhe padhkar.."Wo dard ab tak dil mein baki hai,Teri yaadein meri tanhaiyo ki saathi hai,Khud to door ho In yaado ko mujhse door naa karna,In k sahare hi to zindgi baki hai" Bohat acha likha hai tumne..Likhi raha karo..Hamein padhne ko to mile..Take care Diggaj
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Re: jawaab nahi dena. - 24th February 2006, 09:09 AM

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Tere joothe sawaalon ka jawaab nahi dena
Rehne de teri wafaaon ka hisaab nahi karna

Khafaa hun tujhse magar itnii hi iltezaa hain
Gairon se to milkar mujh pe waar nahi karna

Zidd karta hain dil-e-naadan milne ki tujh ko
Magar aankhon ko teraa deedaar nahi karna

Jo tum bhi naa samjhe vo baat samjhaate ho
Ab aaise to waqt kisii ka barbaad nahi karna
my dearest parul,
aaj bahut arse baad tumhein yahan kuch post karte dekha. acha laga. but ur words are killing me.its a painful thought which is just piercing me deep inside as i can read u very very well. dil ke hatthon insaan kitna majboor ho jata hai. neways kep penning down ur thoughts ahead too. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters n may smiles are bestowed in every moment of ur life. luv u buddy.
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Re: jawaab nahi dena. - 24th February 2006, 01:24 PM

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Tere joothe sawaalon ka jawaab nahi dena
Rehne de teri wafaaon ka hisaab nahi karna

Khafaa hun tujhse magar itnii hi iltezaa hain
Gairon se to milkar mujh pe waar nahi karna

Zidd karta hain dil-e-naadan milne ki tujh ko
Magar aankhon ko teraa deedaar nahi karna

Jo tum bhi naa samjhe vo baat samjhaate ho
Ab aaise to waqt kisii ka barbaad nahi karna
bahaut khoob parul...kaafi time baad tumne kuch likkha hai..accha laga.
bilkul mere dil ki baat kehdi hai tumne in 2 sheron mein..

Tere joothe sawaalon ka jawaab nahi dena
Rehne de teri wafaaon ka hisaab nahi karna

Khafaa hun tujhse magar itnii hi iltejaa hain
Gairon se to milkar mujh pe waar nahi karna

yuhin likhti raho.


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24th February 2006, 03:26 PM

Khafaa hun tujhse magar itnii hi iltezaa hain
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Kya baat kahi hai Parul jee aap ne... Jabardast...

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Tere joothe sawaalon ka jawaab nahi dena
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Khafaa hun tujhse magar itnii hi iltezaa hain
Gairon se to milkar mujh pe waar nahi karna

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Jo tum bhi naa samjhe vo baat samjhaate ho
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waaah waaahhh...!

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shu baat chhe dikri... Don talking about wafaa and bewafaayi... haan baba.. i know... Don ka dil hota hai... is Don ka to hai... kitna accha likha hai...s sach me its very beautifull...agar pehli line me bhi "Karna" Radeef hota to ek khoobsurat ghazal ban jaati.... but whatever comes from heart is beautiful...I loved it....

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dear parul hope u r fine,aaj aapko padha to bahut pasand aaya aapka kalaam yakeen maniye bahot sukoon mila.plz guzarish hai yoon hi likhte rahiega.
   
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Re: bahut khoob - 24th February 2006, 08:32 PM

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ye sher itna bara kaha tum ne ko bas dil ko choo jaye tum kam likhtee ho par bhaw bahut hain tum main tumhree zimmedaree ahi aur likho bahut sa likho intazar hai
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Re: Re: jawaab nahi dena. - 24th February 2006, 08:33 PM

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Dear Parul Kaafi dino baad shayad tumne likha aur maine tumhe padha hai.Acha laga tumhe padhkar.."Wo dard ab tak dil mein baki hai,Teri yaadein meri tanhaiyo ki saathi hai,Khud to door ho In yaado ko mujhse door naa karna,In k sahare hi to zindgi baki hai" Bohat acha likha hai tumne..Likhi raha karo..Hamein padhne ko to mile..Take care Diggaj
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Re: Re: jawaab nahi dena. - 24th February 2006, 08:40 PM

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aaj bahut arse baad tumhein yahan kuch post karte dekha. acha laga. but ur words are killing me.its a painful thought which is just piercing me deep inside as i can read u very very well. dil ke hatthon insaan kitna majboor ho jata hai. neways kep penning down ur thoughts ahead too. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters n may smiles are bestowed in every moment of ur life. luv u buddy.
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Re: Re: jawaab nahi dena. - 25th February 2006, 07:04 AM

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bahaut khoob parul...kaafi time baad tumne kuch likkha hai..accha laga.
bilkul mere dil ki baat kehdi hai tumne in 2 sheron mein..

Tere joothe sawaalon ka jawaab nahi dena
Rehne de teri wafaaon ka hisaab nahi karna

Khafaa hun tujhse magar itnii hi iltejaa hain
Gairon se to milkar mujh pe waar nahi karna

yuhin likhti raho.
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tumhe achha laga jaan ke mujhe bhi achha laga. hmmmm, tumhari baat meine keh di yeh to aur bhi achhi baat hain. take care!
   
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25th February 2006, 07:05 AM

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Kya baat kahi hai Parul jee aap ne... Jabardast...

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Oye Hoye,

shu baat chhe dikri... Don talking about wafaa and bewafaayi... haan baba.. i know... Don ka dil hota hai... is Don ka to hai... kitna accha likha hai...s sach me its very beautifull...agar pehli line me bhi "Karna" Radeef hota to ek khoobsurat ghazal ban jaati.... but whatever comes from heart is beautiful...I loved it....

bass ab likhti raho yunhi...TC
Hey pulkit.... kem chho?

he he he. you made me laugh...yeah, yeah whatever you say...lol... anyways, thanks for comments. and I will try to watch on radeef next time thanks for instruction dear...take care!
   
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Re: jawaab nahi dena. - 25th February 2006, 08:46 AM

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Tere joothe sawaalon ka jawaab nahi dena
Rehne de teri wafaaon ka hisaab nahi karna

Khafaa hun tujhse magar itnii hi iltezaa hain
Gairon se to milkar mujh pe waar nahi karna

Zidd karta hain dil-e-naadan milne ki tujh ko
Magar aankhon ko teraa deedaar nahi karna

Jo tum bhi naa samjhe vo baat samjhaate ho
Ab aaise to waqt kisii ka barbaad nahi karna


priy parul,

tumhare khayal fir shabdo mai paaye ...

Jo tum bhi naa samjhe vo baat samjhaate ho
Ab aaise to waqt kisii ka barbaad nahi karna

kaash sab yah kah paate ...
achha laga ... kahte aana hi chhaiye ... waqt kaha aa kar barbaad hone lagta hai yah samajne lage gar insaan to sahi raste par chlane ke moad bhi nazar aane lagenge ..

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25th February 2006, 06:03 PM

Jo tum bhi naa samjhe vo baat samjhaate ho
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Bahut dinon baad tumhari Rachna padhi....kuch alag si hay yeh Rachna....I liked it....mere daad kabul karna......yuun hi likhti raho...

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25th February 2006, 06:50 PM

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bhaut achha laga , aapko padhna

aise hi likhte rahiyeTere joothe sawaalon ka jawaab nahi dena
Rehne de teri wafaaon ka hisaab nahi karna

Khafaa hun tujhse magar itnii hi iltezaa hain
Gairon se to milkar mujh pe waar nahi karna

Zidd karta hain dil-e-naadan milne ki tujh ko
Magar aankhon ko teraa deedaar nahi karna

Jo tum bhi naa samjhe vo baat samjhaate ho
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Re: Re: jawaab nahi dena. - 26th February 2006, 07:43 AM

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priy parul,

tumhare khayal fir shabdo mai paaye ...

Jo tum bhi naa samjhe vo baat samjhaate ho
Ab aaise to waqt kisii ka barbaad nahi karna

kaash sab yah kah paate ...
achha laga ... kahte aana hi chhaiye ... waqt kaha aa kar barbaad hone lagta hai yah samajne lage gar insaan to sahi raste par chlane ke moad bhi nazar aane lagenge ..

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26th February 2006, 07:45 AM

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Re: jawaab nahi dena. - 26th February 2006, 08:13 PM

jawab kaise nahi de madam yeh to jawab dene like shayri hai....................aacha likha hai......................yuhi likti rehna...............mere pass bhi ek shayri hai jo tumhari thought se milta hai i like to share with u here it is................hope u like it here it is.........

khayi kasam hai humne aab mu na kholenge

dil se hume bhula do kuch na tumhe kahenge
aarman bhi kuchal do khamosh hum rahenge
darde majhar par yeh diya fir bhi jalega

humne diya hai jo tumko wo pyar tha hamara
humse juda na honge ikrar tha tumhara
wada tumne bhulaya to chen nahi milega

jalte rahenge hum yu tum dhekti rahogi
rishtayi kya hai inse duniya tum kahogi
tuta hai pyar mera tujko duva hi dega

tu chod kar chali ja duniya ki lakh mere
sapno me dekh lunga surat me firse teri
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jakho na ankh me tum ansu waha nahi hai
tadpe hai raat deen hum peeda waha nahi hai
seene me dard hai jo ankhon me kya milega...........

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26th February 2006, 09:26 PM

Dear passionate,

How are you? It's so nice to see you here buddy. I notice that your writting is getting better. thanks for sharing wonderful creation here. aur iss rachna ko parhne ke liye aur pasand karne ke liye shukriya. tum bhi likhte rehna aur apna khyaal bhi rakhna.
   
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21st February 2010, 02:21 AM

Dear Parul ...

yeh ghazal meri fav rahegii ...har sher dil mein sama gaya .....

likhti rahoo

khush rahoo

duaon ke saath

aapki

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21st February 2010, 08:59 AM

Khafaa hun tujhse magar itnii hi iltezaa hain
Gairon se to milkar mujh pe waar nahi karna


mujhe aapka yeh khayal bahut pasand aaya......bahut khub parul ji....

aapko abhi tak jitna padha hai......bahut acha likhti rahi hai....phir se likhna shuru kariya na....aap bahut achha likhti hai.....

dil se daad

khush rahen...
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....






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Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
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23rd February 2010, 11:21 AM

Khafaa hun tujhse magar itnii hi iltezaa hain
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very nice parul ji..
keep writing...
   
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23rd February 2010, 03:32 PM

Hi parul ji
bahut gussa bahut krodh hai har lafz mai
lekin utna hi masoomiyat se byaan bhii kiya hai

main ise nafrat samjhu ya mohabbat yahi nahi samjh aa raha hai

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