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Mat samajh maiN koi gunaah kar rahi hoon - 24th March 2009, 03:11 PM
Namaskaar Dosto.N

Fir ek baar aapke samne ek chhoti si koshish lekar aayi hoon..... aap ki raa'ye ka Intezaar rahega

Mat samajh maiN koi gunaah kar rahi hoon
Bas tujhi se pyaar bepanaah kar rahi hoon

tere Ishq mein jala kar apna dil o zalim,
maiN raushan chiraaG-e-raah kar rahi hoon

teri chahat ke koi aasaar aate nahi nazar
nafrato.N se teri nibhaah kar rahi hoon

Taa-umr intezaar se pyaar hoga nahi hasil
yahi soch kar khud ko tabaah kar rahi hoon

woh yeh samaj baithe, likhti hoon “ek ghazal”
Main to sirf fard-e-amal siyaah kar rahi hoon

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24th March 2009, 04:47 PM
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MaiN aksar kehta tha ... ki khyaal to wahi hote bas unhe dekhne ke nazariye .. bayan karne ka tareeka aledah kiya jaa sakta hai .. aur yahi shayad shayar kar sakta hai .. kyuNki dard to ghoom fir ke Dard hi hai .. bas 4 logoN ko 4 alag tareekoN se milta hai ..

aapki ghazal ki baat kareN .. to khyaal dil pe khaas asar nahi chor paaye.. kyuNki par alfaazoN ko chunne.. aur unke bayani ke andaaz dil pe shayrana asar gehrayi tak chorte hai .. aur khyaal chahe koi bhi ho .. unhe aledah aur naye tareeke maiN lapet ke rakhna hi shayri hai .... jo ek insaan ko shayar banati hai .. mujhe pasand aayi aapki rachna ...

apna khyaal rakh ke aise hi likhte rahiye .. aur ye sab meri jaati raa'ii hai .. aapko poora haq hai isse ittefaaq rakheN ya nahi ... aur eri koi baat galat rahi ho to muafi ka adad talabgaar rahuNga ....

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24th March 2009, 06:33 PM
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Namaskaar Dosto.N

Fir ek baar aapke samne ek chhoti si koshish lekar aayi hoon..... aap ki raa'ye ka Intezaar rahega

Mat samajh maiN koi gunaah kar rahi hoon
Bas tujhi se pyaar bepanaah kar rahi hoon

tere Ishq mein jala kar apna dil o zalim,
maiN raushan chiraaG-e-raah kar rahi hoon

teri chahat ke koi aasaar aate nahi nazar
nafrato.N se teri nibhaah kar rahi hoon

Taa-umr intezaar se pyaar hoga nahi hasil
yahi soch kar khud ko tabaah kar rahi hoon

woh yeh samaj baithe, likhti hoon “ek ghazal”
Main to sirf fard-e-amal siyaah kar rahi hoon


wahhhhhhhhh PURVI diii......mind blowing....awesome...dil ko chhu gaye aapke ye ehsaas.....bahut khoob....yuhi likhte rahiyega....

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26th March 2009, 12:32 PM
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MaiN aksar kehta tha ... ki khyaal to wahi hote bas unhe dekhne ke nazariye .. bayan karne ka tareeka aledah kiya jaa sakta hai .. aur yahi shayad shayar kar sakta hai .. kyuNki dard to ghoom fir ke Dard hi hai .. bas 4 logoN ko 4 alag tareekoN se milta hai ..

aapki ghazal ki baat kareN .. to khyaal dil pe khaas asar nahi chor paaye.. kyuNki par alfaazoN ko chunne.. aur unke bayani ke andaaz dil pe shayrana asar gehrayi tak chorte hai .. aur khyaal chahe koi bhi ho .. unhe aledah aur naye tareeke maiN lapet ke rakhna hi shayri hai .... jo ek insaan ko shayar banati hai .. mujhe pasand aayi aapki rachna ...

apna khyaal rakh ke aise hi likhte rahiye .. aur ye sab meri jaati raa'ii hai .. aapko poora haq hai isse ittefaaq rakheN ya nahi ... aur eri koi baat galat rahi ho to muafi ka adad talabgaar rahuNga ....

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Kunaalji,


AAp ne aap ka keemati waqt nikal kar meri ghazal par ek nazar ki aur apni raa'ye di iske liye aap ki tah -e -dil se shukra guzaar hoon.

aur haan aap ke diye huwe sujav se ittefaq rakhti hoon, rahi baat muafi ki to yeh kahungi ke mere jaise ubharate huwe shayro.N ki ghazal par aap jaise dosto.N ki raa'ye milna jyada maiine rakhta hai...us se hee housla badhta hai.. to muafi ki baat karke sharmida na kare.N

AAge bhee aise hee padhte rahiyega

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26th March 2009, 12:51 PM
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Namaskaar Dosto.N

Fir ek baar aapke samne ek chhoti si koshish lekar aayi hoon..... aap ki raa'ye ka Intezaar rahega

Mat samajh maiN koi gunaah kar rahi hoon
Bas tujhi se pyaar bepanaah kar rahi hoon

tere Ishq mein jala kar apna dil o zalim,
maiN raushan chiraaG-e-raah kar rahi hoon

teri chahat ke koi aasaar aate nahi nazar
nafrato.N se teri nibhaah kar rahi hoon

Taa-umr intezaar se pyaar hoga nahi hasil
yahi soch kar khud ko tabaah kar rahi hoon

woh yeh samaj baithe, likhti hoon “ek ghazal”
Main to sirf fard-e-amal siyaah kar rahi hoon
Hi Purvi,

Hamesha ki tarah bht hi khoobsurat likha hai aapne.......aisehi likhte rahiye
   
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28th March 2009, 05:13 PM
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wahhhhhhhhh PURVI diii......mind blowing....awesome...dil ko chhu gaye aapke ye ehsaas.....bahut khoob....yuhi likhte rahiyega....

Dear Lamha,

Yeh Ghazal ke ehsaas tumhen acche lage yeh jankar khushi mili

aage bhi apna saath deti rahna.. Khush raho

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Namaskaar Dosto.N

Fir ek baar aapke samne ek chhoti si koshish lekar aayi hoon..... aap ki raa'ye ka Intezaar rahega

Mat samajh maiN koi gunaah kar rahi hoon
Bas tujhi se pyaar bepanaah kar rahi hoon

tere Ishq mein jala kar apna dil o zalim,
maiN raushan chiraaG-e-raah kar rahi hoon

teri chahat ke koi aasaar aate nahi nazar
nafrato.N se teri nibhaah kar rahi hoon

Taa-umr intezaar se pyaar hoga nahi hasil
yahi soch kar khud ko tabaah kar rahi hoon

woh yeh samaj baithe, likhti hoon “ek ghazal”
Main to sirf fard-e-amal siyaah kar rahi hoon
nice feelings.........thnx 4 sharing
Love n Regards
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Hi Purvi,

Hamesha ki tarah bht hi khoobsurat likha hai aapne.......aisehi likhte rahiye
Naaz,

bahot bahot shukriya...................

aise hee padhte rahena.. aur apna saath dete rahna

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Hi Purvi,

Hamesha ki tarah bht hi khoobsurat likha hai aapne.......aisehi likhte rahiye
Naaz, yeh tumhari nazar hai jo meri har koshish ko pasand karti hai....

shukriya .....

yunhi padhte rahena

khush rahena...

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Namaskaar Dosto.N

Fir ek baar aapke samne ek chhoti si koshish lekar aayi hoon..... aap ki raa'ye ka Intezaar rahega

Mat samajh maiN koi gunaah kar rahi hoon
Bas tujhi se pyaar bepanaah kar rahi hoon

-kisko samjha raho yeh aap

tere Ishq mein jala kar apna dil o zalim,
maiN raushan chiraaG-e-raah kar rahi hoon

-tabhi itna roshni hai mere bagair bhi

teri chahat ke koi aasaar aate nahi nazar
nafrato.N se teri nibhaah kar rahi hoon

-bahot khub

Taa-umr intezaar se pyaar hoga nahi hasil
yahi soch kar khud ko tabaah kar rahi hoon

-aisa to kabhi na karna sachi

woh yeh samaj baithe, likhti hoon “ek ghazal”
Main to sirf fard-e-amal siyaah kar rahi hoon

-maqtaa lajawab hai
Puri ghazal meri Di ki tarah khubsoorat aur lajawab hai

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Meri ghazal par apni raa'ye dene ke liye mai.N tumhari shukra guzaar hoon

yunhi saath dete rahna

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Puri ghazal meri Di ki tarah khubsoorat aur lajawab hai

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Ghazal tumhe.N meri rarah khubsoorat lagi hai to mai.N samaj sakti hoon yeh ghazal kaisi hai

Chalo koi baat nahi...... tumhari raa'ye se thodi bahot jaan aayi hai Ghazal mei.N woh kaafi hai

Yunhi saath deti rahena

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