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5th December 2007, 12:57 PM
sabhi doston ko raj ka pyar bhara adaab...namaskaar or sat sri akaal.....dosto kush waqt ke liye aapse door ho gyaa thaa magar jaanta hoon ki aapke dilon se door nahi huaa....or na kabhi ho sakta hoon....bass kush aisa fansa ki aa nahi saka lakin aaj phir aapke saamne hoon jo bhii saza dena chhaho de sakte ho waise to yahi apne aap mein ek saza thii ki aap sab se door raha ye saza bhii kam nahi......ek baar phir se muaafi ka talabgaar hoon umeed hai aap apne raj ko muaaf kar doge....to dosto apni ek koshish pesh kar raha hoon....umeed hai saare gile shikwe door ho jaynge.....to pesh hai......
unko hamse dushmani ho ga.ii hai mout kii hamse dostii ho ga.ii hai....... soacha thaa karnge na yaad unko magar khataa aaj bhii ho ga.ii hai...... jab se kaha hamne chaand unko khafa hamse chandni ho ga.ii hai..... dil jalane ka kush to faida huaa ghar mein unke roshni ho ga.ii hai...... bhula nahi sakta unko pa nahi sakta ajeeb is dil ki bebasi ho ga.ii hai..... wo bhulne lagge hain 'veer' ko shayad uske zulmo.N me.N kami ho ga.ii hai...... aapke pyar or raye ka muntzir.......aapka raj......... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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5th December 2007, 01:07 PM
hi dear raj..aapne bhot accha likha hai..yuhi likhte rahiye.
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5th December 2007, 01:15 PM
big B :
Pranaam.. kyaa maiN din meiN sapnaa deKh rahaa huuN kii sach hay..  aapki naYii taazaah Ghazal bazm meiN.. waah!! mujHe be-Had KhuShii hu'ii kii aapne fir sey apnii koShiSh ke Zar''iiYe bazm ko rauShan kar diYaa.. ab aap sey sirf aik hi guzaariSh hay kii ab YuuN eid ke chaaNd ki taraH bazm sey gaayab na raheN.. aur maiN to bahot naaraaz huuN aapsey. baakii aur kyaa kahuN.. aapkii Ghazal paRh ke dil Shaad ho gaYaa.. mere dil sey niklii hu'ii daad-o-mubaaraqbaad ko qabUl farmaaYeN..!KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka chhoTu ~ Dhaval |
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5th December 2007, 01:23 PM
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Aur kese hain.sab kheriyat janaab aapto Eid ka chaand ho gaye they roz aapki raah dekhtey aapne saza ki baat ki hai wo to aapko milegi hi itni asani se nahi chodenge aapko Aap ki saza hai ki aapko ab roz yanha hazri lagani hai kahiye kubool hai na.Aapki shayri ko bahut miss karrahey they ham aur jab aap aye to ek umda gazal ko mehfil se rubaru karaya aapne dilki gehraiun se mubarakbaad aur dili daad kubool farmayen.................Aap ka bhai Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko, wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain. Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif'' Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.  |
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5th December 2007, 01:26 PM
WElcome ^ Welcome..........chaliye aapko maaf kiya koi sazaa nahin deni
aap bhi kya yaad rakhenge ki Sdc pe kaise kaise rais hain haaajab se kaha hamne chaand unko khafa hamse chandni ho ga.ii hai..... yeh sher behad pasand aaya...waise to puri ghazal mukaamal hain..... aise hi likhte rehna aur is bazm ki ronak badhate rehna...........mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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5th December 2007, 09:22 PM
Sat shri akal Raj ji
Bahut hi sohna likhiya hai, har ek line wich dam hai eh lines taa mainu bahut hi sohniya lagiya soacha thaa karnge na yaad unko magar khataa aaj bhii ho ga.ii hai...... dil jalane ka kush to faida huaa ghar mein unke roshni ho ga.ii hai...... wo bhulne lagge hain 'veer' ko shayad uske zulmo.N me.N kami ho ga.ii hai......  GOD IS GREAT
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6th December 2007, 04:15 AM
veer ji,
bahut dino baad aapko paRhne ka mauka mila...achchi lagi aapki yeh Ghazal thanks for sharing the Ghazal with us... regards aarya inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii regards aarya |
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6th December 2007, 01:59 PM
hmmmmmmmm...........
 ...yeh rajveer jee hi hain..... Namaskaar janab...........kaha gayab ho gaye thy......hum bhi aapse bahuttttt jayadaaaaaaaa naraz haiN aur main apne CHOTTU ki har baat se sahmat hoon....jo usne kaha hai wahi sab kuch meri taraf se bhi hai.... aur haan jo sajja aapko KASHIF jii ne di hai wahi sajja hum bhi de rahe hain aapko... ab bari aapki gazal ki to uske liye kaya kahuN har baar ki tarah be-misaal hai.... koi jawaab nahi hai aapki shayri ka yu hi aatey rahiye aur mahfil ko be-ronak mat kijiyega phir se...samjay aapki dost .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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6th December 2007, 10:17 PM
namaskaar rajveer ji,
kaise hain aap? welcome back!!! aapko yahan vapish dekh-kar acha laga. aapki ghazal b bahut pasand aayi. dil k ehsaason ko pesh karna to koi aapse seekhe. dil se nikli daad ko kabul kijiye. aapka manish Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time....  |
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beautiful moment.........
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7th December 2007, 08:11 PM
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wahhhhhhhhhh bahut khub RAJ............behtarin ghazal pesh ki hai aapne.....u r one of the best shayars on SDC......keep it up .......WEL COME BACK................  "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa , ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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frnd 4 ever |
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13th December 2007, 03:51 PM
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Aadab raj ji, kaise hain aap?> chaliye chand nazar aa gaya, wah janab kya baat hain kis khubsurat andaz me wapsi ki hai aapne, aapka ek ek ashaar dil ko chhu gaya, wese aapki is nazm me,,aapka haale dil bayan ho raha hain, kya baat hai? yeh nazm hi hai,,ya aapke khud ke ehsaas hai?> sach aapki yeh nazm bohot hi khubsurat or dil ko chhu jane wali hain, isme pyar ke saath_saath,,kahi na kahi ek udaasi b mehsus hui is mukammal koshish k liye dili daad kabul kijiye. APNA KHAYAL RAKHIYE, KHUSH RAHIYE ALLAH HAFIZ Sweet HASSONI, ( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi ) ()""""()()""""() ( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' ) (,) (,) (,) (,) SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN forever.. and ever and ever! **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ |
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16th January 2008, 12:57 PM
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.................................................. .. bhula nahi sakta unko pa nahi sakta ajeeb is dil ki bebasi ho ga.ii hai.... RAJVEER tusi sade dilaan ch vasde ho. tusi jo v likhde ho ikk misaal ban jandi hai. par tuhadi sade to jyada doori mehsoos hon lagdi hai. pleez jaldi vapsi kareea karo. |
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