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26th March 2013, 02:32 AM
Mehfil ko Abrar ka Salaam... Apni keemti aara se nawaze...
Hai tanha meri zindagi is kehkashan mein doston,
Dil aaya hai jis hoor pe woh ek sana hai doston,
Nigah se nigah milte hi aankhein jhuka leti hai woh,
Kya naam doon is ada ko main kaatilana hai doston,
Ek jhalak uske aks ko bhatak ta rehta hoon darbadar,
Jab miljaye woh ajnabee to dekhta rehta hun doston,
Woh milti bhi hai kabhi muskurakar dard chupati pari,
Kya naam doon is ada ko main shayarana hai doston,
Woh kehti hai ke pyaar nahi ab use kisi zaat se,
Dil jo toota to daraar gehri bohot aayi hai doston,
Zindagi jeena to jaise ab sirf ek bahana hai uske liye,
Kya naam doon is ada ko main lawajaab hai doston...
Kabhi poochegi ya nahi mere dil ka haal woh pari,
Izhaare mohabbat to kar chuke iqraar baaqi hai doston,
Tanhaiyon mein kati jo meri zindagi yeh abtak sahi,
Dekhte hai aage hota kya hai kahani baaqi hai doston...
Hum to pattharon se mohabbat ka hunar rakhte hain,
Tum to phir bhi moom ho "Abrar" ke gale lag kar pighal jaoge...
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26th March 2013, 08:26 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Abrarsworld
Mehfil ko Abrar ka Salaam... Apni keemti aara se nawaze...
Hai tanha meri zindagi is kehkashan mein doston,
Dil aaya hai jis hoor pe woh ek sana hai doston,
Nigah se nigah milte hi aankhein jhuka leti hai woh,
Kya naam doon is ada ko main kaatilana hai doston,
Ek jhalak uske aks ko bhatak ta rehta hoon darbadar,
Jab miljaye woh ajnabee to dekhta rehta hun doston,
Woh milti bhi hai kabhi muskurakar dard chupati pari,
Kya naam doon is ada ko main shayarana hai doston,
Woh kehti hai ke pyaar nahi ab use kisi zaat se,
Dil jo toota to daraar gehri bohot aayi hai doston,
Zindagi jeena to jaise ab sirf ek bahana hai uske liye,
Kya naam doon is ada ko main lawajaab hai doston...
Kabhi poochegi ya nahi mere dil ka haal woh pari,
Izhaare mohabbat to kar chuke iqraar baaqi hai doston,
Tanhaiyon mein kati jo meri zindagi yeh abtak sahi,
Dekhte hai aage hota kya hai kahani baaqi hai doston...
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very touching .. very well writen
Manshaa Thaakur
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26th March 2013, 11:01 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Abrarsworld
Mehfil ko Abrar ka Salaam... Apni keemti aara se nawaze...
Hai tanha meri zindagi is kehkashan mein doston,
Dil aaya hai jis hoor pe woh ek sana hai doston,
Nigah se nigah milte hi aankhein jhuka leti hai woh,
Kya naam doon is ada ko main kaatilana hai doston,
Ek jhalak uske aks ko bhatak ta rehta hoon darbadar,
Jab miljaye woh ajnabee to dekhta rehta hun doston,
Woh milti bhi hai kabhi muskurakar dard chupati pari,
Kya naam doon is ada ko main shayarana hai doston,
Woh kehti hai ke pyaar nahi ab use kisi zaat se,
Dil jo toota to daraar gehri bohot aayi hai doston,
Zindagi jeena to jaise ab sirf ek bahana hai uske liye,
Kya naam doon is ada ko main lawajaab hai doston...
Kabhi poochegi ya nahi mere dil ka haal woh pari,
Izhaare mohabbat to kar chuke iqraar baaqi hai doston,
Tanhaiyon mein kati jo meri zindagi yeh abtak sahi,
Dekhte hai aage hota kya hai kahani baaqi hai doston...
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acchaa likhaahai janaab bahot khoob....... ehsas bahot pasand aaye.... ab dheere dheere sher ki barikiyon ko samjahne me waqt dijiye shukriyaa....
Shaad....
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26th March 2013, 02:46 PM
Abraar Sahaab Aadaab!
WaaH waaH janab kya khoobsurat aur pyaare khayaalaat kahe haiN ..
behad dilkash kalaam kahi hai janab, bahut khoob...
Meri dheroN dili daad kabul kijiye... aur AllaaH kare ke aapki woH ajnabi
aapko mil jaaye....
Shaad O aabad rahiye... aate rahiye...
Likhate rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...
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27th March 2013, 09:18 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Abrarsworld
Mehfil ko Abrar ka Salaam... Apni keemti aara se nawaze...
Hai tanha meri zindagi is kehkashan mein doston,
Dil aaya hai jis hoor pe woh ek sana hai doston,
Nigah se nigah milte hi aankhein jhuka leti hai woh,
Kya naam doon is ada ko main kaatilana hai doston,
Ek jhalak uske aks ko bhatak ta rehta hoon darbadar,
Jab miljaye woh ajnabee to dekhta rehta hun doston,
Woh milti bhi hai kabhi muskurakar dard chupati pari,
Kya naam doon is ada ko main shayarana hai doston,
Woh kehti hai ke pyaar nahi ab use kisi zaat se,
Dil jo toota to daraar gehri bohot aayi hai doston,
Zindagi jeena to jaise ab sirf ek bahana hai uske liye,
Kya naam doon is ada ko main lawajaab hai doston...
Kabhi poochegi ya nahi mere dil ka haal woh pari,
Izhaare mohabbat to kar chuke iqraar baaqi hai doston,
Tanhaiyon mein kati jo meri zindagi yeh abtak sahi,
Dekhte hai aage hota kya hai kahani baaqi hai doston...
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good one
bahot sunder nazm
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28th March 2013, 07:40 PM
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Originally Posted by Abrarsworld
Mehfil ko Abrar ka Salaam... Apni keemti aara se nawaze...
Hai tanha meri zindagi is kehkashan mein doston,
Dil aaya hai jis hoor pe woh ek sana hai doston,
Nigah se nigah milte hi aankhein jhuka leti hai woh,
Kya naam doon is ada ko main kaatilana hai doston,
Ek jhalak uske aks ko bhatak ta rehta hoon darbadar,
Jab miljaye woh ajnabee to dekhta rehta hun doston,
Woh milti bhi hai kabhi muskurakar dard chupati pari,
Kya naam doon is ada ko main shayarana hai doston,
Woh kehti hai ke pyaar nahi ab use kisi zaat se,
Dil jo toota to daraar gehri bohot aayi hai doston,
Zindagi jeena to jaise ab sirf ek bahana hai uske liye,
Kya naam doon is ada ko main lawajaab hai doston...
Kabhi poochegi ya nahi mere dil ka haal woh pari,
Izhaare mohabbat to kar chuke iqraar baaqi hai doston,
Tanhaiyon mein kati jo meri zindagi yeh abtak sahi,
Dekhte hai aage hota kya hai kahani baaqi hai doston...
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WaaH ! BehtareeN
Kyaa Khayaal Nazm Hue HaiN
UmdaaH
Mubaaraqbaad !!!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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7th May 2013, 07:13 PM
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very touching .. very well writen
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Aapka Bohot bohot shukriyah!!!
Abrar.
Hum to pattharon se mohabbat ka hunar rakhte hain,
Tum to phir bhi moom ho "Abrar" ke gale lag kar pighal jaoge...
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7th May 2013, 07:17 PM
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acchaa likhaahai janaab bahot khoob....... ehsas bahot pasand aaye.... ab dheere dheere sher ki barikiyon ko samjahne me waqt dijiye shukriyaa....
Shaad....
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Ehsaas pasand karne ka bohot bohot shukriyah, Sher ki baarikiyon ko samajh ne ki koshish mein hun... Zyada samajh nahi aata ya waqt nahi mil pata... Inshallah woh kami bhi jald poori karlunga... Yunhi aate rahe..
Duaon ke saath Ijazat...
Abrar..
Hum to pattharon se mohabbat ka hunar rakhte hain,
Tum to phir bhi moom ho "Abrar" ke gale lag kar pighal jaoge...
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7th May 2013, 07:19 PM
Kwahish Ji,
Aapki daad sar aankhon par, Dil se dua ke liye aapka karz daar... Bohot bohot shukriyah... Yunhi aate rahe...
Duaon ke saath Ijazat...
Abrar.
Hum to pattharon se mohabbat ka hunar rakhte hain,
Tum to phir bhi moom ho "Abrar" ke gale lag kar pighal jaoge...
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7th May 2013, 08:24 PM
nice one abrar jee.....daad.................
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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7th May 2013, 10:25 PM
accha likha hai aapne.....ahsaas bahut acche lge hame....
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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11th May 2013, 10:20 PM
abrar bhaii:
namaste!
kaise haiN aap? aapki koShiSh Khoob rahiin... ehsaas mujhe pasaNd aayeN... yuuNhi aage bhee likhte rahiye... dil se daad aur duaaeN
KhuSh rahiye... apnaa Khayaal raKheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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12th May 2013, 04:36 AM
Bahot hi Badhiya rachna...dil KO chu gayi...niccccc
Quote:
Originally Posted by Abrarsworld
Mehfil ko Abrar ka Salaam... Apni keemti aara se nawaze...
Hai tanha meri zindagi is kehkashan mein doston,
Dil aaya hai jis hoor pe woh ek sana hai doston,
Nigah se nigah milte hi aankhein jhuka leti hai woh,
Kya naam doon is ada ko main kaatilana hai doston,
Ek jhalak uske aks ko bhatak ta rehta hoon darbadar,
Jab miljaye woh ajnabee to dekhta rehta hun doston,
Woh milti bhi hai kabhi muskurakar dard chupati pari,
Kya naam doon is ada ko main shayarana hai doston,
Woh kehti hai ke pyaar nahi ab use kisi zaat se,
Dil jo toota to daraar gehri bohot aayi hai doston,
Zindagi jeena to jaise ab sirf ek bahana hai uske liye,
Kya naam doon is ada ko main lawajaab hai doston...
Kabhi poochegi ya nahi mere dil ka haal woh pari,
Izhaare mohabbat to kar chuke iqraar baaqi hai doston,
Tanhaiyon mein kati jo meri zindagi yeh abtak sahi,
Dekhte hai aage hota kya hai kahani baaqi hai doston...
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