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8th April 2013, 01:14 PM
Mujhe tum vo din vo jagah vo raat bata do,
Aaye na jab teri yaad, mujhe vo barsaat bata do,
Bhulane ko to tujhe hamne kabka bhula diya,
Bhulein kaise khud ko,bas ye baat bata do,
Aankhon mein kuch khwaabon ke tootne kee aahat,
Kaanon se pehle dil tak pahunchti hai,
Dil jab dhak se hota hai,
To aansun hosh khoke,
Waqt bewaqt nikalte hain,
Inhe kaise sambhalun main bas ye baat bata do...
Mujhe tum vo din vo jagah vo raat bata do....
June kee tapti hui dopahar
aur shaakhon se girte patte....
Aansmaan mein bada sa sooraj aur tera chota sa rumaal......
Dhool tumhe paas lati thi...
Aankh kee kirkiri to tumne nikal dee thi...
Dil mein ek kirkiri abhi tak kadak rahi hai...
Use kaise nikalun main.... bas ye baat bata do...
Mujhe tum vo din vo jagah vo raat bata do....
Aansmaan mein taaron kee chaadar
Ek tera bheega hua tan
Geele baalon kee khushboo,
Aur kajal se bante chaand...
Aansmaan aaj dekho khali hai,
Taare to tum le gayin....
Chaand kaise banaun main..... bas ye baat bata do....
Mujhe tum vo din vo jagah vo raat bata do....
Ek dooje ka haath pakad ke,
baarish mein jab bheeg rahe the,
Tarbatar hoke fir ped ke neeche sookh rahe the,
Main bhi bheega tum bhi bheegi,
Dupatta to tera sookh gaya tha,
Ped kee vo daal abhi tak bheeg rahi hai.....
Aayenge kab hum ye pooch rahi hai....
Use kya batlaun main..... bas ye baat bata do,
Mujhe tum vo din vo jagah vo raat bata do....
Dher saari teri baatein,
ek tera saari wala photo,
Hisaab ke kuch purze aur
Kismat wala ek sikka,
Tooti mala ke moti aur
Aansuon mein bheege tere khat rakhein hain....
Kya rakhun, kya fenkun main.... bas ye baat bata do,
Mujhe tum vo din vo jagah vo raat bata do....
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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8th April 2013, 01:26 PM
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Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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bahot khoob janaab................
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Aru Jee Aadaab!
WaaH waaH waaH waaH janab kya baat hai, kya ahsaas O khayaal kahe hai aapne... gazab kar diyaa Bhai bahut khoob bahut umdaa...
Badi hi dilkash aur dil ko chhune wali poem rahi aapki....
Meri hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez..
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9th April 2013, 04:38 PM
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Thanx zainy jee...................,....
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
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bahot khoob janaab................
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Thanx sameer bhai........aapne ise pasand kiya uske liye shukriya.....
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
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Aru Jee Aadaab!
WaaH waaH waaH waaH janab kya baat hai, kya ahsaas O khayaal kahe hai aapne... gazab kar diyaa Bhai bahut khoob bahut umdaa...
Badi hi dilkash aur dil ko chhune wali poem rahi aapki....
Meri hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez..
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Thanx kwaish jee................
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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16th April 2013, 07:51 AM
thanx khwaish jee............................
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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16th April 2013, 10:00 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by aru
Mujhe tum vo din vo jagah vo raat bata do,
Aaye na jab teri yaad, mujhe vo barsaat bata do,
Bhulane ko to tujhe hamne kabka bhula diya,
Bhulein kaise khud ko,bas ye baat bata do,
Aankhon mein kuch khwaabon ke tootne kee aahat,
Kaanon se pehle dil tak pahunchti hai,
Dil jab dhak se hota hai,
To aansun hosh khoke,
Waqt bewaqt nikalte hain,
Inhe kaise sambhalun main bas ye baat bata do...
Mujhe tum vo din vo jagah vo raat bata do....
June kee tapti hui dopahar
aur shaakhon se girte patte....
Aansmaan mein bada sa sooraj aur tera chota sa rumaal......
Dhool tumhe paas lati thi...
Aankh kee kirkiri to tumne nikal dee thi...
Dil mein ek kirkiri abhi tak kadak rahi hai...
Use kaise nikalun main.... bas ye baat bata do...
Mujhe tum vo din vo jagah vo raat bata do....
Aansmaan mein taaron kee chaadar
Ek tera bheega hua tan
Geele baalon kee khushboo,
Aur kajal se bante chaand...
Aansmaan aaj dekho khali hai,
Taare to tum le gayin....
Chaand kaise banaun main..... bas ye baat bata do....
Mujhe tum vo din vo jagah vo raat bata do....
Ek dooje ka haath pakad ke,
baarish mein jab bheeg rahe the,
Tarbatar hoke fir ped ke neeche sookh rahe the,
Main bhi bheega tum bhi bheegi,
Dupatta to tera sookh gaya tha,
Ped kee vo daal abhi tak bheeg rahi hai.....
Aayenge kab hum ye pooch rahi hai....
Use kya batlaun main..... bas ye baat bata do,
Mujhe tum vo din vo jagah vo raat bata do....
Dher saari teri baatein,
ek tera saari wala photo,
Hisaab ke kuch purze aur
Kismat wala ek sikka,
Tooti mala ke moti aur
Aansuon mein bheege tere khat rakhein hain....
Kya rakhun, kya fenkun main.... bas ye baat bata do,
Mujhe tum vo din vo jagah vo raat bata do....
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Badhaaii !!!
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16th April 2013, 10:48 AM
Arvind ji namSte
jitni taarif ki jaaye kam hai
bahut sundar
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Mujhe tum vo din vo jagah vo raat bata do,
Aaye na jab teri yaad, mujhe vo barsaat bata do,
Bhulane ko to tujhe hamne kabka bhula diya,
Bhulein kaise khud ko,bas ye baat bata do,
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17th April 2013, 10:13 AM
bhooleN kaise khud ko bas ye baat bata do, saaheb bataana aata to jaroor kosish karta maiN...
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Adhbhut ............... Arvind JI !!
Badhaaii !!!
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Thanx naresh jee........aapka sneh bana rahe.......
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
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8th May 2013, 01:20 PM
Arvind ji ,
Kya kahun ...aap ne to hamein vo sare manzar dikha diye
jinse kabhi aap bawasta hue the.
Itna hi kahunga ...beautiful composition depicting
the agony in true form.
Sanjay Sehgal
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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Arvind ji namSte
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Thanx rajeev jee....aapka bahut bahut shukriya............
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
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Nice Aru Ji..............
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Originally Posted by aru
Mujhe tum vo din vo jagah vo raat bata do,
Aaye na jab teri yaad, mujhe vo barsaat bata do,
Bhulane ko to tujhe hamne kabka bhula diya,
Bhulein kaise khud ko,bas ye baat bata do,
Aankhon mein kuch khwaabon ke tootne kee aahat,
Kaanon se pehle dil tak pahunchti hai,
Dil jab dhak se hota hai,
To aansun hosh khoke,
Waqt bewaqt nikalte hain,
Inhe kaise sambhalun main bas ye baat bata do...
Mujhe tum vo din vo jagah vo raat bata do....
June kee tapti hui dopahar
aur shaakhon se girte patte....
Aansmaan mein bada sa sooraj aur tera chota sa rumaal......
Dhool tumhe paas lati thi...
Aankh kee kirkiri to tumne nikal dee thi...
Dil mein ek kirkiri abhi tak kadak rahi hai...
Use kaise nikalun main.... bas ye baat bata do...
Mujhe tum vo din vo jagah vo raat bata do....
Aansmaan mein taaron kee chaadar
Ek tera bheega hua tan
Geele baalon kee khushboo,
Aur kajal se bante chaand...
Aansmaan aaj dekho khali hai,
Taare to tum le gayin....
Chaand kaise banaun main..... bas ye baat bata do....
Mujhe tum vo din vo jagah vo raat bata do....
Ek dooje ka haath pakad ke,
baarish mein jab bheeg rahe the,
Tarbatar hoke fir ped ke neeche sookh rahe the,
Main bhi bheega tum bhi bheegi,
Dupatta to tera sookh gaya tha,
Ped kee vo daal abhi tak bheeg rahi hai.....
Aayenge kab hum ye pooch rahi hai....
Use kya batlaun main..... bas ye baat bata do,
Mujhe tum vo din vo jagah vo raat bata do....
Dher saari teri baatein,
ek tera saari wala photo,
Hisaab ke kuch purze aur
Kismat wala ek sikka,
Tooti mala ke moti aur
Aansuon mein bheege tere khat rakhein hain....
Kya rakhun, kya fenkun main.... bas ye baat bata do,
Mujhe tum vo din vo jagah vo raat bata do....
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bhooleN kaise khud ko bas ye baat bata do, saaheb bataana aata to jaroor kosish karta maiN...
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Thanx lucky bhai.....aapne ise pasand kiya uske liye shukriya......
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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30th May 2013, 11:20 PM
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Arvind ji ,
Kya kahun ...aap ne to hamein vo sare manzar dikha diye
jinse kabhi aap bawasta hue the.
Itna hi kahunga ...beautiful composition depicting
the agony in true form.
Sanjay Sehgal
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Thanx sanjay jee........................
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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14th June 2013, 09:18 AM
thanx a lot sudhir jee....................
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
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