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7th February 2012, 12:21 PM
mehfile dard ko mera salaam, ek adna si koshish aapki nazar kar raha huN...
apni aara se zuroor nawaziyega...aapki rae ka muntazir huN... sab tu nahi apna bhi kuchh falsafa hai zindagi soch apni aur apna juda tabsara hai zindagi rote-rote gar kat gayee to jiya kya khaak phir kar gaur tu khud pe kabhi, kyu saza hai zindagi milta nahi dhuNde bhi ab, jeene ka jo de sabak bas jaan le ke har qadam mashwara hai zindagi mere khuda, tera pata, jaanta koii nahi hai dhuNdane ki aarzu, to maza hai zindagi hai dard raahat dard chaahat, maza bhi dard meN ham dard waaloN ke liye, kahkaha hai zindagi hai 'mast' gar tujhko gumaaN, zaat pe apni zara haasil tera khuchh bhi nahi, bad-dua hai zindagi Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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7th February 2012, 06:01 PM
Vikram Bhaa'ii:
namaste! har ik lafz dil ko Chhu gaye... umdaah Ghazal!! dil se daad.. KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~Dhaval |
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7th February 2012, 06:30 PM
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umdaa aor kaamiyaab ghazal bani hai .. acchi peshkash tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... radhe radhe ....................  Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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Waahh kya khoob zindegi-Naama hai Vikram saab .. behad ummdah, behad asardaar.. is kalaam ko parhkar kuch yaad aaa gaya hai kabhi likha tha, aapki nazar pesh karta hoon... TaariqiyoN ke saaye me le Aai hai Zindegi, Apne liye to jaise abb Tanhaai hai Zindegi. Jo tum nahi to Raat ki KhaamoshiyaN bhi nahi, Tum ho sanam to subho ki AngDaai hai Zindegi. YooNhi likhte rahen, aur Mehfile-Soz ko hawaa dete raheN.....Shukriyaa |
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8th February 2012, 07:28 AM
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ham dard waaloN ke liye, kahkaha hai zindagi Bahut Khoob ... Vikram Bhai ! AchChhi Aur Khaamiyaab Ghazal Huii ... UmdaaH Peshkash ! Dilee Daad O Mubaaraqbaad !!!  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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mere khuda, tera pata, jaanta koii nahi hai dhuNdane ki aarzu, to maza hai zindagi Radhika  Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye E-mail : radhika.nm2@gmail.com |
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Janab Vikram Sb........ Aik Achi Ghazal Hui Hai...... Mujhy Is Nazm KE Ahsasaat Khaas Taur Pr Pasand Aaye......... Is Ke Hr Sher ME aap Ki Fikr Ki Gerhaayi Milti Hai....... Daad Qabool Farmaiye.... Mere Kuch Ashaar Zindagi Hee Ke Baray Me Aap Ki Nazar.... Mujh Se Aksar Puchtay Ho Tum ke Kia Hai Zindagi Aa Sakay Na Jo Samjh Me Falsafa Hai Zindagi Jee Rahay Hain Jo Yahan Apni Muhabbat Haar Ke Aisay Logon Ke Liye Bas Ik Saza Hai Zindagi Zindagi Ki Aankh Me Dekhen Jo Aankhen Daal Kr Hum Pe Ye Idraak ho Ga Aayina Hai Zindagi Gham,Khsuhi Dard-o-Alam Ka Ik Murakkab Hai hayat Wehshaton Tanahiyon Ka Silsila Hai Zindagi Likhtay Rahiye...... Khush Rahiye Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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9th February 2012, 12:39 PM
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aapki daad sar maathe huzoor.... aamad aur hausala afzaai ka bahut bahut shukriya bhai... Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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kaise haiN aap? tareef aur hausala afzaai ka bahut bahut shukriya janaab... Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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bahut bahut shukriya shaad bhai... aapke likhe ye sher bahut badhiya haiN... TaariqiyoN ke saaye me le Aai hai Zindegi, Apne liye to jaise abb Tanhaai hai Zindegi. Jo tum nahi to Raat ki KhaamoshiyaN bhi nahi, Tum ho sanam to subho ki AngDaai hai Zindegi. inpe meri daad qubuul kijiyega.... Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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11th February 2012, 04:26 PM
namaskar vikram sahab kaise hai aap? bahut khoob ghazal likhee hai aapne. ghazal ka ek ek sher bahut bahut pasand aaya...............likhte rahiye, khush rahiye.
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11th February 2012, 07:32 PM
WAhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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13th February 2012, 03:14 PM
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yuNhi hausale ko badhaate rahiyega....bahut bahut shuykriya aapka... Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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13th February 2012, 08:06 PM
Vikram ji ...apki ghazal mein gehre falsafe bhi hain aur ek thahrav aur sukoon ka bhi ehsaas hai. Apko daad aur mubarakbaad.
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13th February 2012, 08:42 PM
achhi ghazal hai vikram ji...
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14th February 2012, 12:29 PM
Dear Vikram, You know what, I loved the 1st line a lot.. "sab tu nahi apna bhi kuchh falsafa hai zindagi" And again mid two lines were so very awesome..!!!! "milta nahi dhuNde bhi ab, jeene ka jo de sabak bas jaan le ke har qadam mashwara hai zindagi" Iske Saath thodi Thodi Sorry, that I cud understand the last two lines, I wanted to understand the same which is possible only if I come to the same state of mind you were in while writing the same or else if you explain the same it wud be great... hai 'mast' gar tujhko gumaaN, zaat pe apni zara haasil tera khuchh bhi nahi, bad-dua hai zindagi Ke Sirf Ghaalib ko hai pata, Radeef, Kafiya, Matla, Maktaa....!! Yeh Teer-E-Ishq kyaa 'Zindagi' se Ziyada, Kya Ghaalib ko hai Chubhata....!!!!! |
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aapki aamad aur tareef ka behad shukriya... jo aapko samjh nahi aaya use explain karne ki koshish karta hu....dekhte haiN ki baat banti hai ya nahi.... hai 'mast' gar tujhko gumaaN, zaat pe apni zara it is an intrinsic aspect of human life that we some how feel our selves to be more important than any other thing in the world, as our lives revolve around our families, friends etc... and often we choose not to get out of this shallow thinking...moreover others around us have a similar thought process, and it results in making yourself a hero of your life...but there are always other aspects that we are oblivious of or choose to neglect....so in this line I just wanted to ensure myself that I should not feel proud of my existence.... haasil tera khuchh bhi nahi, bad-dua hai zindagi in this line I tried to say that if you feel proud of your being then you have not earned anything in this life and your life is more a curse than a blessing. I do hope that I have made myself clear...if you still have any doubt...please do not hesitate to share your doubt.... Most important thing is that you should not be sorry if you do not understand any thing... Thanks... Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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hai 'mast' gar tujhko gumaaN, zaat pe apni zara it is an intrinsic aspect of human life that we some how feel our selves to be more important than any other thing in the world, as our lives revolve around our families, friends etc... and often we choose not to get out of this shallow thinking...moreover others around us have a similar thought process, and it results in making yourself a hero of your life...but there are always other aspects that we are oblivious of or choose to neglect....so in this line I just wanted to ensure myself that I should not feel proud of my existence.... Awesome.. and yeah I do Agree completely. I goes so synonymical with realistic outlook as well as spiritual one.. Arz hai, "Bas charimsma hi hoga Jab, Tu mujhko khud mein, Aur Mai khudko tujhme Dekhunga Zindagi..." haasil tera khuchh bhi nahi, bad-dua hai zindagi in this line I tried to say that if you feel proud of your being then you have not earned anything in this life and your life is more a curse than a blessing. Ab to zaroor samajh mein aaya, Aur halka halka dukh bhi hua, coz as rough per say Kaafi tezi se tamacha maara gaya hai to the people this line belongs to, kyunki mujhse aisa tamacha mara nahi jata chahe koi sahi yaa ghalat.. Kya hi accha hota gar kuch aur mohabbat se samjhaya hota logon ko.. Most important thing is that you should not be sorry if you do not understand any thing... Ohh Yess, but know what, I am new on the site and poetic insight is kinda developing in me, so get puzzled many a times on this site. Apart I must praise you coz despite having good knowledge over poetic insight, rarely people goes to the depth of subject line. According to me Labz bhale hi halke ho shayar key zajbaat aur ahsaas bade gehre honey chahiye. I can say there are three kind of poets 1- Labzon kein Ameer, 2- Zasbaat key ameer and 3- Combination of both. I must say you are touching the Number 3 category.. superb..!!!And Lastly Welcome..!!! Ke Sirf Ghaalib ko hai pata, Radeef, Kafiya, Matla, Maktaa....!! Yeh Teer-E-Ishq kyaa 'Zindagi' se Ziyada, Kya Ghaalib ko hai Chubhata....!!!!! |
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aapke likhe ashaar behad umdah haiN, meri jaanib se daad qubuul kijiyega... Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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Vikarm ji...dekho hamne aapko sdc ke pan.on meiN se doond nikala...aap to gayab hi ho gye hai...aapki yeh gazal padi muje behad acchi lagi to socha kyu na es gazal ko highlight kiya jaaye taaki baaki members bhi es khoobsurat zindgi-naame ko pad sake. .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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बहुत शुक्रिया -
1st March 2016, 11:37 PM
सुनीता जी आपका जितना शुक्रिया अदा करूँ होगा। आज आपने मुझे अपने उन दोस्तों से रु बा रु होने का मौका दिया है जो मुझे भूल गए थे या जिन्हें भूलाने की गलती मैं कर बैठा था। बहुत देर से इस महफ़िल में शिरकत करने की वजह ढून्ढ रहा था और आज आपने वो वजह दे दी। ये तो नहीं कह सकता की पहले की तरह नियम से आया करूँगा लेकिन हाँ आया ज़रूर करूँगा। बहुत से दोस्त हैं यहाँ पे मालूम कितनो को हूँगा लेकिन मेरे ज़हन में हर उस शख्स का अक्स है जिससे मैंने कभी राब्ता रखा हो।
दोस्तों आपकी दुआएं हैं जो आज भी ये गुलिस्तां वैसा ही लगता है जैसा की २००९ में लगता था जब यहाँ पहली बार आया था। आगे भी आपकी दुआओं की दरकार रहेगी। खाकसार मस्त ! Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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Vikram ji.....aap soch bhi nahi sakte ki muje es waqt kitni khushi ho rhi hai ki aap mere aik baar awaz lagane par hazir ho gye bahut bahut bahuttttt shukriya ab aana shuru hue haiN aap, to yeh silsilla ab rukne mat dena...jaroori nahi hota ki ham roz aaye par haan jab bhi waqt miley aayeN jaroor chotta font size padna mushkil lag rha tha so aapke review ka font size bada kar diya hai .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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2nd March 2016, 07:10 PM
bahut achcha laga aapko padhna..
waah!!bahut khoob ghazal..daad qubool kijiyega.. aate rahiyega.... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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3rd March 2016, 10:23 PM
behad shukarguzaar huN aapki zarra nawazi ka madhu ji...bahut-bahut shukriya
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