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khabar hone nahi dete…! - 15th July 2010, 11:23 PM

khabar hone nahi dete…!



mere kuchh ai’b haiN aise jo mujhe sone nahi dete…
maraasim mere ashqoN se, mujhe rone nahi dete…!

kuchh katar'ne khat ki rakhi thi kabhi taqiye tale maine…
baazu-e-maazi mere laMbe bahut, mujhe khone nahi dete…!

chaaha baarha maine ki bas, abto khatam hii ho sab…!
naya mausam hai, paudhe naye kyu bone nahi dete…?

haNsi aati hai apne paoN kafan se bahar jaate dekh…
faasla ziNdagi se maut ka ye kam hone nahi dete…!

surkh aaNkhoN ne sikha diya saheb, fareb bhi karna…
hum haNste haiN ke rote haiN, khabar hone nahi dete…!

saMbhalna zindagi, haath tera bhi choomuNga kisi roz…
abhi to khwaab bhi mere, khwaab mujhe pirone nahi dete…!

ya rab! thodi 'mastttiii...' hi abto kar inaayat tu mujhko…
sahil pe khade ye log, mujhe meri kashti dubone nahi dete…!!


ai'b: bad quality, avgun, dosh
maraasim: relationship, rishta
baarha: continually, baar-baar, lagataar
kata'rne: pieces, tuk'de
baazu-e-maazi: hands of past, ateet ke haath
inaayat: kripa, mercy


'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....



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15th July 2010, 11:51 PM

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khabar hone nahi dete…!



mere kuchh ai’b haiN aise jo mujhe sone nahi dete…
maraasim mere ashqoN se, mujhe rone nahi dete…!

kuchh katar'ne khat ki rakhi thi kabhi taqiye tale maine…
baazu-e-maazi mere laMbe bahut, mujhe khone nahi dete…!

chaaha baarha maine ki bas, abto khatam hii ho sab…!
naya mausam hai, paudhe naye kyu bone nahi dete…?

haNsi aati hai apne paoN kafan se bahar jaate dekh…
faasla ziNdagi se maut ka ye kam hone nahi dete…!

surkh aaNkhoN ne sikha diya saheb, fareb bhi karna…
hum haNste haiN ke rote haiN, khabar hone nahi dete…!

saMbhalna zindagi, haath tera bhi choomuNga kisi roz…
abhi to khwaab bhi mere, khwaab mujhe pirone nahi dete…!

ya rab! thodi 'mastttiii...' hi abto kar inaayat tu mujhko…
sahil pe khade ye log, mujhe meri kashti dubone nahi dete…!!!
Vikram Bhaiyaa...!

Jo bahut saare ' bahut khoob ' aap Amit Da ke liye likhaa karte heiN, hum bhi yahi likhna chaahte the...!

Bas, dil se daad kabool kareiN, hamein to aapka yaha kalaam shreShta raha...!

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Upar waale sher ke liye khaas daad...!

Apna khayaal thik se rakheiN, ok...?

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"bahut khoob" bhai.....

aapke ehsaass kareebi rahe

urdu shabdo ke meanings likh dete to aur luft aata......

meri subhkamnaye....


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16th July 2010, 02:12 AM

Yeh sher pasandida raha Vikram saheb......

surkh aaNkhoN ne sikha diya saheb, fareb bhi karna…
hum haNste haiN ke rote haiN, khabar hone nahi dete…!


Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil

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surkh aaNkhoN ne sikha diya saheb, fareb bhi karna…
hum haNste haiN ke rote haiN, khabar hone nahi dete…!

saMbhalna zindagi, haath tera bhi choomuNga kisi roz…
abhi to khwaab bhi mere, khwaab mujhe pirone nahi dete…!



Its Too Good ......... Vikram Ji ! very Impressive ! ver touching.... ! dil se daad hazir hai....yunhi likhte rahen... khush rahen....

apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....




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Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

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khabar hone nahi dete…!



mere kuchh ai’b haiN aise jo mujhe sone nahi dete…
maraasim mere ashqoN se, mujhe rone nahi dete…!

kuchh katar'ne khat ki rakhi thi kabhi taqiye tale maine…
baazu-e-maazi mere laMbe bahut, mujhe khone nahi dete…!

chaaha baarha maine ki bas, abto khatam hii ho sab…!
naya mausam hai, paudhe naye kyu bone nahi dete…?

haNsi aati hai apne paoN kafan se bahar jaate dekh…
faasla ziNdagi se maut ka ye kam hone nahi dete…!

surkh aaNkhoN ne sikha diya saheb, fareb bhi karna…
hum haNste haiN ke rote haiN, khabar hone nahi dete…!

saMbhalna zindagi, haath tera bhi choomuNga kisi roz…
abhi to khwaab bhi mere, khwaab mujhe pirone nahi dete…!

ya rab! thodi 'mastttiii...' hi abto kar inaayat tu mujhko…
sahil pe khade ye log, mujhe meri kashti dubone nahi dete…!!!
vikram bhai
radhe radhe

subhaan allah kya baat hai dil se daad rom rom khil gaya padhkar is kalaam ko jitni tareef karoon utni kam hai aur ye sher to bas kya kahun

saMbhalna zindagi, haath tera bhi choomuNga kisi roz…
abhi to khwaab bhi mere, khwaab mujhe pirone nahi dete…!

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Vikram bhaa'íi:

namaste!

Aik umdaa'h koShiSh! daad hi daad !

KhuSh rahe.n ...apna Khayaal raKhe.n

duaao.n ke saath ijaazat

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haNsi aati hai apne paoN kafan se bahar jaate dekh…
faasla ziNdagi se maut ka ye kam hone nahi dete…!

surkh aaNkhoN ne sikha diya saheb, fareb bhi karna…
hum haNste haiN ke rote haiN, khabar hone nahi dete…!


janab vikram saahab ko shaaad ka aadaab.. aapki tahreer ne is kadar kaaayal kar ke rakha hai ki jab bhi aata hoon aapki kisi taaza ghazal ko padhkar dil mutmaeen ho jata hai..in chand misron ne itna asar choda hai zahen me ki khayalon me kai dard kai shiqayat zindgi se aur JAAN se ho chala hai.. behad haseen kahyaalaat.. likhte rahen..
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Vikram Bhaiyaa...!

Jo bahut saare ' bahut khoob ' aap Amit Da ke liye likhaa karte heiN, hum bhi yahi likhna chaahte the...!

Bas, dil se daad kabool kareiN, hamein to aapka yaha kalaam shreShta raha...!



Upar waale sher ke liye khaas daad...!

Apna khayaal thik se rakheiN, ok...?

Ashirvaad ke saath


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aap bhi apna khayaal behad achhi tarha se rakhiyega...


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"bahut khoob" bhai.....

aapke ehsaass kareebi rahe

urdu shabdo ke meanings likh dete to aur luft aata......

meri subhkamnaye....
amit da pasaNd karne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya....

maiN abhi koshish karta hooN ki kisi tarha post ko edit karke isme shabd arthoN sahit insert kiye ja sakeN...

aapki shikayat abhi door kiye deta hooN....


ai'b: bad quality, avgun, dosh
maraasim: relationship, rishta
baarha: continually, baar-baar, lagataar
kata'rne: pieces, tuk'de
baazu-e-maazi: hands of past, ateet ke haath
inaayat: kripa, mercy


'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
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khabar hone nahi dete…!



mere kuchh ai’b haiN aise jo mujhe sone nahi dete…
maraasim mere ashqoN se, mujhe rone nahi dete…!

kuchh katar'ne khat ki rakhi thi kabhi taqiye tale maine…
baazu-e-maazi mere laMbe bahut, mujhe khone nahi dete…!

chaaha baarha maine ki bas, abto khatam hii ho sab…!
naya mausam hai, paudhe naye kyu bone nahi dete…?

haNsi aati hai apne paoN kafan se bahar jaate dekh…
faasla ziNdagi se maut ka ye kam hone nahi dete…!

surkh aaNkhoN ne sikha diya saheb, fareb bhi karna…
hum haNste haiN ke rote haiN, khabar hone nahi dete…!

saMbhalna zindagi, haath tera bhi choomuNga kisi roz…
abhi to khwaab bhi mere, khwaab mujhe pirone nahi dete…!

ya rab! thodi 'mastttiii...' hi abto kar inaayat tu mujhko…
sahil pe khade ye log, mujhe meri kashti dubone nahi dete…!!!

vikram ji bahut hii umda hai yeh peshkash

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chaaha baarha maine ki bas, abto khatam hii ho sab…!
naya mausam hai, paudhe naye kyu bone nahi dete



bahut khoob rahi aapki ye peshkesh vikram ji..
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Yeh sher pasandida raha Vikram saheb......

surkh aaNkhoN ne sikha diya saheb, fareb bhi karna…
hum haNste haiN ke rote haiN, khabar hone nahi dete…!
inaayat hai sajid bhai...
bahut bahut shukriya....


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surkh aaNkhoN ne sikha diya saheb, fareb bhi karna…
hum haNste haiN ke rote haiN, khabar hone nahi dete…!

saMbhalna zindagi, haath tera bhi choomuNga kisi roz…
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Its Too Good ......... Vikram Ji ! very Impressive ! ver touching.... ! dil se daad hazir hai....yunhi likhte rahen... khush rahen....

apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....
bahut bahut shukriya naresh jii...
aapne mehsoos kiya mujhe behad achha laga...
aapki dil se nikli daad dil se swikaar hai...


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vikran sahab aadab ,mizaj shareef ?

apko paheli padke kafi mahezoz howa .. achi taqleeq pe dad o mubarak baad .. ..ache kahete hain app tamam sher hi qoob rahe .. allah apko khush rakhe ..

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khabar hone nahi dete…!



mere kuchh ai’b haiN aise jo mujhe sone nahi dete…
maraasim mere ashqoN se, mujhe rone nahi dete…!

kuchh katar'ne khat ki rakhi thi kabhi taqiye tale maine…
baazu-e-maazi mere laMbe bahut, mujhe khone nahi dete…!

chaaha baarha maine ki bas, abto khatam hii ho sab…!
naya mausam hai, paudhe naye kyu bone nahi dete…?

haNsi aati hai apne paoN kafan se bahar jaate dekh…
faasla ziNdagi se maut ka ye kam hone nahi dete…!

surkh aaNkhoN ne sikha diya saheb, fareb bhi karna…
hum haNste haiN ke rote haiN, khabar hone nahi dete…!

saMbhalna zindagi, haath tera bhi choomuNga kisi roz…
abhi to khwaab bhi mere, khwaab mujhe pirone nahi dete…!

ya rab! thodi 'mastttiii...' hi abto kar inaayat tu mujhko…
sahil pe khade ye log, mujhe meri kashti dubone nahi dete…!!


ai'b: bad quality, avgun, dosh
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baarha: continually, baar-baar, lagataar
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[QUOTE=vikramjethi;402032]
saMbhalna zindagi, haath tera bhi choomuNga kisi roz…
abhi to khwaab bhi mere, khwaab mujhe pirone nahi dete…!

ya rab! thodi 'mastttiii...' hi abto kar inaayat tu mujhko…
sahil pe khade ye log, mujhe meri kashti dubone nahi dete…!!


Vikram ji, aaadab!

Bahut achhi lagi ye ghazal. uper quoted sher's khaas taur se pasand aaye.

agli ghazal ka intzar rahega!

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vikram bhai
radhe radhe

subhaan allah kya baat hai dil se daad rom rom khil gaya padhkar is kalaam ko jitni tareef karoon utni kam hai aur ye sher to bas kya kahun

saMbhalna zindagi, haath tera bhi choomuNga kisi roz…
abhi to khwaab bhi mere, khwaab mujhe pirone nahi dete…!

duaon ke saath

radhe radhe ishk bhai...

itni tareef ke liye aur reps ke liye maiN tahe dil se aapka shukarguzaar hooN...
bahut bahut shukriya bhai...


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Vikram bhaa'íi:

namaste!

Aik umdaa'h koShiSh! daad hi daad !

KhuSh rahe.n ...apna Khayaal raKhe.n

duaao.n ke saath ijaazat

aapka
~Dhaval
namaste dhaval bhai...
kaise haiN aap....?

tareef ke liye bahut bahut shukriya bhai...
aapki daad sar-maathe....

aap bhi khush raheN aur achhe se apna khayaal rakheN...


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surkh aaNkhoN ne sikha diya saheb, fareb bhi karna…
hum haNste haiN ke rote haiN, khabar hone nahi dete…!

saMbhalna zindagi, haath tera bhi choomuNga kisi roz…
abhi to khwaab bhi mere, khwaab mujhe pirone nahi dete…!



Vikram ji ,

bahut khuubsurat ghazal likhi hai aapne ... padh ke wakeyii sukuun haasil hua ...

ghazal ke sabhi ashaar khubsuurat haiN aur kuch beintiha ..

upar quote kiye ashaar dil ke bohat qareeb rahe..

daad tah e dil se hai... Qubool farmaaeiN








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surkh aaNkhoN ne sikha diya saheb, fareb bhi karna…
hum haNste haiN ke rote haiN, khabar hone nahi dete…!


janab vikram saahab ko shaaad ka aadaab.. aapki tahreer ne is kadar kaaayal kar ke rakha hai ki jab bhi aata hoon aapki kisi taaza ghazal ko padhkar dil mutmaeen ho jata hai..in chand misron ne itna asar choda hai zahen me ki khayalon me kai dard kai shiqayat zindgi se aur JAAN se ho chala hai.. behad haseen kahyaalaat.. likhte rahen..
shaad..
aadaaB shaaad saheb...
padhne aur pasaNd karne ka bahut bahut shukriya saheb...inaayat hai aapki jo dil khol ke nacheez ki tareef ki hai aapne...bahut bahut shukriya...aap jaise achhe shayar se daad pa kar khushi hoti hai...phir se bahut bahut shukriya...


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haNsi aati hai apne paoN kafan se bahar jaate dekh…
faasla ziNdagi se maut ka ye kam hone nahi dete…!

surkh aaNkhoN ne sikha diya saheb, fareb bhi karna…
hum haNste haiN ke rote haiN, khabar hone nahi dete…!

saMbhalna zindagi, haath tera bhi choomuNga kisi roz…
abhi to khwaab bhi mere, khwaab mujhe pirone nahi dete…!

wow... vikram ji.
awesome wording... bahut achha likha hai aapne. these lines are too good. daad kubul karna.
   
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Vikram,
superb creation as always.... ehsaas dil-fareb rahe...aur aapka andaaz-e-bayaan kya kehna...uffffffffff..katl kar diya aapne.. ek kaamiyaab koshish pe dil se daad hazir hai... yuhi is mehfil ko roshan rakhiye.... khush rahiye...likhte rahiye..
lamha,

dher saari tareef ke liye aapka dheroN shukriya...
aapki daad tahe dil se maNzoor hai....shukriya....


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mere kuchh ai’b haiN aise jo mujhe sone nahi dete…
maraasim mere ashqoN se, mujhe rone nahi dete…!

kuchh katar'ne khat ki rakhi thi kabhi taqiye tale maine…
baazu-e-maazi mere laMbe bahut, mujhe khone nahi dete…!

chaaha baarha maine ki bas, abto khatam hii ho sab…!
naya mausam hai, paudhe naye kyu bone nahi dete…?

haNsi aati hai apne paoN kafan se bahar jaate dekh…
faasla ziNdagi se maut ka ye kam hone nahi dete…!

surkh aaNkhoN ne sikha diya saheb, fareb bhi karna…
hum haNste haiN ke rote haiN, khabar hone nahi dete…!

saMbhalna zindagi, haath tera bhi choomuNga kisi roz…
abhi to khwaab bhi mere, khwaab mujhe pirone nahi dete…!

ya rab! thodi 'mastttiii...' hi abto kar inaayat tu mujhko…
sahil pe khade ye log, mujhe meri kashti dubone nahi dete…!!
Dil se daad kabool kijiye Vikram saahab....

Its such a beautiful piece of work....wonderful...

Likhte rahein aur apne ehsaason se humein waaqif karaate rahein...

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khabar hone nahi dete…!



mere kuchh ai’b haiN aise jo mujhe sone nahi dete…
maraasim mere ashqoN se, mujhe rone nahi dete…!

kuchh katar'ne khat ki rakhi thi kabhi taqiye tale maine…
baazu-e-maazi mere laMbe bahut, mujhe khone nahi dete…!

chaaha baarha maine ki bas, abto khatam hii ho sab…!
naya mausam hai, paudhe naye kyu bone nahi dete…?

haNsi aati hai apne paoN kafan se bahar jaate dekh…
faasla ziNdagi se maut ka ye kam hone nahi dete…!

surkh aaNkhoN ne sikha diya saheb, fareb bhi karna…
hum haNste haiN ke rote haiN, khabar hone nahi dete…!

saMbhalna zindagi, haath tera bhi choomuNga kisi roz…
abhi to khwaab bhi mere, khwaab mujhe pirone nahi dete…!

ya rab! thodi 'mastttiii...' hi abto kar inaayat tu mujhko…
sahil pe khade ye log, mujhe meri kashti dubone nahi dete…!!!

vikram ji bahut hii umda hai yeh peshkash

dil se daad hazir hai.
rajinderseep ji aapka bahut bahut shukriya ise padhne aur pasaNd karne ka...


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naya mausam hai, paudhe naye kyu bone nahi dete



bahut khoob rahi aapki ye peshkesh vikram ji..
daad kubul keejiye..

take care...
shipra ji aapne aa kar padha aur pasaNd kiya mujhe bahut achha laga...
tahe dil se aapka shukrguzaar hooN...
shukriya...


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Vikram sahab AadaaB!

Janab aapki kalam ki baat hi alag hia......... gehrai ki intehaa le aate hai aap apne kalaam meiN..... Sabhi ashaar ek se badhker ek hai.....
Bahut khoob janab...... Daad kabool kijiye....

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Khuda hafez......


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vikran sahab aadab ,mizaj shareef ?

apko paheli padke kafi mahezoz howa .. achi taqleeq pe dad o mubarak baad .. ..ache kahete hain app tamam sher hi qoob rahe .. allah apko khush rakhe ..

dua go

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aapko pasaNd aaya jaan kar behad khushi hui...
aap ek achhe shayar haiN, aap se daad milna mere liye khushi ki baat hai...
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tumhari ae paesh kash bahut achchi lagi
razia
bahut bahut shukriya razia ji...
mujhe jaan kar khushi hui ki aapko meri ye peshkash pasaNd aayee...


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saMbhalna zindagi, haath tera bhi choomuNga kisi roz…
abhi to khwaab bhi mere, khwaab mujhe pirone nahi dete…!

ya rab! thodi 'mastttiii...' hi abto kar inaayat tu mujhko…
sahil pe khade ye log, mujhe meri kashti dubone nahi dete…!!


Vikram ji, aaadab!

Bahut achhi lagi ye ghazal. uper quoted sher's khaas taur se pasand aaye.

agli ghazal ka intzar rahega!


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mujhe aapki tawajjo ka iNtzaar rehta hai...shukriya....


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surkh aaNkhoN ne sikha diya saheb, fareb bhi karna…
hum haNste haiN ke rote haiN, khabar hone nahi dete…!

saMbhalna zindagi, haath tera bhi choomuNga kisi roz…
abhi to khwaab bhi mere, khwaab mujhe pirone nahi dete…!



Vikram ji ,

bahut khuubsurat ghazal likhi hai aapne ... padh ke wakeyii sukuun haasil hua ...

ghazal ke sabhi ashaar khubsuurat haiN aur kuch beintiha ..

upar quote kiye ashaar dil ke bohat qareeb rahe..

daad tah e dil se hai... Qubool farmaaeiN




shukriya zainy jii....
mera likha agar aapko sukooN de gaya to maiN samjhta hooN ki mera likhna safal raha...
aapki daad sar maathe....

post ko edit kar usme word meanings daalne ke liye alag se shukriya...


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wow... vikram ji.
awesome wording... bahut achha likha hai aapne. these lines are too good. daad kubul karna.
Thanks a lot Parul ji..
aapki daad dil se qubuul hai...


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Vikram ji,
behat khubsurat ghazal kahi hai aapne
ehesaas apna sa laga ........
saare aashar mujhe achhi lagi
daad dil se

Diya




Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai


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khabar hone nahi dete…!





surkh aaNkhoN ne sikha diya saheb, fareb bhi karna…
hum haNste haiN ke rote haiN, khabar hone nahi dete…!

saMbhalna zindagi, haath tera bhi choomuNga kisi roz…
abhi to khwaab bhi mere, khwaab mujhe pirone nahi dete…!

ya rab! thodi 'mastttiii...' hi abto kar inaayat tu mujhko…
sahil pe khade ye log, mujhe meri kashti dubone nahi dete…!!


ai'b: bad quality, avgun, dosh
maraasim: relationship, rishta
baarha: continually, baar-baar, lagataar
kata'rne: pieces, tuk'de
baazu-e-maazi: hands of past, ateet ke haath
inaayat: kripa, mercy
ye share mujhe vehad pasand aaye ,vlkram ji. good job..........................
   
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Dil se daad kabool kijiye Vikram saahab....

Its such a beautiful piece of work....wonderful...

Likhte rahein aur apne ehsaason se humein waaqif karaate rahein...

Duaaon k saath...
sabab-e-ishq saheb...aapki daad dil se qubuul hai....
tareef ke liye aur padhne ke liye aapka behad shukrguzaar hooN...
bahut bahut shukriya janaab...!


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Vikram sahab AadaaB!

Janab aapki kalam ki baat hi alag hia......... gehrai ki intehaa le aate hai aap apne kalaam meiN..... Sabhi ashaar ek se badhker ek hai.....
Bahut khoob janab...... Daad kabool kijiye....

Likhate rahiye......
Khuda hafez......
sameer saheb ye aapka pyaar hai jo aap itni tareef kar dete haiN...
bahut bahut shukriya bhai...


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Vikram ji,
behat khubsurat ghazal kahi hai aapne
ehesaas apna sa laga ........
saare aashar mujhe achhi lagi
daad dil se

Diya

diya ji bahut bahut shukriya ise padhne aur pasaNd karne ke liye...
agar aapko is qalaam ke ehsaas apne se lage to mere liye is se badh kar khushi ki kya baat ho sakti hai...
aapka phir se shukriya...


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ye share mujhe vehad pasand aaye ,vlkram ji. good job..........................
bahut bahut shukriya rashmi ji.....


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