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15th July 2010, 11:23 PM
khabar hone nahi dete…!
mere kuchh ai’b haiN aise jo mujhe sone nahi dete…
maraasim mere ashqoN se, mujhe rone nahi dete…!
kuchh katar'ne khat ki rakhi thi kabhi taqiye tale maine…
baazu-e-maazi mere laMbe bahut, mujhe khone nahi dete…!
chaaha baarha maine ki bas, abto khatam hii ho sab…!
naya mausam hai, paudhe naye kyu bone nahi dete…?
haNsi aati hai apne paoN kafan se bahar jaate dekh…
faasla ziNdagi se maut ka ye kam hone nahi dete…!
surkh aaNkhoN ne sikha diya saheb, fareb bhi karna…
hum haNste haiN ke rote haiN, khabar hone nahi dete…!
saMbhalna zindagi, haath tera bhi choomuNga kisi roz…
abhi to khwaab bhi mere, khwaab mujhe pirone nahi dete…!
ya rab! thodi 'mastttiii...' hi abto kar inaayat tu mujhko…
sahil pe khade ye log, mujhe meri kashti dubone nahi dete…!!
ai'b: bad quality, avgun, dosh
maraasim: relationship, rishta
baarha: continually, baar-baar, lagataar
kata'rne: pieces, tuk'de
baazu-e-maazi: hands of past, ateet ke haath
inaayat: kripa, mercy
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
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15th July 2010, 11:51 PM
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Originally Posted by vikramjethi
khabar hone nahi dete…!
mere kuchh ai’b haiN aise jo mujhe sone nahi dete…
maraasim mere ashqoN se, mujhe rone nahi dete…!
kuchh katar'ne khat ki rakhi thi kabhi taqiye tale maine…
baazu-e-maazi mere laMbe bahut, mujhe khone nahi dete…!
chaaha baarha maine ki bas, abto khatam hii ho sab…!
naya mausam hai, paudhe naye kyu bone nahi dete…?
haNsi aati hai apne paoN kafan se bahar jaate dekh…
faasla ziNdagi se maut ka ye kam hone nahi dete…!
surkh aaNkhoN ne sikha diya saheb, fareb bhi karna…
hum haNste haiN ke rote haiN, khabar hone nahi dete…!
saMbhalna zindagi, haath tera bhi choomuNga kisi roz…
abhi to khwaab bhi mere, khwaab mujhe pirone nahi dete…!
ya rab! thodi 'mastttiii...' hi abto kar inaayat tu mujhko…
sahil pe khade ye log, mujhe meri kashti dubone nahi dete…!!!
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Vikram Bhaiyaa...!
Jo bahut saare ' bahut khoob ' aap Amit Da ke liye likhaa karte heiN, hum bhi yahi likhna chaahte the...!
Bas, dil se daad kabool kareiN, hamein to aapka yaha kalaam shreShta raha...!
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Upar waale sher ke liye khaas daad...!
Apna khayaal thik se rakheiN, ok...?
Ashirvaad ke saath
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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16th July 2010, 12:58 AM
"bahut khoob" bhai.....
aapke ehsaass kareebi rahe
urdu shabdo ke meanings likh dete to aur luft aata......
meri subhkamnaye....
amit7600
Aandhiya Gam Ki Chalegi To Sawar Jaoonga Me
Mai To Dariya Hu Samoondar Me Utar Jaaonga Me
Mujhe Suli Pe Chadane Ki Jaroorat Kya Hai Logo
Mere Haato Se Kalam Cheen Lo Yuhi Mar Jaoonga Me
(When i received You in my heart everything changed for me)
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16th July 2010, 02:12 AM
Yeh sher pasandida raha Vikram saheb......
surkh aaNkhoN ne sikha diya saheb, fareb bhi karna…
hum haNste haiN ke rote haiN, khabar hone nahi dete…!
Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil
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16th July 2010, 06:43 AM
surkh aaNkhoN ne sikha diya saheb, fareb bhi karna…
hum haNste haiN ke rote haiN, khabar hone nahi dete…!
saMbhalna zindagi, haath tera bhi choomuNga kisi roz…
abhi to khwaab bhi mere, khwaab mujhe pirone nahi dete…!
Its Too Good ......... Vikram Ji ! very Impressive ! ver touching.... ! dil se daad hazir hai....yunhi likhte rahen... khush rahen....
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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16th July 2010, 09:00 AM
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khabar hone nahi dete…!
mere kuchh ai’b haiN aise jo mujhe sone nahi dete…
maraasim mere ashqoN se, mujhe rone nahi dete…!
kuchh katar'ne khat ki rakhi thi kabhi taqiye tale maine…
baazu-e-maazi mere laMbe bahut, mujhe khone nahi dete…!
chaaha baarha maine ki bas, abto khatam hii ho sab…!
naya mausam hai, paudhe naye kyu bone nahi dete…?
haNsi aati hai apne paoN kafan se bahar jaate dekh…
faasla ziNdagi se maut ka ye kam hone nahi dete…!
surkh aaNkhoN ne sikha diya saheb, fareb bhi karna…
hum haNste haiN ke rote haiN, khabar hone nahi dete…!
saMbhalna zindagi, haath tera bhi choomuNga kisi roz…
abhi to khwaab bhi mere, khwaab mujhe pirone nahi dete…!
ya rab! thodi 'mastttiii...' hi abto kar inaayat tu mujhko…
sahil pe khade ye log, mujhe meri kashti dubone nahi dete…!!!
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vikram bhai
radhe radhe
subhaan allah kya baat hai dil se daad rom rom khil gaya padhkar is kalaam ko jitni tareef karoon utni kam hai aur ye sher to bas kya kahun
saMbhalna zindagi, haath tera bhi choomuNga kisi roz…
abhi to khwaab bhi mere, khwaab mujhe pirone nahi dete…!
duaon ke saath
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
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16th July 2010, 09:06 AM
Vikram bhaa'íi:
namaste!
Aik umdaa'h koShiSh! daad hi daad !
KhuSh rahe.n ...apna Khayaal raKhe.n
duaao.n ke saath ijaazat
aapka
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17th July 2010, 12:57 PM
haNsi aati hai apne paoN kafan se bahar jaate dekh…
faasla ziNdagi se maut ka ye kam hone nahi dete…!
surkh aaNkhoN ne sikha diya saheb, fareb bhi karna…
hum haNste haiN ke rote haiN, khabar hone nahi dete…!
janab vikram saahab ko shaaad ka aadaab.. aapki tahreer ne is kadar kaaayal kar ke rakha hai ki jab bhi aata hoon aapki kisi taaza ghazal ko padhkar dil mutmaeen ho jata hai..in chand misron ne itna asar choda hai zahen me ki khayalon me kai dard kai shiqayat zindgi se aur JAAN se ho chala hai.. behad haseen kahyaalaat.. likhte rahen..
shaad..
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17th July 2010, 05:13 PM
hahahahahaha....danny bhaiya, aapka taareef karne ka yeh aNdaaz mujhe bahut pasaNd aaya...itni tareef aur reps ke liye aapka bahut bahut shukriya bhaiya... aapki daad sar-maathe...
aap bhi apna khayaal behad achhi tarha se rakhiyega...
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
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17th July 2010, 05:16 PM
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"bahut khoob" bhai.....
aapke ehsaass kareebi rahe
urdu shabdo ke meanings likh dete to aur luft aata......
meri subhkamnaye....
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amit da pasaNd karne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya....
maiN abhi koshish karta hooN ki kisi tarha post ko edit karke isme shabd arthoN sahit insert kiye ja sakeN...
aapki shikayat abhi door kiye deta hooN....
ai'b: bad quality, avgun, dosh
maraasim: relationship, rishta
baarha: continually, baar-baar, lagataar
kata'rne: pieces, tuk'de
baazu-e-maazi: hands of past, ateet ke haath
inaayat: kripa, mercy
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
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17th July 2010, 07:27 PM
Vikram,
superb creation as always.... ehsaas dil-fareb rahe...aur aapka andaaz-e-bayaan kya kehna...uffffffffff..katl kar diya aapne.. ek kaamiyaab koshish pe dil se daad hazir hai... yuhi is mehfil ko roshan rakhiye.... khush rahiye...likhte rahiye..
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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17th July 2010, 08:25 PM
originally posted by vikram jethi
khabar hone nahi dete…!
mere kuchh ai’b haiN aise jo mujhe sone nahi dete…
maraasim mere ashqoN se, mujhe rone nahi dete…!
kuchh katar'ne khat ki rakhi thi kabhi taqiye tale maine…
baazu-e-maazi mere laMbe bahut, mujhe khone nahi dete…!
chaaha baarha maine ki bas, abto khatam hii ho sab…!
naya mausam hai, paudhe naye kyu bone nahi dete…?
haNsi aati hai apne paoN kafan se bahar jaate dekh…
faasla ziNdagi se maut ka ye kam hone nahi dete…!
surkh aaNkhoN ne sikha diya saheb, fareb bhi karna…
hum haNste haiN ke rote haiN, khabar hone nahi dete…!
saMbhalna zindagi, haath tera bhi choomuNga kisi roz…
abhi to khwaab bhi mere, khwaab mujhe pirone nahi dete…!
ya rab! thodi 'mastttiii...' hi abto kar inaayat tu mujhko…
sahil pe khade ye log, mujhe meri kashti dubone nahi dete…!!!
vikram ji bahut hii umda hai yeh peshkash
dil se daad hazir hai.
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18th July 2010, 11:11 AM
chaaha baarha maine ki bas, abto khatam hii ho sab…!
naya mausam hai, paudhe naye kyu bone nahi dete
bahut khoob rahi aapki ye peshkesh vikram ji..
daad kubul keejiye..
take care...
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18th July 2010, 09:30 PM
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Yeh sher pasandida raha Vikram saheb......
surkh aaNkhoN ne sikha diya saheb, fareb bhi karna…
hum haNste haiN ke rote haiN, khabar hone nahi dete…!
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inaayat hai sajid bhai...
bahut bahut shukriya....
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
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18th July 2010, 09:33 PM
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surkh aaNkhoN ne sikha diya saheb, fareb bhi karna…
hum haNste haiN ke rote haiN, khabar hone nahi dete…!
saMbhalna zindagi, haath tera bhi choomuNga kisi roz…
abhi to khwaab bhi mere, khwaab mujhe pirone nahi dete…!
Its Too Good ......... Vikram Ji ! very Impressive ! ver touching.... ! dil se daad hazir hai....yunhi likhte rahen... khush rahen....
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....
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bahut bahut shukriya naresh jii...
aapne mehsoos kiya mujhe behad achha laga...
aapki dil se nikli daad dil se swikaar hai...
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
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18th July 2010, 09:55 PM
vikran sahab aadab ,mizaj shareef ?
apko paheli padke kafi mahezoz howa .. achi taqleeq pe dad o mubarak baad .. ..ache kahete hain app tamam sher hi qoob rahe .. allah apko khush rakhe ..
dua go
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19th July 2010, 09:08 AM
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Originally Posted by vikramjethi
khabar hone nahi dete…!
mere kuchh ai’b haiN aise jo mujhe sone nahi dete…
maraasim mere ashqoN se, mujhe rone nahi dete…!
kuchh katar'ne khat ki rakhi thi kabhi taqiye tale maine…
baazu-e-maazi mere laMbe bahut, mujhe khone nahi dete…!
chaaha baarha maine ki bas, abto khatam hii ho sab…!
naya mausam hai, paudhe naye kyu bone nahi dete…?
haNsi aati hai apne paoN kafan se bahar jaate dekh…
faasla ziNdagi se maut ka ye kam hone nahi dete…!
surkh aaNkhoN ne sikha diya saheb, fareb bhi karna…
hum haNste haiN ke rote haiN, khabar hone nahi dete…!
saMbhalna zindagi, haath tera bhi choomuNga kisi roz…
abhi to khwaab bhi mere, khwaab mujhe pirone nahi dete…!
ya rab! thodi 'mastttiii...' hi abto kar inaayat tu mujhko…
sahil pe khade ye log, mujhe meri kashti dubone nahi dete…!!
ai'b: bad quality, avgun, dosh
maraasim: relationship, rishta
baarha: continually, baar-baar, lagataar
kata'rne: pieces, tuk'de
baazu-e-maazi: hands of past, ateet ke haath
inaayat: kripa, mercy
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Bahut khoob vikram
tumhari ae paesh kash bahut achchi lagi
razia
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19th July 2010, 11:49 AM
[QUOTE=vikramjethi;402032]
saMbhalna zindagi, haath tera bhi choomuNga kisi roz…
abhi to khwaab bhi mere, khwaab mujhe pirone nahi dete…!
ya rab! thodi 'mastttiii...' hi abto kar inaayat tu mujhko…
sahil pe khade ye log, mujhe meri kashti dubone nahi dete…!!
Vikram ji, aaadab!
Bahut achhi lagi ye ghazal. uper quoted sher's khaas taur se pasand aaye.
agli ghazal ka intzar rahega!
Mann
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19th July 2010, 08:07 PM
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vikram bhai
radhe radhe
subhaan allah kya baat hai dil se daad rom rom khil gaya padhkar is kalaam ko jitni tareef karoon utni kam hai aur ye sher to bas kya kahun
saMbhalna zindagi, haath tera bhi choomuNga kisi roz…
abhi to khwaab bhi mere, khwaab mujhe pirone nahi dete…!
duaon ke saath
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radhe radhe ishk bhai...
itni tareef ke liye aur reps ke liye maiN tahe dil se aapka shukarguzaar hooN...
bahut bahut shukriya bhai...
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
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19th July 2010, 08:12 PM
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Vikram bhaa'íi:
namaste!
Aik umdaa'h koShiSh! daad hi daad !
KhuSh rahe.n ...apna Khayaal raKhe.n
duaao.n ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~Dhaval
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namaste dhaval bhai...
kaise haiN aap....?
tareef ke liye bahut bahut shukriya bhai...
aapki daad sar-maathe....
aap bhi khush raheN aur achhe se apna khayaal rakheN...
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
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19th July 2010, 10:53 PM
surkh aaNkhoN ne sikha diya saheb, fareb bhi karna…
hum haNste haiN ke rote haiN, khabar hone nahi dete…!
saMbhalna zindagi, haath tera bhi choomuNga kisi roz…
abhi to khwaab bhi mere, khwaab mujhe pirone nahi dete…!
Vikram ji ,
bahut khuubsurat ghazal likhi hai aapne ... padh ke wakeyii sukuun haasil hua ...
ghazal ke sabhi ashaar khubsuurat haiN aur kuch beintiha ..
upar quote kiye ashaar dil ke bohat qareeb rahe..
daad tah e dil se hai... Qubool farmaaeiN
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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20th July 2010, 11:32 PM
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
haNsi aati hai apne paoN kafan se bahar jaate dekh…
faasla ziNdagi se maut ka ye kam hone nahi dete…!
surkh aaNkhoN ne sikha diya saheb, fareb bhi karna…
hum haNste haiN ke rote haiN, khabar hone nahi dete…!
janab vikram saahab ko shaaad ka aadaab.. aapki tahreer ne is kadar kaaayal kar ke rakha hai ki jab bhi aata hoon aapki kisi taaza ghazal ko padhkar dil mutmaeen ho jata hai..in chand misron ne itna asar choda hai zahen me ki khayalon me kai dard kai shiqayat zindgi se aur JAAN se ho chala hai.. behad haseen kahyaalaat.. likhte rahen..
shaad..
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aadaaB shaaad saheb...
padhne aur pasaNd karne ka bahut bahut shukriya saheb...inaayat hai aapki jo dil khol ke nacheez ki tareef ki hai aapne...bahut bahut shukriya...aap jaise achhe shayar se daad pa kar khushi hoti hai...phir se bahut bahut shukriya...
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
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21st July 2010, 08:44 PM
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haNsi aati hai apne paoN kafan se bahar jaate dekh…
faasla ziNdagi se maut ka ye kam hone nahi dete…!
surkh aaNkhoN ne sikha diya saheb, fareb bhi karna…
hum haNste haiN ke rote haiN, khabar hone nahi dete…!
saMbhalna zindagi, haath tera bhi choomuNga kisi roz…
abhi to khwaab bhi mere, khwaab mujhe pirone nahi dete…!
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wow... vikram ji.
awesome wording... bahut achha likha hai aapne. these lines are too good. daad kubul karna.
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22nd July 2010, 10:53 PM
lamha,
dher saari tareef ke liye aapka dheroN shukriya...
aapki daad tahe dil se maNzoor hai....shukriya....
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
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23rd July 2010, 02:13 AM
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Originally Posted by vikramjethi
mere kuchh ai’b haiN aise jo mujhe sone nahi dete…
maraasim mere ashqoN se, mujhe rone nahi dete…!
kuchh katar'ne khat ki rakhi thi kabhi taqiye tale maine…
baazu-e-maazi mere laMbe bahut, mujhe khone nahi dete…!
chaaha baarha maine ki bas, abto khatam hii ho sab…!
naya mausam hai, paudhe naye kyu bone nahi dete…?
haNsi aati hai apne paoN kafan se bahar jaate dekh…
faasla ziNdagi se maut ka ye kam hone nahi dete…!
surkh aaNkhoN ne sikha diya saheb, fareb bhi karna…
hum haNste haiN ke rote haiN, khabar hone nahi dete…!
saMbhalna zindagi, haath tera bhi choomuNga kisi roz…
abhi to khwaab bhi mere, khwaab mujhe pirone nahi dete…!
ya rab! thodi 'mastttiii...' hi abto kar inaayat tu mujhko…
sahil pe khade ye log, mujhe meri kashti dubone nahi dete…!!
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Dil se daad kabool kijiye Vikram saahab....
Its such a beautiful piece of work....wonderful...
Likhte rahein aur apne ehsaason se humein waaqif karaate rahein...
Duaaon k saath...
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23rd July 2010, 10:32 PM
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Originally Posted by rajinderseep
originally posted by vikram jethi
khabar hone nahi dete…!
mere kuchh ai’b haiN aise jo mujhe sone nahi dete…
maraasim mere ashqoN se, mujhe rone nahi dete…!
kuchh katar'ne khat ki rakhi thi kabhi taqiye tale maine…
baazu-e-maazi mere laMbe bahut, mujhe khone nahi dete…!
chaaha baarha maine ki bas, abto khatam hii ho sab…!
naya mausam hai, paudhe naye kyu bone nahi dete…?
haNsi aati hai apne paoN kafan se bahar jaate dekh…
faasla ziNdagi se maut ka ye kam hone nahi dete…!
surkh aaNkhoN ne sikha diya saheb, fareb bhi karna…
hum haNste haiN ke rote haiN, khabar hone nahi dete…!
saMbhalna zindagi, haath tera bhi choomuNga kisi roz…
abhi to khwaab bhi mere, khwaab mujhe pirone nahi dete…!
ya rab! thodi 'mastttiii...' hi abto kar inaayat tu mujhko…
sahil pe khade ye log, mujhe meri kashti dubone nahi dete…!!!
vikram ji bahut hii umda hai yeh peshkash
dil se daad hazir hai.
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rajinderseep ji aapka bahut bahut shukriya ise padhne aur pasaNd karne ka...
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
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23rd July 2010, 10:34 PM
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Originally Posted by shipra
chaaha baarha maine ki bas, abto khatam hii ho sab…!
naya mausam hai, paudhe naye kyu bone nahi dete
bahut khoob rahi aapki ye peshkesh vikram ji..
daad kubul keejiye..
take care...
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shipra ji aapne aa kar padha aur pasaNd kiya mujhe bahut achha laga...
tahe dil se aapka shukrguzaar hooN...
shukriya...
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
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24th July 2010, 02:57 AM
Vikram sahab AadaaB!
Janab aapki kalam ki baat hi alag hia......... gehrai ki intehaa le aate hai aap apne kalaam meiN..... Sabhi ashaar ek se badhker ek hai.....
Bahut khoob janab...... Daad kabool kijiye....
Likhate rahiye......
Khuda hafez......
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24th July 2010, 05:55 PM
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Originally Posted by abdulqadeert
vikran sahab aadab ,mizaj shareef ?
apko paheli padke kafi mahezoz howa .. achi taqleeq pe dad o mubarak baad .. ..ache kahete hain app tamam sher hi qoob rahe .. allah apko khush rakhe ..
dua go
qadeertoopchi
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aadaB qadeer saheb...
aapko pasaNd aaya jaan kar behad khushi hui...
aap ek achhe shayar haiN, aap se daad milna mere liye khushi ki baat hai...
aapka bahut bahut shukriya....
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
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24th July 2010, 05:59 PM
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Originally Posted by yasmeenraaz
Bahut khoob vikram
tumhari ae paesh kash bahut achchi lagi
razia
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bahut bahut shukriya razia ji...
mujhe jaan kar khushi hui ki aapko meri ye peshkash pasaNd aayee...
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
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24th July 2010, 06:07 PM
[QUOTE=Mann-Limitless;402628]
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Originally Posted by vikramjethi
saMbhalna zindagi, haath tera bhi choomuNga kisi roz…
abhi to khwaab bhi mere, khwaab mujhe pirone nahi dete…!
ya rab! thodi 'mastttiii...' hi abto kar inaayat tu mujhko…
sahil pe khade ye log, mujhe meri kashti dubone nahi dete…!!
Vikram ji, aaadab!
Bahut achhi lagi ye ghazal. uper quoted sher's khaas taur se pasand aaye.
agli ghazal ka intzar rahega!
Mann
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bahut bahut shukriya mann saheb mere qalaam ko padhne aur pasaNd karne ka....
mujhe aapki tawajjo ka iNtzaar rehta hai...shukriya....
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
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25th July 2010, 05:55 PM
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Originally Posted by zainy
surkh aaNkhoN ne sikha diya saheb, fareb bhi karna…
hum haNste haiN ke rote haiN, khabar hone nahi dete…!
saMbhalna zindagi, haath tera bhi choomuNga kisi roz…
abhi to khwaab bhi mere, khwaab mujhe pirone nahi dete…!
Vikram ji ,
bahut khuubsurat ghazal likhi hai aapne ... padh ke wakeyii sukuun haasil hua ...
ghazal ke sabhi ashaar khubsuurat haiN aur kuch beintiha ..
upar quote kiye ashaar dil ke bohat qareeb rahe..
daad tah e dil se hai... Qubool farmaaeiN
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shukriya zainy jii....
mera likha agar aapko sukooN de gaya to maiN samjhta hooN ki mera likhna safal raha...
aapki daad sar maathe....
post ko edit kar usme word meanings daalne ke liye alag se shukriya...
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
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25th July 2010, 05:58 PM
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Originally Posted by Parul
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wow... vikram ji.
awesome wording... bahut achha likha hai aapne. these lines are too good. daad kubul karna.
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Thanks a lot Parul ji..
aapki daad dil se qubuul hai...
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
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26th July 2010, 01:30 PM
Vikram ji,
behat khubsurat ghazal kahi hai aapne
ehesaas apna sa laga ........
saare aashar mujhe achhi lagi
daad dil se
Diya
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
Diya
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31st July 2010, 02:35 PM
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Originally Posted by vikramjethi
khabar hone nahi dete…!
surkh aaNkhoN ne sikha diya saheb, fareb bhi karna…
hum haNste haiN ke rote haiN, khabar hone nahi dete…!
saMbhalna zindagi, haath tera bhi choomuNga kisi roz…
abhi to khwaab bhi mere, khwaab mujhe pirone nahi dete…!
ya rab! thodi 'mastttiii...' hi abto kar inaayat tu mujhko…
sahil pe khade ye log, mujhe meri kashti dubone nahi dete…!!
ai'b: bad quality, avgun, dosh
maraasim: relationship, rishta
baarha: continually, baar-baar, lagataar
kata'rne: pieces, tuk'de
baazu-e-maazi: hands of past, ateet ke haath
inaayat: kripa, mercy
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ye share mujhe vehad pasand aaye ,vlkram ji. good job..........................
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31st July 2010, 05:02 PM
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Originally Posted by sabab-e-ishq
Dil se daad kabool kijiye Vikram saahab....
Its such a beautiful piece of work....wonderful...
Likhte rahein aur apne ehsaason se humein waaqif karaate rahein...
Duaaon k saath...
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sabab-e-ishq saheb...aapki daad dil se qubuul hai....
tareef ke liye aur padhne ke liye aapka behad shukrguzaar hooN...
bahut bahut shukriya janaab...!
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
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31st July 2010, 05:06 PM
sameer saheb ye aapka pyaar hai jo aap itni tareef kar dete haiN...
bahut bahut shukriya bhai...
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
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1st August 2010, 10:26 PM
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Originally Posted by Diya_Jale
Vikram ji,
behat khubsurat ghazal kahi hai aapne
ehesaas apna sa laga ........
saare aashar mujhe achhi lagi
daad dil se
Diya
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diya ji bahut bahut shukriya ise padhne aur pasaNd karne ke liye...
agar aapko is qalaam ke ehsaas apne se lage to mere liye is se badh kar khushi ki kya baat ho sakti hai...
aapka phir se shukriya...
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
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21st June 2011, 08:55 PM
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Originally Posted by Rashmi sharma
ye share mujhe vehad pasand aaye ,vlkram ji. good job..........................
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bahut bahut shukriya rashmi ji.....
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
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27th June 2011, 09:50 PM
bahut he behetreen hai tarif k liye alfaaz nahi hai Vikramji daad khubul kijiye
maana ki aap ki nazaro mein kuch nahi hai hum
par unse jakar puchiye jinhe hasil nahi hai hum
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