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Post khat - 14th October 2005, 08:38 AM

""kyo kuch nahi likhte ya toh bata do
ek khat likh kar mera ji bahla do
saalo se suna hai mere mann ka aangan
kalam ke jaadu se iss mein bijli chamka do
ab thandi pad gai hai mere dil ki lagan
paegaame mohabbat se ise phir pighla do
kitne der jiye koi yaado ke sahaare
ek baar mere sapno ko sach toh bana do
bada hi pawaitr hai ye pyar ka jasba
mere khali jeewan mein iss ka rass chalka do
mere khayal bhatakte hai teri talaash mein
shabdo ki roshni se mujhe manzil dikhla do
wirha ke andhere mein chadha do koi chaand
mere jalte tann ko chaandni se nahla do""


IT IS NOT ME WHO SPEAKS.......BUT LIFE WITHIN ME WHO HAS MUCH TO SAY!!!!!
   
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14th October 2005, 02:01 PM

Mayuri Ji!

Bahot hi accha kalam hai!

wirha ke andhere mein chadha do koi chaand
mere jalte tann ko chaandni se nahla do

Wah! Jawab nahin!

Rajan!!


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14th October 2005, 03:22 PM

Hi Mayu,

All the comment for this shayaree will be a comment.
Tooo good.

Keep writing keep smiling.

Vijay


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14th October 2005, 09:51 PM

accha likkha hai aapne.likhte raho


"Roz Kii Taraah Aaj Bhii Taare
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN
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15th October 2005, 12:28 AM

""kyo kuch nahi likhte ya toh bata do
ek khat likh kar mera ji bahla do
saalo se suna hai mere mann ka aangan
kalam ke jaadu se iss mein bijli chamka do

ab thandi pad gai hai mere dil ki lagan
paegaame mohabbat se ise phir pighla do
kitne der jiye koi yaado ke sahaare
ek baar mere sapno ko sach toh bana do

bada hi pawaitr hai ye pyar ka jasba
mere khali jeewan mein iss ka rass chalka do
mere khayal bhatakte hai teri talaash mein
shabdo ki roshni se mujhe manzil dikhla do
wirha ke andhere mein chadha do koi chaand
mere jalte tann ko chaandni se nahla do""


Very beautiful expression...soft n simple.. loved it...likhti rahiye...


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