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Ghazal ki Zubaan likh du ! - 1st October 2006, 10:59 AM
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Door zehen me chhupa ek Armaan likh du !
Lafzo ki bayaani, ghazal ki Zubaan likh du !!

Qaatil qaraar diya jaaye, nazar ko hi kyon!
Naam gunehgaar ka Dil-e-Nadaan likh du!!

Karne lage Daga, dekho alfaaz bhi humse!
Chaahu saara khwaabo ka, Jahaan likh du!!

Gumnaam Yu Huye, is dillagi me Jaana.N !
Gar Pooche koi, Takhallus Anjaan likh du!!

Ye Zindagi hai kya, mehez chand saanse !
Tere naam se bani, apni Pehchaan likh du!!

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Re: Ghazal ki Zubaan likh du ! - 1st October 2006, 06:40 PM
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Door zehen me chhupa ek Armaan likh du !
Lafzo ki bayaani, ghazal ki Zubaan likh du !!

Qaatil qaraar diya jaaye, nazar ko hi kyon!
Naam gunehgaar ka Dil-e-Nadaan likh du!!

Karne lage Daga, dekho alfaaz bhi humse!
Chaahu saara khwaabo ka, Jahaan likh du!!

Gumnaam Yu Huye, is dillagi me Jaana.N !
Gar Pooche koi, Takhallus Anjaan likh du!!

Ye Zindagi hai kya, mehez chand saanse !
Tere naam se bani, apni Pehchaan likh du!!

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hi pallavi kaisi hai aap? kahaa gaayab ho gayi thi ?

kaafi dino baad dikhi ho yahaa is site par

i hope everything is well in ur life.

kyaa khoob ghazal likhi hai pallo tumne sach mai is ghazal ke jazbaat sidhe dil mai utar gaye

jaise maine tumaaree ye ghazal padhi hamesha ki tarah dil mai kuchh aage likhne ke khayaalat ubhar aaye, ummid kartaa hu tumhe pasand aayenge,

aise hi likhti raho aur khush raho hameshaa yahi dua hai




tu de de izaazat agar ,tere dil ke kaagaz par
Mai apne dil ke kuchh chhupe farmaan likh du

tere zulf hai chandani raat aur tu hai mahataab
tere daman ko khusnumaa sa aasmaan likh du

tere aane se hoti hai khushiyo ki baarish harsu
tere laboN ko bahaaroN ki aa mushkaaN likh du

ye zeest bhi aur ye jaan bhi teri hai, teri kasam
dil par tere mahobbat ki haseeN daastaan likh du



bas apna khayaal rakhana aur khush rahna
yunhi likhti raho aur aati raho

regards
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1st October 2006, 08:52 PM
pallavi bhaot hi achha likha hai aapne

bas aise hi likhti raho pasand aayi aapki ye gazal

aapka dost
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1st October 2006, 10:18 PM
Door zehen me chhupa ek Armaan likh du !
Lafzo ki bayaani, ghazal ki Zubaan likh du !!

Qaatil qaraar diya jaaye, nazar ko hi kyon!
Naam gunehgaar ka Dil-e-Nadaan likh du!!

kyaa baat hai....


Karne lage Daga, dekho alfaaz bhi humse!
Chaahu saara khwaabo ka, Jahaan likh du!!

Gumnaam Yu Huye, is dillagi me Jaana.N !
Gar Pooche koi, Takhallus Anjaan likh du!!

waaaaaahhh... bith the shers were awesome...


Ye Zindagi hai kya, mehez chand saanse !
Tere naam se bani, apni Pehchaan likh du!!

beautifulll...


Dear Partner,

As is said that day, this one is reallly very beautifull... wonderfully expressed as you always do... mujhe bahut pasand aayi tumhaari yeh ghazal... Likhti raha karo aise hi...

Take care too...

Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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waise dd hum naadaano se itni naaraazgi v kyun?? kabhi kabhiapni mehfilen v saja diya karo aap.hum jaise naadaano ke seekhne ke liye.

aur kalaam ke bare me kya kahun dd, bas sach me maza aa gaya.bas dil ki gehraaiyon se daad kabool farmaaiye. umeed karta hun ki aap aage v yunhi likhti rahengi.............


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hi - 2nd October 2006, 04:05 PM
Door zehen me chhupa ek Armaan likh du !
Lafzo ki bayaani, ghazal ki Zubaan likh du !!

Qaatil qaraar diya jaaye, nazar ko hi kyon!
Naam gunehgaar ka Dil-e-Nadaan likh du!!

Karne lage Daga, dekho alfaaz bhi humse!
Chaahu saara khwaabo ka, Jahaan likh du!!

Gumnaam Yu Huye, is dillagi me Jaana.N !
Gar Pooche koi, Takhallus Anjaan likh du!!

Ye Zindagi hai kya, mehez chand saanse !
Tere naam se bani, apni Pehchaan likh du!!

pallavi appko raj ka parnaam......appki gazal parhi bhut pasand i ,samajh nahi aa raha ki kis share ki tareef karu or kiski na karu......poori gazal he itni pyari bani hai ki bass bata nahi sakta......meri dil se daad kabool karna or yu he likhti rehna.....take care.......raj......

un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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Re: Ghazal ki Zubaan likh du ! - 3rd October 2006, 10:13 AM
Door zehen me chhupa ek Armaan likh du !
Lafzo ki bayaani, ghazal ki Zubaan likh du !!

WAH...!!! BAHOOT SUNDAR

Qaatil qaraar diya jaaye, nazar ko hi kyon!
Naam gunehgaar ka Dil-e-Nadaan likh du!!

Gumnaam Yu Huye, is dillagi me Jaana.N !
Gar Pooche koi, Takhallus Anjaan likh du!!

Ye Zindagi hai kya, mehez chand saanse !
Tere naam se bani, apni Pehchaan likh du!!

BAHOOT SUNDAR..PALLAVI JI....
GAZAL KE DHAAGE MEIN AAPNE un anchuye zajbaatoo ko piro dia hai jike choone se bhi toot jane ka darr lagta hai....aisa hunar,,aisa kaabiliyat aap jaise shaqksh mein hi ho sakti hai...ek shaandaar gazal par meri dil se nikli daad kubool kijiye...
aapki gazal subah subah padh kar dil-o-dimaag khush ho gaye...mera din bana_ne ke liye bhi aapka aabhari hoon...take care
-MANOJ

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Pallo My Dear...

Tumne itni umda shayari karni shuroo kar di hai...ab tau yahan ka rukh jaldi jaldi karna padega...sach mein padhkar jo lutf mila main bayaan nahin kar sakti...

Qaatil qaraar diya jaaye, nazar ko hi kyon!
Naam gunehgaar ka Dil-e-Nadaan likh du!!

Waah! kya sher kaha hai...ek ek sher dil pe thaap deta hua guzarta hai...aur zubaan se waah waah nikal rahi hai...khush raho...yoonhi iss mehfil mein nageene pesh karti raho...

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Re: Ghazal ki Zubaan likh du ! - 3rd October 2006, 08:29 PM
Ye Zindagi hai kya, mehez chand saanse !
Tere naam se bani, apni Pehchaan likh du!!

wah pallavi ji

kya aasar hain wah kya kahne .....
bahut hi khoob surat sher hain aapke or aapka andaze baya.n bhi bahut khoob hai...............

her ek sher per meri dil se daad kabool kigiyega......... or ese hi likhte rahiyega...........................

take care
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3rd October 2006, 10:10 PM
pallaviji, pehli baar apki gazal padhne ka moka mila hai bahut hi pyari lagi.

"aapki lafzon ki ladi ki kya baat,
kaho to sari daad apke naam likh du"


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gr8.....pallavi.....bahut khoob likhti haiN, par na jane kahaN gum haiN aaj-kal aap.....miss u

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