Shayri.com  

Go Back   Shayri.com > English/Hindi/Other Languages Poetry > Hindi Kavitayen
Reload this Page jiwan darshan

Reply
 
Thread Tools Rate Thread Display Modes
jiwan darshan
Old
  (#1)
Rashmi sharma
volunteer
Rashmi sharma has much to be proud ofRashmi sharma has much to be proud ofRashmi sharma has much to be proud ofRashmi sharma has much to be proud ofRashmi sharma has much to be proud ofRashmi sharma has much to be proud ofRashmi sharma has much to be proud ofRashmi sharma has much to be proud of
 
Rashmi sharma's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 723
Join Date: May 2010
Location: chandigarh
Rep Power: 24
jiwan darshan - 20th July 2010, 08:48 PM
Dunia ke dastoor ye kaise
man mera samaj na paaye
kab koi kitna paas hai tere
kab voh door ho jaaye

jin bahon ne pala posa
ab vo baheiyn kahan kho gai
malli ne jab choda upban
sab kalian viran ho gai

is virane or patjhad me
dushbar mera her saans ho gya
koml or krunamayy man me
bas peeda ka vaas ho gya

anjaani anchaahi peeda
man mere ko kachot rahi hai
kismat meri mujhe rula kar
ab kyon aansoo pochh rahi hai

lagta hai ye sab jug jhutha
or sabhi ka pyar bhi jhutha
kya rakha hai is jeene me
jab saara sansar hi jhutha

saari dunia nashvan hai
jo atta hai usne jana
paid, ye poudhe, chahe pakshi
sabne hi ek din hai jana

lakh koshishain chahe kar lo
bujh jaati jiwan ki baati
kam agar koi achchha kar lo
achchaian bas amar ho jaati
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#2)
naresh_mehra110
Anshumali
naresh_mehra110 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comnaresh_mehra110 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comnaresh_mehra110 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comnaresh_mehra110 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comnaresh_mehra110 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comnaresh_mehra110 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comnaresh_mehra110 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comnaresh_mehra110 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comnaresh_mehra110 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comnaresh_mehra110 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comnaresh_mehra110 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.com
 
naresh_mehra110's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 7,420
Join Date: Apr 2009
Location: DELHI (INDIA)
Rep Power: 87
20th July 2010, 10:38 PM
Aapki Rachna ke ehsaas acche lage mujhe......nice poetry ! rashmi Ji !

very nice creation...... !



YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...

---Naresh Mehra----
  Send a message via Yahoo to naresh_mehra110  
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#3)
parveen komal
devil ! forgive me
parveen komal is a splendid one to beholdparveen komal is a splendid one to beholdparveen komal is a splendid one to beholdparveen komal is a splendid one to beholdparveen komal is a splendid one to beholdparveen komal is a splendid one to beholdparveen komal is a splendid one to beholdparveen komal is a splendid one to behold
 
parveen komal's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 930
Join Date: Jul 2010
Location: MUMBAI PATIALA
Rep Power: 23
21st July 2010, 09:34 AM
Rashmi ji bahut hi shaandar Kasheedakaari ki hai aapne Cyber phulkaari par.
is virane or patjhad me
dushbar mera her saans ho gya
koml or krunamayy man me
bas peeda ka vaas ho gya.

Kamaal ka ahsaas hai, bas jara spelling me izafa karke Koml ki jagah komal likh ke dekhie.
Sachhi Saaf Baat : YE RACHNA MUJHE ISLIE BHI PASAND AAI KE ISME MERA NAAM HAI.
Last edited by parveen komal; 21st July 2010 at 09:36 AM..
  Send a message via Yahoo to parveen komal Send a message via MSN to parveen komal Send a message via Skype™ to parveen komal 
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#4)
sajid_ghayel
Registered User
sajid_ghayel has a brilliant futuresajid_ghayel has a brilliant futuresajid_ghayel has a brilliant futuresajid_ghayel has a brilliant futuresajid_ghayel has a brilliant futuresajid_ghayel has a brilliant futuresajid_ghayel has a brilliant futuresajid_ghayel has a brilliant futuresajid_ghayel has a brilliant futuresajid_ghayel has a brilliant futuresajid_ghayel has a brilliant future
 
sajid_ghayel's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 1,849
Join Date: Feb 2009
Location: Mumbai
Rep Power: 32
21st July 2010, 02:02 PM
lakh koshishain chahe kar lo
bujh jaati jiwan ki baati
kam agar koi achchha kar lo
achchaian bas amar ho jaati

Beautiful work Rashmi Jee...

Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil

Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...

Mob.: +971 501297654
  Send a message via Yahoo to sajid_ghayel  
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#5)
shakuntala vyas
Registered User
shakuntala vyas is a splendid one to beholdshakuntala vyas is a splendid one to beholdshakuntala vyas is a splendid one to beholdshakuntala vyas is a splendid one to beholdshakuntala vyas is a splendid one to beholdshakuntala vyas is a splendid one to beholdshakuntala vyas is a splendid one to beholdshakuntala vyas is a splendid one to behold
 
Offline
Posts: 337
Join Date: Nov 2009
Rep Power: 24
21st July 2010, 03:58 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Rashmi sharma View Post
Dunia ke dastoor ye kaise
man mera samaj na paaye
kab koi kitna paas hai tere
kab voh door ho jaaye

jin bahon ne pala posa
ab vo baheiyn kahan kho gai
malli ne jab choda upban
sab kalian viran ho gai

is virane or patjhad me
dushbar mera her saans ho gya
koml or krunamayy man me
bas peeda ka vaas ho gya

anjaani anchaahi peeda
man mere ko kachot rahi hai
kismat meri mujhe rula kar
ab kyon aansoo pochh rahi hai

lagta hai ye sab jug jhutha
or sabhi ka pyar bhi jhutha
kya rakha hai is jeene me
jab saara sansar hi jhutha

saari dunia nashvan hai
jo atta hai usne jana
paid, ye poudhe, chahe pakshi
sabne hi ek din hai jana

lakh koshishain chahe kar lo
bujh jaati jiwan ki baati
kam agar koi achchha kar lo
achchaian bas amar ho jaati
kamal ka likha hai ji

pura geeta darsan he ji jivan ki hakikat hai

daad hajir hai

saari dunia nashvan hai
jo atta hai usne jana
paid, ye poudhe, chahe pakshi
sabne hi ek din hai jana

lakh koshishain chahe kar lo
bujh jaati jiwan ki baati
kam agar koi achchha kar lo
achchaian bas amar ho jaati

yah panktiya to dil me uter

lakhkoshishain chahe kar lo
bujh jaati jiwan ki baati

sada khush raho



   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#6)
Rashmi sharma
volunteer
Rashmi sharma has much to be proud ofRashmi sharma has much to be proud ofRashmi sharma has much to be proud ofRashmi sharma has much to be proud ofRashmi sharma has much to be proud ofRashmi sharma has much to be proud ofRashmi sharma has much to be proud ofRashmi sharma has much to be proud of
 
Rashmi sharma's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 723
Join Date: May 2010
Location: chandigarh
Rep Power: 24
21st July 2010, 08:16 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by naresh_mehra110 View Post
Aapki Rachna ke ehsaas acche lage mujhe......nice poetry ! rashmi Ji !

very nice creation...... !
shukria naresh ji. plz isee tarha hi aapne kimti waqat me se kuch pal meri rachnaaon ko dete rahain
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#7)
Rashmi sharma
volunteer
Rashmi sharma has much to be proud ofRashmi sharma has much to be proud ofRashmi sharma has much to be proud ofRashmi sharma has much to be proud ofRashmi sharma has much to be proud ofRashmi sharma has much to be proud ofRashmi sharma has much to be proud ofRashmi sharma has much to be proud of
 
Rashmi sharma's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 723
Join Date: May 2010
Location: chandigarh
Rep Power: 24
21st July 2010, 08:20 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by parveen komal View Post
Rashmi ji bahut hi shaandar Kasheedakaari ki hai aapne Cyber phulkaari par.
is virane or patjhad me
dushbar mera her saans ho gya
koml or krunamayy man me
bas peeda ka vaas ho gya.

Kamaal ka ahsaas hai, bas jara spelling me izafa karke Koml ki jagah komal likh ke dekhie.
Sachhi Saaf Baat : YE RACHNA MUJHE ISLIE BHI PASAND AAI KE ISME MERA NAAM HAI.
welcome big b and shukria ye jajwat papa ki death ke baad ke hain
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#8)
Rashmi sharma
volunteer
Rashmi sharma has much to be proud ofRashmi sharma has much to be proud ofRashmi sharma has much to be proud ofRashmi sharma has much to be proud ofRashmi sharma has much to be proud ofRashmi sharma has much to be proud ofRashmi sharma has much to be proud ofRashmi sharma has much to be proud of
 
Rashmi sharma's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 723
Join Date: May 2010
Location: chandigarh
Rep Power: 24
21st July 2010, 08:24 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by sajid_ghayel View Post
lakh koshishain chahe kar lo
bujh jaati jiwan ki baati
kam agar koi achchha kar lo
achchaian bas amar ho jaati

Beautiful work Rashmi Jee...
shukria Sajid ji.aap se bahut sikha hai or aasha hai aage bhi aap marg darshan karenge
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#9)
Rashmi sharma
volunteer
Rashmi sharma has much to be proud ofRashmi sharma has much to be proud ofRashmi sharma has much to be proud ofRashmi sharma has much to be proud ofRashmi sharma has much to be proud ofRashmi sharma has much to be proud ofRashmi sharma has much to be proud ofRashmi sharma has much to be proud of
 
Rashmi sharma's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 723
Join Date: May 2010
Location: chandigarh
Rep Power: 24
21st July 2010, 08:36 PM
[QUOTE=shakuntala vyas;403105]kamal ka likha hai ji

pura geeta darsan he ji jivan ki hakikat hai

daad hajir hai

saari dunia nashvan hai
jo atta hai usne jana
paid, ye poudhe, chahe pakshi
sabne hi ek din hai jana

lakh koshishain chahe kar lo
bujh jaati jiwan ki baati
kam agar koi achchha kar lo
achchaian bas amar ho jaati

yah panktiya to dil me uter

lakhkoshishain chahe kar lo
bujh jaati jiwan ki baati

sada khush raho

shakuntla ji .tahe dil se shukria
 aapko aapne pass dekhti hoon to bahut hi aachchha mehsoos karti hoon
sda aapki mohar ka intjar rahega.......................
...................................
   
Reply With Quote
Reply

« Previous Thread | Next Thread »

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts
BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.5
Copyright ©2000 - 2024, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
vBulletin Skin developed by: vBStyles.com

Contact Us - www.shayri.com - Archive - Top