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Syahi sookh na pai thi abhi Akhbaar ki
Lo fir aa gai khabar ek aur Balaatkaar ki.

Insanyat ko sharminda karde, ye gunaah aisa hai
Mujrimo ko saza nahi'n milti, is ke peechhe paisa hai,
Abla ko saza milti hai yaha'n gunahgaar ki.
Lo fir aa gai khabar ek aur Balaatkaar ki.

Media jab Haadse ki khabar ,cover karta hai,
Jane anjaane me victim ka hi sheel harta hai,
Munh pe jheena kapda daal kahani dohraae atyachaar ki.
Lo fir aa gai khabar ek aur Balaatkaar ki.

Laal hare noto'n ke dam pe Mujrim riha ho jaata hai,
Safedposh samaaj bhi Abla ko charittarheen batata hai,
Khud hi faisla keejie, khabar leejie aise kirdaar ki.
Lo fir aa gai khabar ek aur Balaatkaar ki.

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Syahi sookh na pai thi abhi Akhbaar ki
Lo fir aa gai khabar ek aur Balaatkaar ki.

Insanyat ko sharminda karde, ye gunaah aisa hai
Mujrimo ko saza nahi'n milti, is ke peechhe paisa hai,
Abla ko saza milti hai yaha'n gunahgaar ki.
Lo fir aa gai khabar ek aur Balaatkaar ki.

Media jab Haadse ki khabar ,cover karta hai,
Jane anjaane me victim ka hi sheel harta hai,
Munh pe jheena kapda daal kahani dohraae atyachaar ki.
Lo fir aa gai khabar ek aur Balaatkaar ki.

Laal hare noto'n ke dam pe Mujrim riha ho jaata hai,
Safedposh samaaj bhi Abla ko charittarheen batata hai,
Khud hi faisla keejie, khabar leejie aise kirdaar ki.
Lo fir aa gai khabar ek aur Balaatkaar ki.

komal bhai
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yahi meri dua hai

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29th July 2010, 08:36 AM
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Syahi sookh na pai thi abhi Akhbaar ki
Lo fir aa gai khabar ek aur Balaatkaar ki.

Insanyat ko sharminda karde, ye gunaah aisa hai
Mujrimo ko saza nahi'n milti, is ke peechhe paisa hai,
Abla ko saza milti hai yaha'n gunahgaar ki.
Lo fir aa gai khabar ek aur Balaatkaar ki.

Media jab Haadse ki khabar ,cover karta hai,
Jane anjaane me victim ka hi sheel harta hai,
Munh pe jheena kapda daal kahani dohraae atyachaar ki.
Lo fir aa gai khabar ek aur Balaatkaar ki.

Laal hare noto'n ke dam pe Mujrim riha ho jaata hai,
Safedposh samaaj bhi Abla ko charittarheen batata hai,
Khud hi faisla keejie, khabar leejie aise kirdaar ki.
Lo fir aa gai khabar ek aur Balaatkaar ki.
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thanks razia , is baat ko lekar ek debate ka hona bhi jaroori hai, aapne tavajjo di aapka thanks.

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Parveen ji, aapne samaaj ki kadwi sacchi bayaaN ki hai, sabse badi kami to hamari sarkaar meiN hai jo aise mujrimo ko sajja ke naam par bas kuch mahino ki qaid ko chand rupaiye zurmana karke muaaf kar deti hai, aise mujrimo ko faansi ki sajja sar-e-aam deni chahiye, taaki koi aur phir se aisa dush-karam karne ki himmat na kar sake......!

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Thanks to sunita ji - 29th July 2010, 09:37 AM
Sunita ji ,thanks, aapse gujarish hai ki is manch ka aise social work ke lie behtar istemaal karne aur awami raye banane ke lie is subject par ek thread bhi sdc ki taraf se shuru keejie please.

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Sunita ji ,thanks, aapse gujarish hai ki is manch ka aise social work ke lie behtar istemaal karne aur awami raye banane ke lie is subject par ek thread bhi sdc ki taraf se shuru keejie please.
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Syahi sookh na pai thi abhi Akhbaar ki
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Syahi sookh na pai thi abhi Akhbaar ki
Lo fir aa gai khabar ek aur Balaatkaar ki.

Insanyat ko sharminda karde, ye gunaah aisa hai
Mujrimo ko saza nahi'n milti, is ke peechhe paisa hai,
Abla ko saza milti hai yaha'n gunahgaar ki.
Lo fir aa gai khabar ek aur Balaatkaar ki.

Media jab Haadse ki khabar ,cover karta hai,
Jane anjaane me victim ka hi sheel harta hai,
Munh pe jheena kapda daal kahani dohraae atyachaar ki.
Lo fir aa gai khabar ek aur Balaatkaar ki.

Laal hare noto'n ke dam pe Mujrim riha ho jaata hai,
Safedposh samaaj bhi Abla ko charittarheen batata hai,
Khud hi faisla keejie, khabar leejie aise kirdaar ki.
Lo fir aa gai khabar ek aur Balaatkaar ki.
parveen jee bahut khoob likha hai aapne, hamara samaaj aaj aise kai jaghnya apradho se ghira hua hai bahut jarurat hai in sab ke khilaaf aawaj uthane ki..

Aapka Santosh..........


Bahut tanhaiya.N hai.N mere hisse mei.N churalo tum
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bilkul sahi tasveer kheenchi hai samaaj ki kamjori ki aapne apni kavita me kalam ki taqat ka bharpur istemaal kar rahe ho achha hai aise hi likhte raho
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Komal Ji.....Yeh vishey sadhiyon se ek samajik buraai ke roop me dekhaa jata raha hai......phir bhi apni jagha banaye hue hai....iska mool kaaran manovigyaan me chhupaa hai.....gandi maansikta ke shiikar log aisi harqat ko anzaam dete hai......jaisa sunita ji ne sanket diya.....kathor kaanun niizaam me sthaapiit ho.....yeh sazaa sirf us apraadhi ke liye hogi....jo iss gandi maansiikta ka shiikar tha.....agar sirf sazaa iska hal hota ......toh yeh buraai samaaj se kab ki hat gai hoti.... shaayad ... iska koi isthaai hal manovigyaan ke paas bhi nahi hai......

kab kiski maansiikata me aise viikaar janm le le kuch kaha nahi jaa sakta....

Jis tarha waqt ke saath samaaj me khulapan aaya hai.... us sandharv me iski sankhiya tezi ke saath badhi hai.... isse bhi inkaar nahi kiya jaa sakta....

iska hal mujhe.. satarkta jyada dikhaai detaa hai..... apne aas-paas ki gatividiyon par dhiyaan dena ... bahut zaruri hai.... School ... College ...me padhne waali students aur kaamkaaji.... mahiilaaoN ke liye....

kuch saavdhaaniya bhi........

1. jinhe aap jaante na ho.......beech raaste rukke baat na kare...
2. jagah aur isthaan ke mutaabik hi kapdhe pehne...
3. sadak par be-parwaha na chale.... chehre par vishwaas aur thoda rob zarur dikhaai dena chaahiye....
4. aatmsuraksha ki sheekshaa bhi le sakte hai....
5. koshish kare ....school ...college ...office ke kisi purush dost ke saath akele jaane se bache.... jyada zaruri ho toh....apne saath kisi vishvasniye mitr ko le jaayeN...
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Syahi sookh na pai thi abhi Akhbaar ki
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These lines says it all..

Khoob Rachi Hai Daastan..

Daad Kubool Kijiye..





Ashique bhai ,
Aap jaise kabil dosto'n ki housla afzai se hi kalam ki taqat me izafa hota hai.
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Komal Ji.....Yeh vishey sadhiyon se ek samajik buraai ke roop me dekhaa jata raha hai......phir bhi apni jagha banaye hue hai....iska mool kaaran manovigyaan me chhupaa hai.....gandi maansikta ke shiikar log aisi harqat ko anzaam dete hai......jaisa sunita ji ne sanket diya.....kathor kaanun niizaam me sthaapiit ho.....yeh sazaa sirf us apraadhi ke liye hogi....jo iss gandi maansiikta ka shiikar tha.....agar sirf sazaa iska hal hota ......toh yeh buraai samaaj se kab ki hat gai hoti.... shaayad ... iska koi isthaai hal manovigyaan ke paas bhi nahi hai......

kab kiski maansiikata me aise viikaar janm le le kuch kaha nahi jaa sakta....

Jis tarha waqt ke saath samaaj me khulapan aaya hai.... us sandharv me iski sankhiya tezi ke saath badhi hai.... isse bhi inkaar nahi kiya jaa sakta....

iska hal mujhe.. satarkta jyada dikhaai detaa hai..... apne aas-paas ki gatividiyon par dhiyaan dena ... bahut zaruri hai.... School ... College ...me padhne waali students aur kaamkaaji.... mahiilaaoN ke liye....

kuch saavdhaaniya bhi........

1. jinhe aap jaante na ho.......beech raaste rukke baat na kare...
2. jagah aur isthaan ke mutaabik hi kapdhe pehne...
3. sadak par be-parwaha na chale.... chehre par vishwaas aur thoda rob zarur dikhaai dena chaahiye....
4. aatmsuraksha ki sheekshaa bhi le sakte hai....
5. koshish kare ....school ...college ...office ke kisi purush dost ke saath akele jaane se bache.... jyada zaruri ho toh....apne saath kisi vishvasniye mitr ko le jaayeN...
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Syahi sookh na pai thi abhi Akhbaar ki
Lo fir aa gai khabar ek aur Balaatkaar ki.

Insanyat ko sharminda karde, ye gunaah aisa hai
Mujrimo ko saza nahi'n milti, is ke peechhe paisa hai,
Abla ko saza milti hai yaha'n gunahgaar ki.
Lo fir aa gai khabar ek aur Balaatkaar ki.

Media jab Haadse ki khabar ,cover karta hai,
Jane anjaane me victim ka hi sheel harta hai,
Munh pe jheena kapda daal kahani dohraae atyachaar ki.
Lo fir aa gai khabar ek aur Balaatkaar ki.

Laal hare noto'n ke dam pe Mujrim riha ho jaata hai,
Safedposh samaaj bhi Abla ko charittarheen batata hai,
Khud hi faisla keejie, khabar leejie aise kirdaar ki.
Lo fir aa gai khabar ek aur Balaatkaar ki.

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aadaad aur namaste Parveen sahab

yaqeenan bohat hi zimmedaaraana ehsaasaat ko zabaan di hai aapne

daad aur skuriya qabuul kijiye


rab raakha
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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
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Praveen ji namaskaar....lambe antraal ke baad aap nazar aaye sdc par...umeed hai ab phir se aap gayab nahi honge

aapki es poetry ke ahsaas aaj har roz ki akhbaar meiN hote hai...har roz aise haadse badte hi ja rhe hai par hamari BEKAAR SARKAAR par koi asar nahi hai es sabka....!!

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praveen jee.....bahut hee hriday vidarak sacchai ka marmik chitran kiya hai aapne...dil ko cheerti hui aapki ye rachna kai sawal khade kar deti hai zehan mein kee,'kya iske liye purn roop se sarkar, police ya vo balatkari hee jimmedaar hain?, kuch galti hum bhi karte hain, jo balatkar hone ke baad jaagte hain.......kya hame jaagne ke liye balatkaar hona jaruri hai, abhi bomb fatega to hum tab fir jagenge.....


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on the death of that brave girl damini........
Bujh gaya deepak umeed ka,
Haar gaya jung jindagi se,
Par bujhne se pehle
De gaya itni aag dilon mein
Kee desh jagmaga utha hai
Ab dilon mein dhadakti ye aag Shola bankar aankhon mein dikhegi
Aur jab gusse mein in aankhon se
Angaarey phootenge to
Jin dilon mein abhi bhi
Andhera kayam hai
Wahan kuch to roshni hogi..... Wahan kuch to roshni hogi....
Wahan kuch tn roshni hogi.....


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aapki is kavitaa ka asar ab tak barkaraar hai praveen saahab.....

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maNzil pr nazar rakhtaa huN
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Praveen ji namaskaar....lambe antraal ke baad aap nazar aaye sdc par...umeed hai ab phir se aap gayab nahi honge

aapki es poetry ke ahsaas aaj har roz ki akhbaar meiN hote hai...har roz aise haadse badte hi ja rhe hai par hamari BEKAAR SARKAAR par koi asar nahi hai es sabka....!!
Apki Baat Bulkul Theek Hai Sunita Ji ......16 aane khari

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