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shu tane khabar chhe?... -
4th February 2005, 02:30 PM
shu tane khabar chhe?
aabh ma thi je zar-mar zar-mar zare chhe
pachhi vadad bani je dhodhmar varse chhe
e maro j to prem chhe
shu tane khabar chhe?
hufadi savar na aakhsh ma je chamke chhe
ne rate sheetal chandani bani damke chhe
e maro j to prem chhe
shu tane khabar chhe?
chand-chakori ne phool-bhamra ni je preet chhe
nadi na vahen ma vahetu je sangeet chhe
e maro j to prem chhe
shu tane khabar chhe?
khilati vasant ma je suvas bani maheke chhe
muasam ma je chahek chahek chaheke chhe
e maro j to prem chhe
shu tane khabar chhe?
kai ketaliye vedna o je hasta mukhe sahe chhe
ne tari rag rag ma je lohi bani vahe chhe
e maro j to prem chhe
shu tane khabar chhe?
kai chhupo nathi, aakhi duniya ni e same chhe..
chhata janam-janam thi je fakt tara name chhe..
e moro j to prem chhe
aav tane madavu enathi ,shu tu ene odakhe chhe
je tarathi pan vadhu tane odakhe chhe
e maro j to prem chhe
-Priya
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hi! -
4th February 2005, 03:12 PM
Fabulous priya!....bahuj saras..keep it up
take care
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4th February 2005, 03:29 PM
Thank u komal for reading it
keep in touch
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4th February 2005, 04:13 PM
Kavi che Priya
Bahuj saru ane sundar lakhelu che tue, aavi j rite lakhti rehje ho.
chal kadji rakhje
aavje bhaibandh
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4th February 2005, 04:32 PM
irfan ji
r u gujju?? really ??? very glad to know tht u can u/s guj.
thank u 4 replying my post
-Priya
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4th February 2005, 04:42 PM
shu tane khabar chhe?
e maro j to prem chhe
Priya Itna mujhe samajh aa gaya...If u can help me understand the rest
I dnt know why? but mujhe humesha hi gujarati poetries bahut acchi lagti hain... I am taking tuitions from Meena didi, till the time i reach a level.. help me
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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4th February 2005, 04:43 PM
Hi,
Priya
Ma to Gujarati hu hi, lekin gujarati me abhi tak koi kavita nahi likhi mene tujko likhte dekha to tareef kardi, usme naraj hone ki koi baat nahi.
take care
by freind
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5th February 2005, 12:05 PM
yes pulkit ji
agar aap ki guju shayri padhna achha lagata hai..to hum jarur aap ki help karenge.
i've tried to translate it for u ..
kya tujhe pata hai?
aakash me se rim-zim rim-zim jo barasata hai
phir ban ke badal jo jor se barasata hai
vo mera hi pyar hai
kya tujhe pata hai?
gungunati(warm) subah ko aakash me jo chamkata hai
aur rat ko banke sheetal chandani jo damkata hai
vo mera hi pyar hai
kya tujhe pata hai?
chand-chakori aur phool-bhauwaren ki jo preet hai
nadiya ke pani me jo baheta sangeet hai
vo mera hi pyar hai
kya tujhe pata hai?
khilati vasant(spring) me jo khushbu banke mahekta hai
har mausam me jo chahek chahek chahekata hai
vo mera hi pyar hai
kya tujhe pata hai?
jane kitane dardo ko jo haste hue saheta hai
aur teri rag rag me jo lahu banke baheta hai
vo mera hi pyar hai
kya tujhe pata hai?
bilkul chhupa nahi vo puri duniya ke samne hi hai..
phir bhi janam-janam se jo sirf tere naam pe hi hai..
vo mera hi pyar hai
aa tu mai milau usase, kya tu use jaanta hai
jo tujhse bhi jyada tujhe jaanta hai
vo mera hi pyar hai
now tell me ,, if u like this
have a nice time
-Priya
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5th February 2005, 12:07 PM
aur irfan ji
are hum naraz thodi hai...infact i m glad to know u tht u r gujju
-Priya
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5th February 2005, 12:25 PM
Hiii Priya....
Bahut khoobsurat.... Lovely Words dear... Mazaa aa gaya padhkar.... Dil se daad kubool karna meri....
Aap Log itna accha likhte hain.. chaahe woh Mena Didi hon, Komal, Pappu ji, Parul yaa tum... Ke guajarati ki taraf pyaar badhna swabhaavik hai....
Thanks for the transltn....aage bhi hak se main aapse kehta rahoonga... TC
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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5th February 2005, 01:14 PM
hi pulkit
thank u very much aapki tarif ke liye....
hindi me to tum achha likhte ho...par i hope k ek din gujrati me bhi itana hi achha likhoge
aur aap bejijak kahe sakte hai tarnslation ke liye khabhi bhi...
kuchh bhi...i'll try my level best for tht
have a nice time
-Priya
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8th February 2005, 12:43 PM
Hi,
Priya
Priya we are a only for freinds, welcome freind and welcome to my thread.
by take care
by freind
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Re: shu tane khabar chhe?... -
9th February 2005, 06:43 PM
Quote:
Originally posted by Hp_4ever
shu tane khabar chhe?
aabh ma thi je zar-mar zar-mar zare chhe
pachhi vadad bani je dhodhmar varse chhe
e maro j to prem chhe
shu tane khabar chhe?
hufadi savar na aakhsh ma je chamke chhe
ne rate sheetal chandani bani damke chhe
e maro j to prem chhe
shu tane khabar chhe?
chand-chakori ne phool-bhamra ni je preet chhe
nadi na vahen ma vahetu je sangeet chhe
e maro j to prem chhe
shu tane khabar chhe?
khilati vasant ma je suvas bani maheke chhe
muasam ma je chahek chahek chaheke chhe
e maro j to prem chhe
shu tane khabar chhe?
kai ketaliye vedna o je hasta mukhe sahe chhe
ne tari rag rag ma je lohi bani vahe chhe
e maro j to prem chhe
shu tane khabar chhe?
kai chhupo nathi, aakhi duniya ni e same chhe..
chhata janam-janam thi je fakt tara name chhe..
e moro j to prem chhe
aav tane madavu enathi ,shu tu ene odakhe chhe
je tarathi pan vadhu tane odakhe chhe
e maro j to prem chhe
-Priya
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priya,
aav tane madavu enathi ,shu tu ene odakhe chhe
je tarathi pan vadhu tane odakhe chhe
e maro j to prem chhe
tarif ma koi shabd kahish toi taarif oochi thashae.......
saras ........ ras sahit je chhe te aaj chhae......
meena
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10th February 2005, 09:30 AM
Thank U Meena Didi,
Tame mari kavita vanchi ane reply aapo e mane bahu game chhe
ha evu nathi ke khali tamari tarif j vanchvi game,,ha tarif game jarur, pan jo kai khutatu hoy kavita ma, ne tame kaho to e pan game
thanx again
-Priya
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10th February 2005, 06:32 PM
Priya Ji,
Wah! Ek ek line dadh ney patra chey! Aa toh bahuj adhbhut prem kehvay!! Shun kharekhar avo prem aa navyug maa shodhyo jadey?
Farithi kahish key khubaj prasansha patra rachna chey!!
Rajan!
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superb.... -
10th February 2005, 08:05 PM
Its priceless...............priya..............
shu lakhyu che bas vachta vachta hu khovai gayo.....
its simply gem.........!!!
be!maan mohabbat.....!!!
Sal!m.....!!!
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11th February 2005, 12:41 AM
Shu Vaat chhe Priya... Shabdo nathi ke hu shu kahu tamne ke aa vanchi ne mane ketlo anand thayo chhe, kharekhar shabdo ne ketli saras reete sajavi ne lavya chho... bas aamaj lakhta rehjo!
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11th February 2005, 09:34 AM
Thank u parul,
thank u very much for reading it
keep in touch always
-Priya
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11th February 2005, 09:38 AM
Thank u salim,
i m very glad ke tane aa kvita gami,
salim tame mari "To chale " vanchi? na vanchi hoy to time male vanchi lejo...kadach gamse e pan...same section ma
and
Thank u rajan ji.....tamara loko ni tarif j kadach soruce of inspiration chhe mara mate
thank u very much
-Priya
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6th October 2006, 05:41 PM
Hi Priya,
I am a new member on this site.
Hats off to you for creating this ghazal.
I found in your poem as romantic as Ramesh Parekh, as beautiful as Chinu Modi, as classical as Manoj Khandheriya and of course, as lovely as Mariz.
Waiting for your more ghazals.......Carry on.........
-Nirlep.
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Thanx Nirlep
-Priya
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23rd December 2007, 05:07 PM
sunder sabdo ishwar ni saugad chhe.
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HAKIKAT MA KHOOBAJ SARAS ANE KHOOBAJ SARI RITE TAME TAMARA PREM NI VYAKHYA AAPI CHE
AAMAJ LAKHTA RAHO
MIND BLOWING
AATHI VISHESH SHABDO NATHI MARI PASE TAMANE WAKHANVA
TAMETO PREM NE BAHOOJ UUCHA STHANE BESADI DHIDHO CHE
WAH WAH WAH
MAN PIGADI GAYU
EKEK PANKTI MA ZOOR CHE
TAMARI BIJI POST NI RAAH JOISH
Kitne mare kitne aabhi rahoo.N me hai Kuch aa.Nsoo baki nigahoo.N me hai
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27th December 2007, 12:47 AM
Quote:
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shu tane khabar chhe?
aabh ma thi je zar-mar zar-mar zare chhe
pachhi vadad bani je dhodhmar varse chhe
e maro j to prem chhe
shu tane khabar chhe?
hufadi savar na aakhsh ma je chamke chhe
ne rate sheetal chandani bani damke chhe
e maro j to prem chhe
shu tane khabar chhe?
chand-chakori ne phool-bhamra ni je preet chhe
nadi na vahen ma vahetu je sangeet chhe
e maro j to prem chhe
shu tane khabar chhe?
khilati vasant ma je suvas bani maheke chhe
muasam ma je chahek chahek chaheke chhe
e maro j to prem chhe
shu tane khabar chhe?
kai ketaliye vedna o je hasta mukhe sahe chhe
ne tari rag rag ma je lohi bani vahe chhe
e maro j to prem chhe
shu tane khabar chhe?
kai chhupo nathi, aakhi duniya ni e same chhe..
chhata janam-janam thi je fakt tara name chhe..
e moro j to prem chhe
aav tane madavu enathi ,shu tu ene odakhe chhe
je tarathi pan vadhu tane odakhe chhe
e maro j to prem chhe
-Priya
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wah priya bahu ja saras lakhyu chhe mane bahu ja pasand aavyu khas karine
shu tane khabar chhe
kai chhupo nathi aakhi duniya ni e same chhe
chhata janam-janam thi je fakt tara naam chhe
e maro ja to prem chhe aa char line mane bahu ja pasand padi chhe to bas aam ja lakhta rahejo
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7th February 2008, 03:03 PM
So Sweet Priyaji.
Jevu Tamaru Name Tevij Tamari Gujarati Lakhan.
Vah Priya Ji Vah
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