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bheega badan - 10th February 2006, 11:16 AM

bheega badan tha mera,
neeyat teri geeli thi
tan pe mere paani ki buunde
nazaren teri fissli thi
lagi jo aag lagan ki dekho
geela badan jal gaya
chhune laga tha tuu jo mujhko
pathther jaise pighal gaya
prem ki barakha baras gayi
sabbr ka baandh chatak gaya
main bus simmat ke reh gayi
aang se aang lipat gaya
kehene ko the do badan
jaan jaise ek hui
tuu hi tuu tha mujhme us shun
main bhi tujhme sama gayi
hothon ka chumbban ,hathon ki hararat
ankon me teri,bherpuur shararat
tan se tan mila tha tere
man se man the mile
garam saanse paaker teri
marusthal me the fuul khile
sharam ki oadhni tajker dekho
pyar tera pehen liya
kuwanrey sapno ko tuune
dulhan jaisa saja diya
her pal hua jaise sinduri
ab rahi na main adhuri
pura mujhe bana diya!


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Re: bheega badan - 10th February 2006, 02:06 PM

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bheega badan tha mera,
neeyat teri geeli thi
tan pe mere paani ki buunde
nazaren teri fissli thi
lagi jo aag lagan ki dekho
geela badan jal gaya
chhune laga tha tuu jo mujhko
pathther jaise pighal gaya
prem ki barakha baras gayi
sabbr ka baandh chatak gaya
main bus simmat ke reh gayi
aang se aang lipat gaya
kehene ko the do badan
jaan jaise ek hui
tuu hi tuu tha mujhme us shun
main bhi tujhme sama gayi
hothon ka chumbban ,hathon ki hararat
ankon me teri,bherpuur shararat
tan se tan mila tha tere
man se man the mile
garam saanse paaker teri
marusthal me the fuul khile
sharam ki oadhni tajker dekho
pyar tera pehen liya
kuwanrey sapno ko tuune
dulhan jaisa saja diya
her pal hua jaise sinduri
ab rahi na main adhuri
pura mujhe bana diya!

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Sach mein ek umda rachna

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kabhi humne yu khud ko harata naa dekha


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shukriya - 10th February 2006, 03:10 PM

meri ek chhoti si koshish apko lubha gai....shukriya..
Malik ji ke samne to main kuch bhi nahi aur apne meri rachna ki tulna unse kerke mujhe bahut prerit kiya hai...isi tarah meri rachanon per prem lutate rahiyega...
fir se tahe dil se shukriya kehna chahungi


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shukriya - 10th February 2006, 03:10 PM

meri ek chhoti si koshish apko lubha gai....shukriya..
Malik ji ke samne to main kuch bhi nahi aur apne meri rachna ki tulna unse kerke mujhe bahut prerit kiya hai...isi tarah meri rachanon per prem lutate rahiyega...
fir se tahe dil se shukriya kehna chahungi


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Re: shukriya - 10th February 2006, 06:05 PM

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meri ek chhoti si koshish apko lubha gai....shukriya..
Malik ji ke samne to main kuch bhi nahi aur apne meri rachna ki tulna unse kerke mujhe bahut prerit kiya hai...isi tarah meri rachanon per prem lutate rahiyega...
fir se tahe dil se shukriya kehna chahungi

Dear

Jaysi ji ki rachna mein hindi,khadi boli aur Pharsi shabado ka
Prayog hota tha bas yahi farak hai apki aur unki rachna mein

Baki wahi jazbaat jhalkate hai


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Navard-e-ishq mein kya hua kya bataye hum
kabhi humne yu khud ko harata naa dekha


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saharan - 10th February 2006, 06:56 PM

racahan apane andar ke siharan see bah detee hai. prem ke is roop ka bahut pyara warnana kiya hai tum ne
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10th February 2006, 09:35 PM

bahut dino baad is tarah ka likha hua kuch padha thodi alag saili likhne ki aur thode alag ehshash.bas poore badan me ek sihran si ho gayi ise padhte padhte.laga jaise kahin main khud hi to ye pal nahi jee raha hoon.
bahut hi behtareen tareeke se aapne apne khayal pathak tak pahunchaye hain.bas yahi kahunga ki aap bas yunhi likhte rahiye.

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