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Suraj chand sitare.....aasmaan bhi tu - 26th November 2014, 10:21 AM
Suraj chand sitare... aasman bhi tu
Husn-e-khudara mera jahaan bhi tu

Aks-e-khuda ki pehchan bhi tu
Naam-e-Muhammad... paigam bhi tu

Safar-e-ibaadat ka makam bhi tu
Karwan-e-zindagi ka saman bhi tu

Muhabbat ne di... vo azaan bhi tu
Jo kalma padha... vo zubaan bhi tu

Saza-e-maut ka farman bhi tu
Ta kayamat...mera kabristan bhi tu

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26th November 2014, 11:00 AM
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Suraj chand sitare... aasman bhi tu
Husn-e-khudara mera jahaan bhi tu

Aks-e-khuda ki pehchan bhi tu
Naam-e-Muhammad... paigam bhi tu

Safar-e-ibaadat ka makam bhi tu
Karwan-e-zindagi ka saman bhi tu

Muhabbat ne di... vo azaan bhi tu
Jo kalma padha... vo zubaan bhi tu

Saza-e-maut ka farman bhi tu
Ta kayamat...mera kabristan bhi tu

Bhushan

Aks-e-khuda ki pehchan bhi tu
Naam-e-Muhammad... paigam bhi tu

subhaan Allah....



Safar-e-ibaadat ka makam bhi tu
Karwan-e-zindagi ka saman bhi tu

Muhabbat ne di... vo azaan bhi tu
Jo kalma padha... vo zubaan bhi tu

kyaa baat hai waahh bhai...... bahot khoob likha hai.....

meri duaa hai ke aap accchaa, aur acchaa likhte jaaaen, taraqqee karte jaaeN..... khush rahiye

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26th November 2014, 11:05 AM
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Suraj chand sitare... aasman bhi tu
Husn-e-khudara mera jahaan bhi tu

Aks-e-khuda ki pehchan bhi tu
Naam-e-Muhammad... paigam bhi tu

Safar-e-ibaadat ka makam bhi tu
Karwan-e-zindagi ka saman bhi tu

Muhabbat ne di... vo azaan bhi tu
Jo kalma padha... vo zubaan bhi tu

Saza-e-maut ka farman bhi tu
Ta kayamat...mera kabristan bhi tu

Bhushan

Bhushan ji...............kya khoobsurat gazal kahi hai aapne, kya ravani hai...majja aa gya padkar.

bhagwaan kare aapki kalam yu hi chalti jaaye aur hame acche acche kalaam padne ka mokka milta rhe.



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26th November 2014, 11:26 AM
[QUOTE=sameer'shaad';472170]Aks-e-khuda ki pehchan bhi tu
Naam-e-Muhammad... paigam bhi tu

subhaan Allah....



Safar-e-ibaadat ka makam bhi tu
Karwan-e-zindagi ka saman bhi tu

Muhabbat ne di... vo azaan bhi tu
Jo kalma padha... vo zubaan bhi tu

kyaa baat hai waahh bhai...... bahot khoob likha hai.....

meri duaa hai ke aap accchaa, aur acchaa likhte jaaaen, taraqqee karte jaaeN..... khush rahiye

Shaad....[/QUOTE


Shukriya Shaad bahi...

Apko ye peshkash aachi lagi.....uparwale ki meharbani hai....
Likhe wala to wahi hai...hum to zariya bhar hain

Bohot bohot shukriya

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26th November 2014, 11:39 AM
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Bhushan ji...............kya khoobsurat gazal kahi hai aapne, kya ravani hai...majja aa gya padkar.

bhagwaan kare aapki kalam yu hi chalti jaaye aur hame acche acche kalaam padne ka mokka milta rhe.
Shukriya Dii,

Apne is peshkash ko kabile tarif samzha...bohot bohot shukriya..

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26th November 2014, 06:22 PM
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Suraj chand sitare... aasman bhi tu
Husn-e-khudara mera jahaan bhi tu

Aks-e-khuda ki pehchan bhi tu
Naam-e-Muhammad... paigam bhi tu

Safar-e-ibaadat ka makam bhi tu
Karwan-e-zindagi ka saman bhi tu

Muhabbat ne di... vo azaan bhi tu
Jo kalma padha... vo zubaan bhi tu

Saza-e-maut ka farman bhi tu
Ta kayamat...mera kabristan bhi tu

Bhushan
Bahut hi dilchasp aur nayaab khayaal hai Bhushan ji aapke..isi tarah is bazm mein humhe nawaazte rahiYeGaa


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26th November 2014, 08:59 PM
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Bahut hi dilchasp aur nayaab khayaal hai Bhushan ji aapke..isi tarah is bazm mein humhe nawaazte rahiYeGaa
Mast ji namaskar.

Aapko ye peshkash dilchasp lagi ....ye meri khushnasibi hai. Aapne is nacheez ke liye wqkt nikala.....bohot bohot shukriya...

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27th November 2014, 11:57 AM
Bhushan bhai .

bahut hi badiya lagi aap ki ghazal ...Aise hi likhte rahein aur bazm ko sakate eahein.

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27th November 2014, 08:15 PM
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Suraj chand sitare... aasman bhi tu
Husn-e-khudara mera jahaan bhi tu

Aks-e-khuda ki pehchan bhi tu
Naam-e-Muhammad... paigam bhi tu

Safar-e-ibaadat ka makam bhi tu
Karwan-e-zindagi ka saman bhi tu

Muhabbat ne di... vo azaan bhi tu
Jo kalma padha... vo zubaan bhi tu

Saza-e-maut ka farman bhi tu
Ta kayamat...mera kabristan bhi tu

Bhushan


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Excellent, very beautiful...............
Great, no words to express.....................
Mayoos ji,

Ye apki dariyadili hai...aur uparwale ka karam hai.
Warna khaksar itni tarif ke kabil nahi.

Bohot bohot shukriya.

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Bhushan bhai .

bahut hi badiya lagi aap ki ghazal ...Aise hi likhte rahein aur bazm ko sakate eahein.

Sanjay Sehgal
Sehgal ji namaskar,

Apko ye peshkash pasand ahe...meri khushnasibi hai.....apki inayat bani rahe....
Bohot bohot shukriya

Apka apna
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28th November 2014, 09:55 PM
Waah....Bahut umda..bhushan ji...


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Waah....Bahut umda..bhushan ji...
Madhu ji.

Aap jaise kadardan jab hausala afzahi kartr hain to dil ko tassali milti hai.

Tahe dik se shukriya

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