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Dard bola to sunai dega - 14th April 2007, 09:09 PM
dard ko alfaj cene ki ek chhoti si koshish ummid karti hun pasand aayegi.....................

Dard ko mahsus karoge to ek chehara dikhai dega
Dard bola to sunai dega

Dard ka chehara pahchanoge kese
Andhere me bhi dard dikhai dega
Dard bola to sunai dega

Dard ki gahrai samndar se bhi gahari hai
Lahar ban jo utha to bas tabahi dega
Dard bola to sunai dega

Dard chup chap pada hai kisi deepak ke tale
Jo hataoge use to sirf hatho ko jalan hi dega
Dard bola to sunai dega

Dard khamosh raha jab talak tumne chaha
Gar lab khule to har lafj gavahi dega
Dard bola to sunai dega

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14th April 2007, 09:20 PM
dear charvi,

baRe dino baad aapko yahaaN deKha khusHii huii aur ooper se aapki tehreer paRHne ko milii hm kya baat haii !!waise daad to maine usii din de di thii aaj fir se paRH ke bahot hi achHaa laga bas itnaa hi kahuNga kii yuuNhi liKhte raheN..taaki hum bhi aapse kuch seeKHte raheN..dard ko alfaz dene ki apkii chHotii si kosisH bahot khoob rahii

daad kubul kijiyeNga..apnaa khayaal rakheN aur khusH raheN

duaoN ke saath ijaazaT..budhau..!

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14th April 2007, 11:38 PM
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dard ko alfaj cene ki ek chhoti si koshish ummid karti hun pasand aayegi.....................

Dard ko mahsus karoge to ek chehara dikhai dega
Dard bola to sunai dega

Dard ka chehara pahchanoge kese
Andhere me bhi dard dikhai dega
Dard bola to sunai dega

Dard ki gahrai samndar se bhi gahari hai
Lahar ban jo utha to bas tabahi dega
Dard bola to sunai dega

Dard chup chap pada hai kisi deepak ke tale
Jo hataoge use to sirf hatho ko jalan hi dega
Dard bola to sunai dega

Dard khamosh raha jab talak tumne chaha
Gar lab khule to har lafj gavahi dega
Dard bola to sunai dega

MEDHA JAIN

wah wah medha ji bohat zaberdast likha hai aap ne aik dam dil ko chu liya aap ki shayri ne bohat khub keep writing

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15th April 2007, 09:11 AM
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dear charvi,

baRe dino baad aapko yahaaN deKha khusHii huii aur ooper se aapki tehreer paRHne ko milii hm kya baat haii !!waise daad to maine usii din de di thii aaj fir se paRH ke bahot hi achHaa laga bas itnaa hi kahuNga kii yuuNhi liKhte raheN..taaki hum bhi aapse kuch seeKHte raheN..dard ko alfaz dene ki apkii chHotii si kosisH bahot khoob rahii

daad kubul kijiyeNga..apnaa khayaal rakheN aur khusH raheN

duaoN ke saath ijaazaT..budhau..!

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15th April 2007, 09:15 AM
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wah wah medha ji bohat zaberdast likha hai aap ne aik dam dil ko chu liya aap ki shayri ne bohat khub keep writing
areeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ye kya koi to hai ji aapne to mujhe chane ke jhad par khada kar diya ab yanha se utarega kon mujhe girungi to bahut chote lagegi thnkssssssssssssss alot ki aapko meri rachana padha ke laga ki jese mene aapki bat kah di shukriya u hi meri rachanaye padhiyega or mujhe chane ke jhad se girayega

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16th April 2007, 11:42 AM
hi charvi

aapko hamara sadar pranam

aapki rachna padhi hamne abhi padhke khushi hui,

aapne jis khubsurati se dard ke bare mein likha hai wo hamein bahut hi pasand aaya hai

dhaval bhai ka reply padhke pata chala ke aapka naam charvi hai

ese hi mehfil sajate rahiyega

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dard ko alfaj cene ki ek chhoti si koshish ummid karti hun pasand aayegi.....................

Dard ko mahsus karoge to ek chehara dikhai dega
Dard bola to sunai dega

Dard ka chehara pahchanoge kese
Andhere me bhi dard dikhai dega
Dard bola to sunai dega

Dard ki gahrai samndar se bhi gahari hai
Lahar ban jo utha to bas tabahi dega
Dard bola to sunai dega

Dard chup chap pada hai kisi deepak ke tale
Jo hataoge use to sirf hatho ko jalan hi dega
Dard bola to sunai dega

Dard khamosh raha jab talak tumne chaha
Gar lab khule to har lafj gavahi dega
Dard bola to sunai dega

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hi - 16th April 2007, 05:51 PM
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dard ko alfaj cene ki ek chhoti si koshish ummid karti hun pasand aayegi.....................

Dard ko mahsus karoge to ek chehara dikhai dega
Dard bola to sunai dega

Dard ka chehara pahchanoge kese
Andhere me bhi dard dikhai dega
Dard bola to sunai dega

Dard ki gahrai samndar se bhi gahari hai
Lahar ban jo utha to bas tabahi dega
Dard bola to sunai dega

Dard chup chap pada hai kisi deepak ke tale
Jo hataoge use to sirf hatho ko jalan hi dega
Dard bola to sunai dega

Dard khamosh raha jab talak tumne chaha
Gar lab khule to har lafj gavahi dega
Dard bola to sunai dega

MEDHA JAIN
medha ji ache jajbaat hain bilkul gar dard bolega to sunai dega lakin jo dard bezubaan hota hai uska shor bardasht nahi hota.....aapne dard ko bakhubi byaan kiya hai....meri daad kabool karain........raj......

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16th April 2007, 09:16 PM
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medha ji ache jajbaat hain bilkul gar dard bolega to sunai dega lakin jo dard bezubaan hota hai uska shor bardasht nahi hota.....aapne dard ko bakhubi byaan kiya hai....meri daad kabool karain........raj......
shukriya RAJ saheb achha laga ki aapne meri rachana padhi or us par reply bhi diya, jesa aapne kaha ki jo dard bezubaan hota hai uska shor bardashat nahi hota ......
par mujhe to lagta hai ki har dard bezubaan hota hai
jyadatar dard ko mene ashqo.n me dekha hai kabhi koi bhi apne dard ko bayaan nahi kar pata kabhi yah soch kar ki uska dard jyada hai kisi or ko takleef hogi to kabhi yah soch kar ki shayad mera dard kisi or se kam hai pata nahi magar ek kash-m-kash...................

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16th April 2007, 09:20 PM
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hi charvi

aapko hamara sadar pranam

aapki rachna padhi hamne abhi padhke khushi hui,

aapne jis khubsurati se dard ke bare mein likha hai wo hamein bahut hi pasand aaya hai

dhaval bhai ka reply padhke pata chala ke aapka naam charvi hai

ese hi mehfil sajate rahiyega

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achha laga merul ki aapne meri post padhi or reply diya or aapko ye pasand bhi aai thnxxxxxxxxxxxx again keep jheling me

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16th April 2007, 10:04 PM
aapka ye lahza behad khubsurat hai........

Dard ki gahrai samndar se bhi gahari hai
Lahar ban jo utha to bas tabahi dega

mai bhi kuch kahta hu.
gum ki tauhin na kar gum ki sikayat karke,
sab juda ho jaate hai par gum juda nahi hota.............

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17th April 2007, 07:02 AM
Dard ka chehara pahchanoge kese
Andhere me bhi dard dikhai dega
Dard bola to sunai dega

wah wah wah kya baat kahi hai medha

Dard ki gahrai samndar se bhi gahari hai
Lahar ban jo utha to bas tabahi dega
Dard bola to sunai dega

bhaut bhaut sach kaha hai medha aapne bhaut pyara

Dard chup chap pada hai kisi deepak ke tale
Jo hataoge use to sirf hatho ko jalan hi dega
Dard bola to sunai dega

kya baat hai dard bola to sunayi dega sirf jalan dega use na kuredo
kari sare roop dard ke kitne alag se andaaj main bayan kiye hai bhaut din ke baad aapko padha hai bhaut bhaut achha laga

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17th April 2007, 09:50 AM
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aapka ye lahza behad khubsurat hai........

Dard ki gahrai samndar se bhi gahari hai
Lahar ban jo utha to bas tabahi dega

mai bhi kuch kahta hu.
gum ki tauhin na kar gum ki sikayat karke,
sab juda ho jaate hai par gum juda nahi hota.............

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17th April 2007, 09:54 AM
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Dard ka chehara pahchanoge kese
Andhere me bhi dard dikhai dega
Dard bola to sunai dega

wah wah wah kya baat kahi hai medha

Dard ki gahrai samndar se bhi gahari hai
Lahar ban jo utha to bas tabahi dega
Dard bola to sunai dega

bhaut bhaut sach kaha hai medha aapne bhaut pyara

Dard chup chap pada hai kisi deepak ke tale
Jo hataoge use to sirf hatho ko jalan hi dega
Dard bola to sunai dega

kya baat hai dard bola to sunayi dega sirf jalan dega use na kuredo
kari sare roop dard ke kitne alag se andaaj main bayan kiye hai bhaut din ke baad aapko padha hai bhaut bhaut achha laga

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17th April 2007, 05:23 PM
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dard ko alfaj cene ki ek chhoti si koshish ummid karti hun pasand aayegi.....................

Dard ko mahsus karoge to ek chehara dikhai dega
Dard bola to sunai dega

Dard ka chehara pahchanoge kese
Andhere me bhi dard dikhai dega
Dard bola to sunai dega

Dard ki gahrai samndar se bhi gahari hai
Lahar ban jo utha to bas tabahi dega
Dard bola to sunai dega

Dard chup chap pada hai kisi deepak ke tale
Jo hataoge use to sirf hatho ko jalan hi dega
Dard bola to sunai dega

Dard khamosh raha jab talak tumne chaha
Gar lab khule to har lafj gavahi dega
Dard bola to sunai dega

MEDHA JAIN
baahut khoob medha ji....pasand aaye aapki rachna.

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