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zakhmon se badla liya karte hain…. - 21st December 2005, 09:42 PM

mere aziz doston....

aaj kaafi dinon baad is mehfil mein haazir hua hoon kuth le kar....

umeed hai aapko pasand aayega....bus phir wohi kahayl .....

lejiye pesh-e-nazar hai....


Jab kabhi dukhta hai dil, musukura liya karte hain…..
Hum apne hi zakhmon se badla liya karte hain….

Jigar ki aag mein chand katre lahoo ke daal..
Ghar ke charagoon ko bujha liya karte hain….

Nazakat uske mukhde ki dekh pigal na jaana…..
Vo nasheman mein aatish-e- pinhaa liya karte hain….

Kya bacha hai in jimson main us.se ishq ke baad…..
Armanoon ko bhi kaandhe pe utha liya karte hain…..

Ek aag ka dariya hai aur ^AMAN^doob ke jaana hai……
isi soch mein roz khud ko duba liya karte hain....

Jab kabhi dukhta hai dil, musukura liya karte hain…..
Hum apne hi zakhmon se badla liya karte hain…..




aapka apna....



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21st December 2005, 09:53 PM

lajawaab bahut hi achi kalam pesh ki hai aman bhai.............


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Re: zakhmon se badla liya karte hain…. - 21st December 2005, 10:28 PM

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mere aziz doston....

aaj kaafi dinon baad is mehfil mein haazir hua hoon kuth le kar....

umeed hai aapko pasand aayega....bus phir wohi kahayl .....

lejiye pesh-e-nazar hai....


Jab kabhi dukhta hai dil, musukura liya karte hain…..
Hum apne hi zakhmon se badla liya karte hain….

Jigar ki aag mein chand katre lahoo ke daal..
Ghar ke charagoon ko bujha liya karte hain….

Nazakat uske mukhde ki dekh pigal na jaana…..
Vo nasheman mein aatish-e- pinhaa liya karte hain….

Kya bacha hai in jimson main us.se ishq ke baad…..
Armanoon ko bhi kaandhe pe utha liya karte hain…..

Ek aag ka dariya hai aur ^AMAN^doob ke jaana hai……
isi soch mein roz khud ko duba liya karte hain....

Jab kabhi dukhta hai dil, musukura liya karte hain…..
Hum apne hi zakhmon se badla liya karte hain…..




aapka apna....

itne dard mein kyun...

accha likha hai waise...

likhte rahiye... khush rahiye...


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jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
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21st December 2005, 10:31 PM

waah kya baat hai aman sahab....mashallah bahaut khoob dard e bayaan hai....maufi chahungi jo aapke dard pe waah waahi karrahi hoon par kalaam padhke tareef karne se khud ko na rok paayi...aapne kaafi accha likkha hai.

Jigar ki aag mein chand katre lahoo ke daal..
Ghar ke charagoon ko bujha liya karte hain….

Nazakat uske mukhde ki dekh pigal na jaana…..
Vo nasheman mein aatish-e- pinhaa liya karte hain….

bahaut khoob lage yeh do sher...meri taraf se daad kubool farmaiyega.apna khyaal rakhiyega.


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23rd December 2005, 01:23 PM

Aman,

Jab kabhi dukhta hai dil, musukura liya karte hain…..
Hum apne hi zakhmon se badla liya karte hain….

Bilkul humhare dil ki baat keh di... tumhe parh ke achha laga, hamensha ki tarhaa dard hi dard samaya hai iss rachna mein, bahut achha likha hai tumne... daad kubul karna aur yun hi likhte rehna... the entire creation is placed in my heart. take care!

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24th December 2005, 07:46 PM

Bhai sahab

Aapke aage kya kahuN ... maiN to nau seekhiya huN... phir se shuru se ant tak kehar ,.. har kisi ke dil ki aarzoo matlab aman bhai ka kalaam

yuN hi likhte raho mere bhai

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Re: zakhmon se badla liya karte hain…. - 5th January 2006, 01:34 PM

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mere aziz doston....

aaj kaafi dinon baad is mehfil mein haazir hua hoon kuth le kar....

umeed hai aapko pasand aayega....bus phir wohi kahayl .....

lejiye pesh-e-nazar hai....


Jab kabhi dukhta hai dil, musukura liya karte hain…..
Hum apne hi zakhmon se badla liya karte hain….

Jigar ki aag mein chand katre lahoo ke daal..
Ghar ke charagoon ko bujha liya karte hain….

Nazakat uske mukhde ki dekh pigal na jaana…..
Vo nasheman mein aatish-e- pinhaa liya karte hain….

Kya bacha hai in jimson main us.se ishq ke baad…..
Armanoon ko bhi kaandhe pe utha liya karte hain…..

Ek aag ka dariya hai aur ^AMAN^doob ke jaana hai……
isi soch mein roz khud ko duba liya karte hain....

Jab kabhi dukhta hai dil, musukura liya karte hain…..
Hum apne hi zakhmon se badla liya karte hain…..




aapka apna....
hmmmmmmm.......behad khoobsoorat.. umdaa... isme koi shaq nahi aman ji ki aap kamaal ka likhte hain...bahut achha laga padh ke ji.. ryhm si hai isme ek.. chalo itne dino baad aayi aur dekhaaa....... kitni achhi hu main jo yahhaan bhi aa gayi..hehehehehe udti firti ........ waise happy new year bhi hai aapko.... apna khayal rakhiyega ..


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5th January 2006, 11:00 PM

Jab kabhi dukhta hai dil, musukura liya karte hain…..
Hum apne hi zakhmon se badla liya karte hain….

Jigar ki aag mein chand katre lahoo ke daal..
Ghar ke charagoon ko bujha liya karte hain….

Ufffffffff....Extent of pain... but so well expressed...!


Nazakat uske mukhde ki dekh pigal na jaana…..
Vo nasheman mein aatish-e- pinhaa liya karte hain….

Kya bacha hai in jimson main us.se ishq ke baad…..
Armanoon ko bhi kaandhe pe utha liya karte hain…..

Kya ghazab alfaaz jodh rahe ho bhaii...!


Ek aag ka dariya hai aur ^AMAN^doob ke jaana hai……
isi soch mein roz khud ko duba liya karte hain....

Jab kabhi dukhta hai dil, musukura liya karte hain…..
Hum apne hi zakhmon se badla liya karte hain…..

WaaaaaaH...!

Aman bhai,

Guss a to bahut aaya tuumne itna dard pe likha but itna zyada asardaar aur sundar likh diya hai ke main daad dene pe majboor haoonn...Dil ko chhoo gaye tumhaare aashaar....thhoda sa ghamon ko bhi break de diya karo yaar....Dont u get bored...!

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My Dear Aman Jee, Jaldi mein likhha tha to ek galti ho gayi hain...Mujhe pata to hain ki Aap jab parhenge to Aapko bhi shayad pata chal hi jaaye lekin phir bhi..."Matla" Hi Itna Achchha Hain...Ye Kehna Tha**Dil Ki Gehraaion Se Dher Saare Phoul_Shukriya **Khush Rahiye ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**Take Care...**God bless You.


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lajawaab bahut hi achi kalam pesh ki hai aman bhai.............
Mehul bhai..............

Shukriya.........duwaayein hai khush rahiye...........

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accha likha hai waise...

likhte rahiye... khush rahiye...
Shweta.....

shukriya .....dard to zindagi ka hi ek roop hai.....to ise sang rehna hi padta hai.............

khush rahiye..........



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Jigar ki aag mein chand katre lahoo ke daal..
Ghar ke charagoon ko bujha liya karte hain….

Nazakat uske mukhde ki dekh pigal na jaana…..
Vo nasheman mein aatish-e- pinhaa liya karte hain….

bahaut khoob lage yeh do sher...meri taraf se daad kubool farmaiyega.apna khyaal rakhiyega.
Farhana ji...

dard pe wah karna wala hi dard samajh sakta hai.....kyunki kahin na kahin usne ise mehsoos kiya hota hai......

aapki daad aur hausla afzai ka shukriya......

dua hai ki aap khush rahein.....

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Shukriya........

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Aman,

Jab kabhi dukhta hai dil, musukura liya karte hain…..
Hum apne hi zakhmon se badla liya karte hain….

Bilkul humhare dil ki baat keh di... tumhe parh ke achha laga, hamensha ki tarhaa dard hi dard samaya hai iss rachna mein, bahut achha likha hai tumne... daad kubul karna aur yun hi likhte rehna... the entire creation is placed in my heart. take care!

Have a nice day.


Parul......

Dard hi mila hai zindagi mein aur vohi bayan hota rehta hai..........

Thanks............



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17th February 2007, 04:09 AM

Jab kabhi dukhta hai dil, musukura liya karte hain…..
Hum apne hi zakhmon se badla liya karte hain….

bahut badhiya liha hai aapne aman bhai....


Regards
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inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii

lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste
un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii

ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa
inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii


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Jab kabhi dukhta hai dil, musukura liya karte hain…..
Hum apne hi zakhmon se badla liya karte hain….

Jigar ki aag mein chand katre lahoo ke daal..
Ghar ke charagoon ko bujha liya karte hain….

Nazakat uske mukhde ki dekh pigal na jaana…..
Vo nasheman mein aatish-e- pinhaa liya karte hain….

Kya bacha hai in jimson main us.se ishq ke baad…..
Armanoon ko bhi kaandhe pe utha liya karte hain…..

Ek aag ka dariya hai aur ^AMAN^doob ke jaana hai……
isi soch mein roz khud ko duba liya karte hain....

Jab kabhi dukhta hai dil, musukura liya karte hain…..
Hum apne hi zakhmon se badla liya karte hain…..




aapka apna....



aman jiiii......................sabhi sher bahut khoob lage par phele 2 sher dil ke khaas kareeb rahe.....!

aapki naye creation ka intzaar hai


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Aman ji......bahut khub.......superB creation......sabhi sheron ki bayaani khayal aur jazbaat behtreen lage......mujhe.......aise hi likhte rahiye......khush rahiye.....




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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Kunal, Shimul, Devangi Ji, Sandhya Ji, Pallavi, Pulkit Bhai, Lucky, and Aarya ji...

Maufi chahoonga...ki kareeban 4 saal ke baad jawab de raha hoon... na jaaney kaisey ye thread chook gaya... aap sab se maufi ka talabgaar hoon... ummed hai aap maaf kar deinge...

aapki hausla afzai ka shukriya....Sunita ji aapka bhi shukriya jo aapne is thread pe reply kar mujhe yaad dilaya...

Sunita ji...

kai saal hue kuch likhe...ek exam ki taiyaari mein masroof hoon...ummed karta hoon agle mahine tak khatm kar....jaldi hi kuch likhoonga...mann to bahut karta hai.....

Kuch rahiye...

Rabb Raakha.......



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7th September 2009, 06:27 AM

Naresh ji...

Aapki daad aur hausla-afzai ka shukriya....saath bana rahe to manzil acchi lagti hai...

kush rahiye...



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Waah, Aman Bhai...!

Puraane sharaab ke nashe ka kya kehna...!

Badaa accha lagaa hamein aapki yaha shayri...!

Samay nikaal kar kuch naya likhiye to sahi...! Intazaar rahega .

Duaaon ke saath

Apna khayaal rakhiyega, ok...?





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