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kabhi apnati hai....kabhi thukrati hai -
23rd March 2002, 10:44 PM
aadaab doston.....
bahot dino ke baad kuch likh rahe hai....apni raay se nawaziyega... kabhi apnaati hai kabhi thukrati hai zindagai tu bhi kya kya rang dikhlati hai tanhai mai uski yaadeeiN ban ke satati hai aur saath ho uska to yeh ehsaas dilati hai..... ki yehi hai woh zindagi .... jo kabhi laut ke naa aaati hai.. jile jile yeh zindagi.... jo kisi aur ki amanat hai... pile pile yeh jaam... Ke aaj "tanhadil" ki yeh halat hai... ki jitni bhi use pilaoo.... use aur pine ki chahat hai. k'hafiz. Malal Yeh Hai Ke ab Subh Ki Talb Bhi Nahi |
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kya likha hai -
23rd March 2002, 11:55 PM
see tanha dil aap bhi kuch kam nahi likhte
bahot acha likha hai touching .... i love this part "tanhai mai uski yaadeeiN ban ke satati hai aur saath ho uska to yeh ehsaas dilati hai..... ki yehi hai woh zindagi .... jo kabhi laut ke naa aaati hai.. " bahot khoob keep writing bye take care Main jal raha tha .. kisi ne bujha diya mujhko ... |
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thanks -
25th March 2002, 11:09 AM
rutui....aapne hamare hoslaafzaai ki....
hume accha laga.....hum koshish karenge ki aur accha likhey..... bahot bahot shukriya...... aapke kalam bhi bahot acche hote hai..... k'hafiz Malal Yeh Hai Ke ab Subh Ki Talb Bhi Nahi |
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nice -
2nd April 2002, 10:56 AM
tanhadil....it's very nice.....
lekin aapne kisko soch kar likha hai...... shayad puchna to nahi chaheye.....lekin yuhiii puchh liyaaa.... please dont mind..... hume bahot hi pasand aaayi aaapki shayri......  bye. |
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hi -
2nd April 2002, 01:35 PM
neha....
thanks...i will try to write more..... aur jiske liye humne likha hai...... woh to anjaan hai...... k'hafiz Malal Yeh Hai Ke ab Subh Ki Talb Bhi Nahi |
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4th April 2002, 09:01 PM
hai,
tanhadil bahut achha hai. Bahut dinomkabat kuch acha shayri suna hu. Aap likte rahiyega. aadab. |
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shukriya -
5th April 2002, 03:31 PM
vijay.....aapko humari shayri pasand aaayi .......
 hum aage aur likh rahe hai....jald hi post karenge...... k'hafiz Malal Yeh Hai Ke ab Subh Ki Talb Bhi Nahi |
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hey -
11th April 2002, 05:21 PM
tanha......
i m waiting for ur new one....release it soooooooon bye & TAKE CARE. |
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hi tanha dil -
13th April 2002, 12:50 AM
hello tanha dil
hey its so nice .aap bahut hi achha likhto ho jitne bhi tareef ki jaye kam hai .try to ur best . ur anjaan dost khuda haiz |
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shukriya -
15th April 2002, 05:57 PM
salman aur neha......
bahot bahot shukriya...... thanks for ur appreciation.....i will try to write more and best... thanks again k'hafiz Malal Yeh Hai Ke ab Subh Ki Talb Bhi Nahi |
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Hi Tanha -
19th April 2002, 05:01 PM
It was very nice and very much touchy.
I really love to read it. i read it many many times. Keep Writing. Bye |
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hi chintu -
7th May 2002, 11:52 AM
i m happy that u like it......
hum koshish karenge ki aur accha likh paaye.... k'hafiz. Malal Yeh Hai Ke ab Subh Ki Talb Bhi Nahi |
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salam -
10th May 2002, 10:09 AM
apki shayri parhi bahut pasand ayi mashallah se bahut khoob likha hai apne magar main kuc kehna chahonga bora maat maneyga.....
kabhi apnati hai kabhi thukrati hai zindagi kaise rang dekh lati hai chaar din ki zindagi hai doston teen din tu sirf yeh rulati hai jis ke zindagi main pyar na ho phir tu woh moot si ho jati hai zindagi ke haar moor paar humain sirf tanahi aur bebasi nazar ati hai hum tu ab ghumon ke adi hain humse tu koshiyan bhi door bhag jati hai hum kabhi bhi samjh na sake yeh zindagi kia chahti hai phir bhi hum isko nahi chorte yeh humain chor jati hai sorry janab suna hai jo baat dil main ho woh kehdi deni chahiye isliye yeh ghazal likh di plz dont mind allah pak de hawale salman shaikh in majon se puch lena kia haal hai hamaara.... ______________________ Ashk bankaar woh mere chashm-e-tar main rehta hai.... ajeeb woh shaks hai jo pani ke ghar main rehta hai........ |
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Re: kabhi apnati hai....kabhi thukrati hai -
13th May 2002, 02:11 PM
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