Daastan

[Rutu]

Hi everyone... this is a long one but plz bare with me as im trying to tell a story ....

Na samajh paya koi, in aankhon ki Zubaan.
Hum kisi ko suna paye na sabab-e-mahobbat ki Daastan.

Kaise kahoon maine sajaye the kitney Armaan,
Rahe gaya adhura har khawab, alag ho gaya hamara Rastaa.

Paas aao mere, aap-se karti hoon kuch Elaan,
Baant(share) lo thoda sa gham mera, tumpe hoga bada hi Ehsaan.

Zindagi ne liya mera bahot hi bura Imtihaan,
Ki mai pyar kar baithi aise shaks se, Jis se thi bilkool Anjaan.

Apni masoomiyat ka use tha bada hi Abhimaan,
Samajhta tha apne aap ko pharishta, lekin wo tha sirf ek Insaan.

Utha-kar phayda apne garoor ka, usney kiya mera ye Anjaam,
Ab din-dahade phirti hoon uski galiyon mein, dhoondhtey hue uska Nishaan.

Na kuch milney par, khali haath laut-ti hoon apney ghar, jo hai Veeraan.
Yahan aur kuch nahi sirf khamoshi hai, jaise ho koi Kabarstaan.

Nahi, nahi yeh koi juthi kahani nahi, yeh hai meri zindagi ki Pehchaan,
Aap bhi thoda sa Jaam Pilo, "rutu" aur aap saath mein hotey hai Badnaam....

[Nitin]

hi rutu ji, wah kya kiha hai apne , apki likhi har line main ek matlab hai ek dard hai.
i liked this and hope to see more from u like this one.
byeee

[Dard ki daastan]

Hi Rutu Ji, wah bahoot khoob likha hai apne. lagta hai apki aur meri kahani bahot zyada milti zulti hai. Meri bhi aisi hi kahani hai. Likhte rahiyega.

Guzare hain mohabbat main aise mukaam se
Nafrat si ho gayi hai mohabbat ke naam se

Jai Mata Di

[Rutu]

Nitin jee aur Dard ki Daastan jee,

thank u both for reading my work, appreciate that and yes i will try to write better... as for your love stirry relating to mine, im glad that i can share my feelings with someone who has been thru something similar ... it might not seem like a big deal but it means alot ... thanx u both again

Rutu

[ghayalparwana]

RuTu ji,

Bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne.Dard ko achhe alfazon mein bayaan kiya hai aapne.yeh sheyr to bahut pasand aaya

Apni masoomiyat ka use tha bada hi Abhimaan,
Samajhta tha apne aap ko pharishta, lekin wo tha sirf ek Insaan.

Aur haan ,yakeen dilaata huun dard baantne waale aapko yahan bahut humsafar mil jaayenge,lekin jab bhi jaam pilaane ki baat ho to hamen zaroor bula dena,free ki kam hi milti hai aaj kal

Likhte rahiye,
Varinder

[Rutu]

Varinder jee thanx so much for reading my post ... i come to shayri.com only hoping to find nice ppl like u who r willing to share my pain.

rahi baat jaam piney ki to wo to mai zaroor aapko bula loongi .. waise sahi kaha aapney free mein pilaney wale bahot kam miltey hai.

take care
Rutu

[tanhadil]

Rutu jee ..bahot khoob ....

anjaan nahi hun mai tere ghum ae dasataan se .....
majboor hun mai mere halae jazbaat se .....

tuje apni bahoon mai lekar tere dard ko apna bana lun ......
tu agar rooyegi tere aansooon ko apna bana lun .....

aaj ghalib hai pareshaan .... kya likhun uske aage .....
jise dard ke samandar ne ghera is tarah .....
jaise farishtaa ek kabrastaan ke aage ....

na samaj apne ko akela ae dard aee dil
khushiyaaan tere veeran aangan mai aayegi ....
yehi dua hai tere dost ki ...

rutu jee ...kuch mintooN mai kuch linesh likhi hai .... haale jazbaat ka izhaar kiya hai .....

tanhadil