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Post *~*Lafz-E-Mohabbat*~* - 12th July 2006, 03:24 PM

Kaafi lambe waqt ke baad is mehfil me aayi hoon...
ek dard bhara kalaam aapki nazar karrahi hoon...zaroor padhiyega.aapki apni.
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jaane kyun kabhi kabhi zindagi me kuch aise logon se saamna hota hai jo bade befikr kism ke hote hain...jinhe kisike jazbaat,kisike ehsaason ki koi kadar nahi hoti hai...jab bhi hum aise insaano se milte hain dil ko bahaut bura lagta hai...aur jab aisa hi ek shakhs aapke dil ka mehmaan ho toh zindagi ek aisa niwaala banjati hai jise na nigla jata hai aur na ugla jata hai...
tab dil zaar zaar rota hai.aur hum apne dil ke aage majboor hokar ghamon ke aise bhavar me phas jaate hain jo har pal kuch aur hamein gehraiyon me kheenchta jata hai.

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Dil mein gar khaamosh hasraton kay sailaab na hote
Hum unki mohabbat mein yoon betaab na hote

Baith te hum bhi kabhi unke pehlu mein pal do pal ko
Garr naseeb apnay is kadarr kharaab na hote

Sun lete jo woh kabhii meri ankahee guzaarishon ko
Shamo seher unke intezaar me aazaab na hote

Padh lete jo woh mere chehre ki bezaar lakeeron ko
Zindagi me mere ranj-o-gham behisaab na hote

Chipalete jo wo apne dil me meri lafz-e-mohabbat ko
Zamaane ke liye hum ek khuli kitaab na hote... !


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Re: *~*Lafz-E-Mohabbat*~* - 12th July 2006, 03:30 PM

Dil mein gar khaamosh hasraton kay sailaab na hote
Hum unki mohabbat mein yoon betaab na hote

WAH,.,,KYA KEHNE,,BAHOOT SUNDAR...!!!

Baith te hum bhi kabhi unke pehlu mein pal do pal ko
Garr naseeb apnay is kadarr kharaab na hote

BAHOOT KHOOOB...BAHOOT SUNDAR

Sun lete jo woh kabhii meri ankahee guzaarishon ko
Shamo seher unke intezaar me aazaab na hote

Padh lete jo woh mere chehre ki bezaar lakeeron ko
Zindagi me mere ranj-o-gham behisaab na hote

BAHOOT SUNDAR LIKHA HAI AAPNE...

Chipalete jo wo apne dil me meri lafz-e-mohabbat ko
Zamaane ke liye hum ek khuli kitaab na hote... !

WAH..WAH..FARHANA JI,,YEH SHER TO DIL PAR DASTKHAT KAR GAYA JAISE...

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kaisi hai aap??? aapko ek lambe arse baad yahan dekh kar bahoot massarrat ka ehsaas hua,,,umeed karta hoon aap ache se hongi,.,,ek damdaar gazal ke saath aapne waapsi ki hai..mehfil ki raunaq badh gayi hai aapki gazal ki shamma ke jal jane se..meri daad kubool kijiye,,,apna khayal rakiye...
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hi - 12th July 2006, 04:35 PM

waahhhhhh waaaaaaaah faru kya kahene tumaari is ghazal ke
aaj bahut dino baad mai yaha aaya hoon par pahli nazar tumaare is kalaam par padi to padhe bina raha nahi gaya.
ek khoobsurat si ghzal ke liye dher saari daaaaaaaaaaaaaad haazir hai

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12th July 2006, 05:23 PM

faru dd,bahut dino baad padha aapko.ahcha laga padh kar.pata hai aapki title padh kar mujhe meri kuch favorite line yaad aa gayi.

daag dehelvi ji ki line hai,


lafz-e-mohabbat adna ye fasana hai,
simte to dil-e- aashiq,faile to zamana hai.

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12th July 2006, 09:33 PM

Chipalete jo wo apne dil me meri lafz-e-mohabbat ko
Zamaane ke liye hum ek khuli kitaab na hote... !


Namaskar Farhana Ji

Kitney Samey ke baad aap aayin....bahut acha laga aapki rachna ko padhkar......We missed ur creations .....mere daad kabul kijeyega.....Yuun hi likhti rahiye aur aati raha kijeye...

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13th July 2006, 10:07 AM

dil-e-aziz manoj,

kaise hain aap huzur?mei toh Allah(swt) ke fazal o karam se theek hoon....haan ek arsa hi lagta hai yahan aaye hue lekin ye aap sabhi ka pyaar hi hai jisne mujhe majboor kardiya ke kuch likkha jaaye...
aapne meri peshkash ko izzat bakshi,is zarra nawazi k liye dil ki gehraiyon se shukriya...bahaut accha laga aap k aane se.khush rahiyega hamesha.


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Re: hi - 13th July 2006, 02:23 PM

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waahhhhhh waaaaaaaah faru kya kahene tumaari is ghazal ke
aaj bahut dino baad mai yaha aaya hoon par pahli nazar tumaare is kalaam par padi to padhe bina raha nahi gaya.
ek khoobsurat si ghzal ke liye dher saari daaaaaaaaaaaaaad haazir hai

keep writing good gems like this
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bahaut dino baad toh mei khud aayi hoon...sab ne itna pyar se bulaya ke taal na paayi..shukriya itni tareerf ke liye manu..tum aaye accha laga.


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Thumbs up mashallah - 13th July 2006, 02:28 PM

im sure aap kisi ke bahut mohabaat karthe hoge hai farhana jee
really gr8- i every day c ur shyri's and share with my frnds
kip posting yaar
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Re: *~*Lafz-E-Mohabbat*~* - 13th July 2006, 02:34 PM

Farhana ji aapka likha hua humein behad pasand aaya, aap bahut achha likhte hain.

Shayad ye aapko hansi ki cheez lagegi magar main phir bhi aap se poochna chahata hoon ki kya main bhi apna koi message post kar sakta hoon, agar haan to kaise ?

Umeed hai aapka jawaab jaldi aayega.

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Quote:
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Kaafi lambe waqt ke baad is mehfil me aayi hoon...
ek dard bhara kalaam aapki nazar karrahi hoon...zaroor padhiyega.aapki apni.
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jaane kyun kabhi kabhi zindagi me kuch aise logon se saamna hota hai jo bade befikr kism ke hote hain...jinhe kisike jazbaat,kisike ehsaason ki koi kadar nahi hoti hai...jab bhi hum aise insaano se milte hain dil ko bahaut bura lagta hai...aur jab aisa hi ek shakhs aapke dil ka mehmaan ho toh zindagi ek aisa niwaala banjati hai jise na nigla jata hai aur na ugla jata hai...
tab dil zaar zaar rota hai.aur hum apne dil ke aage majboor hokar ghamon ke aise bhavar me phas jaate hain jo har pal kuch aur hamein gehraiyon me kheenchta jata hai.

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Dil mein gar khaamosh hasraton kay sailaab na hote
Hum unki mohabbat mein yoon betaab na hote

Baith te hum bhi kabhi unke pehlu mein pal do pal ko
Garr naseeb apnay is kadarr kharaab na hote

Sun lete jo woh kabhii meri ankahee guzaarishon ko
Shamo seher unke intezaar me aazaab na hote

Padh lete jo woh mere chehre ki bezaar lakeeron ko
Zindagi me mere ranj-o-gham behisaab na hote

Chipalete jo wo apne dil me meri lafz-e-mohabbat ko
Zamaane ke liye hum ek khuli kitaab na hote... !
   
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13th July 2006, 02:41 PM

Namaskaar Farhana ji
kaisi hain aap?
bahaut samay baad aapko parha tow bahaut khushi hui.

har baar ki tarah aapke kalaam mein wahi shabdon ka sangam dikha jisse parhkar ek tassalli si ho jaati hai aaj kuch parha hai.

"Zamaane ke liye hum ek khuli kitaab na hote... !"

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niceeeee again - 13th July 2006, 05:38 PM

bahot dino ke baad aapko padha .
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youn hi likhte rahiye.
aap to meri prena (inspiration)ho.
shayad ke din main bhi kuch bankar dikhaunga.


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bhut pyari gazal hai - 13th July 2006, 06:47 PM

farahna ji ajj appko pehli dafa parha bhut purkashish gazal hai....yeh share acha laga......

Sun lete jo woh kabhii meri ankahee guzaarishon ko
Shamo seher unke intezaar me aazaab na hote......

appka dost raj.....


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14th July 2006, 02:39 PM

shukriya lucky..accha laga tumhe dekhke...aate raho dost.khush raho.


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14th July 2006, 02:40 PM

kaisi hain aap sukanya ji?mujhe jaanke khushi hui ke aapne hame yaad rakkha....aapne kalaam ko tareef ke kaabil samjha jaanke accha laga..khush rahiyega hamesha.


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14th July 2006, 02:42 PM

shukriya durrani sahab...jaanke khushi hui ke aap mere sabhi kalaamon ko padhte hain aur unhe apne azeezon ke saath baante ke kaabil maante hain.khush rahiye.


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15th July 2006, 10:07 AM

sumit aapne mere kalaam ko tareefe kaabil samjha iske liye shukriya...

har forum me shuruwat me aap apne right hand side pe new sher ka option dekhenge use click karein aur options me fill karein jo bhi aapko likhna hai..

thanks for coming.take care.


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Re: *~*Lafz-E-Mohabbat*~* - 15th July 2006, 10:33 AM

Quote:
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Kaafi lambe waqt ke baad is mehfil me aayi hoon...
ek dard bhara kalaam aapki nazar karrahi hoon...zaroor padhiyega.aapki apni.
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jaane kyun kabhi kabhi zindagi me kuch aise logon se saamna hota hai jo bade befikr kism ke hote hain...jinhe kisike jazbaat,kisike ehsaason ki koi kadar nahi hoti hai...jab bhi hum aise insaano se milte hain dil ko bahaut bura lagta hai...aur jab aisa hi ek shakhs aapke dil ka mehmaan ho toh zindagi ek aisa niwaala banjati hai jise na nigla jata hai aur na ugla jata hai...
tab dil zaar zaar rota hai.aur hum apne dil ke aage majboor hokar ghamon ke aise bhavar me phas jaate hain jo har pal kuch aur hamein gehraiyon me kheenchta jata hai.

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Dil mein gar khaamosh hasraton kay sailaab na hote
Hum unki mohabbat mein yoon betaab na hote

Baith te hum bhi kabhi unke pehlu mein pal do pal ko
Garr naseeb apnay is kadarr kharaab na hote

Sun lete jo woh kabhii meri ankahee guzaarishon ko
Shamo seher unke intezaar me aazaab na hote

Padh lete jo woh mere chehre ki bezaar lakeeron ko
Zindagi me mere ranj-o-gham behisaab na hote

Chipalete jo wo apne dil me meri lafz-e-mohabbat ko
Zamaane ke liye hum ek khuli kitaab na hote... !
Farhana ji

appka kalam bahut pasand aaya, mubarak ho es kalaam ke liye, aur esko pad kar ek share yaad aa raha hai, likhney ki gustakhi kar rahi hu:

"kis kis ka khoon honey par roya karey hum,
hai lakho HASRTEY dil-e na-muraad mai"


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15th July 2006, 10:12 PM

farhana,

sabne es ghazal pe bohat tarif kar di hai...to hum yahi kahenge...bohat achha laga padhke...it was beautiful!


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17th July 2006, 09:21 AM

shukriya vipinji....

aapko jabbhi apni post pe dekhti hoon sach maniye mujhe bhi behad khushi hoti hai...
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17th July 2006, 09:24 AM

shukriya vaib...

tumne mujhe apni prerna kab aur kaise bana liya?
khair jaanke khushi hui ke tumne kalaam ko pasand kiya hai...aapki tareef sar aankhon pe.aate rahiye.


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shukriya rajveer...aapne kalaam ko tareef ke kaabil samjha iske liye dil se shukriya..khush raho


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Re: Re: *~*Lafz-E-Mohabbat*~* - 18th July 2006, 02:53 PM

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Originally posted by sunita virender
Farhana ji

appka kalam bahut pasand aaya, mubarak ho es kalaam ke liye, aur esko pad kar ek share yaad aa raha hai, likhney ki gustakhi kar rahi hu:

"kis kis ka khoon honey par roya karey hum,
hai lakho HASRTEY dil-e na-muraad mai"
dil azeez sunita,

aapne kalaam ko padha aur ise tareef ke kaabil samjha iske liye aapka shukriya
aapka sher mujhe kafi pasand aaya,shukriya.


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farhana,

sabne es ghazal pe bohat tarif kar di hai...to hum yahi kahenge...bohat achha laga padhke...it was beautiful!


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zaruri nahi hai ke aap bhi tareef karein gar baakiyon ne ki hai ...aap chahein toh kamiyaan bhi gina sakte the...mujhe bura nahi lagta....
chaliye phir bhi aapne ise pasand kiya jaanke khushi hui.shukriya.


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Dil mein gar khaamosh hasraton kay sailaab na hote
Hum unki mohabbat mein yoon betaab na hote

Baith te hum bhi kabhi unke pehlu mein pal do pal ko
Garr naseeb apnay is kadarr kharaab na hote

kya baat hai.... bahut khoob...


Sun lete jo woh kabhii meri ankahee guzaarishon ko
Shamo seher unke intezaar me aazaab na hote

Padh lete jo woh mere chehre ki bezaar lakeeron ko
Zindagi me mere ranj-o-gham behisaab na hote

wellll said.....


Chipa lete jo wo apne dil me meri lafz-e-mohabbat ko
Zamaane ke liye hum ek khuli kitaab na hote... !

kya baat hai.... lovely words...

Hi Farhana,

How r u? hope things are going good....

Bahut hi khoobsurat ghazal likhi hai tumne... short and beautiful... mujhe bahut pasand aayi... likhti raho aise hi... do TC..!


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kafi dino baad - 4th September 2006, 03:18 PM

Sun lete jo woh kabhii meri ankahee guzaarishon ko
Shamo seher unke intezaar me aazaab na hote

Padh lete jo woh mere chehre ki bezaar lakeeron ko
Zindagi me mere ranj-o-gham behisaab na hote


bahot khoob farhana ji..

kaise hai aap?
kaafi dino baad main fir se aaya toh aapki yeh nazm padhi.. dil ko sukoon sa mil gaya.. shayad mera dard aap ki is nazm main poori tarah se utar gaya hai..

aise hi likhte rahiyega...


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appi salam aaj bahot dino k baad aapka likha padhna naseeb hua ye hamari khush naseebi hai....aaj ki ghazal bhi khoobsurti ka silsila kaayam kiye hue hai....aapse meri dili iltija hai ki kabhi hum logon ko chhod kar jane ke baare me sochna bhi mat...aur aati rahna, likhti rahna aur apna khayal rakhna...
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