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Post **~*Tanha Dil*~** - 28th September 2006, 05:34 PM

aaj dil ne kaha ke kuch likkhoon is mehfil me....apna ek kalaam leke ayi hoon aap sabhi ke beech kaafi arse baad...umeed hai pasand farmayenge.
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Beete pal aksar yaad aate hain...dhadkane tab dard me doob jati hai...ik pal ka karaar nahi hota hai tab..na mehfil raas aati hai us pal aur naa tanhaai sukoon deti hai......har lamha dil bas sulagta hai gham ki chingaariyon se.
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Woh din bhee sach mein bahaut khaas the
Tum aur mein jab har pal saath saath the

Mehekti thi har shab itar si din gulaab the
Bahon me bikhre unke mere har lamhaat the

Machla dil kaa haal tha behke jazbaat the
Chaahat se bhare mere din aur raat the

Jane kya hua kaise bin bulaye wo tufaan the
Legaye mera sab kuch ab khaali haath the

Khile the gul kabhi ab khiza pasand bahaar the
Daaman me bache bas gham-e-ehsaasaat the

Reh gayi 'farhana' tanha kabhi wo bhi saath the
Jinse chahke bhi nikal na saku ab aise halaat the !


"Roz Kii Taraah Aaj Bhii Taare
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN
Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN
Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN."


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aaj jan liya - 28th September 2006, 05:39 PM

aaj jaan liya kalam main wahee dhaar hai jo sada thee. bahut khoobsoorat ashar hain dil bahut khush huya parh ke
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28th September 2006, 05:47 PM

Reh gayi 'farhana' tanha kabhi wo bhi saath the
Jinse chahke bhi nikal na saku ab aise halaat the !


farhana ji aap ka ye kalaam bhaot hi pasand aaya

aap ne bhaot hi achha likha hai

aap khus rahiye hamesha

and HAPPY BIRTHDAY AGAIN..........


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hi - 28th September 2006, 06:05 PM

Woh din bhee sach mein bahaut khaas the
Tum aur mein jab har pal saath saath the

Mehekti thi har shab itar si din gulaab the
Bahon me bikhre unke mere har lamhaat the

Machla dil kaa haal tha behke jazbaat the
Chaahat se bhare mere din aur raat the

Jane kya hua kaise bin bulaye wo tufaan the
Legaye mera sab kuch ab khaali haath the

Khile the gul kabhi ab khiza pasand bahaar the
Daaman me bache bas gham-e-ehsaasaat the

Reh gayi 'farhana' tanha kabhi wo bhi saath the
Jinse chahke bhi nikal na saku ab aise halaat the !

farhana pehle to appko appke janam din ki bhut bhut badhai ho,,,,,,,,apki gazal ki kaya tareef karu bhut ache or sacche ehsaas hai lafzon ko bakhubi istemaal kiya hai......meri dil se daad kabool karna....yu hee likhti rehna.....take care.......raj.........


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29th September 2006, 02:58 PM

Waakai wo din khaas the...!

tumne bohat accha likha hai .. har koi inme apna aks payega ... sabhi aashar acche hai ...

likhti raho yuN hi

tumhara apna

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29th September 2006, 09:01 PM

Woh din bhee sach mein bahaut khaas the
Tum aur mein jab har pal saath saath the

Mehekti thi har shab itar si din gulaab the
Bahon me bikhre unke mere har lamhaat the

kya baat hai....


Machla dil kaa haal tha behke jazbaat the
Chaahat se bhare mere din aur raat the

Jane kya hua kaise bin bulaye wo tufaan the
Legaye mera sab kuch ab khaali haath the

well said...


Khile the gul kabhi ab khiza pasand bahaar the
Daaman me bache bas gham-e-ehsaasaat the

Reh gayi 'farhana' tanha kabhi wo bhi saath the
Jinse chahke bhi nikal na saku ab aise halaat the !

Bahut khoob...

Dear Farhana,

Good to see you back here.... Bahut hi pyaara likha hai tumne... really welll expressed.... aise hi likhti raho... Do Tc...


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Re: **~*Tanha Dil*~** - 30th September 2006, 02:07 AM

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aaj dil ne kaha ke kuch likkhoon is mehfil me....apna ek kalaam leke ayi hoon aap sabhi ke beech kaafi arse baad...umeed hai pasand farmayenge.
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Beete pal aksar yaad aate hain...dhadkane tab dard me doob jati hai...ik pal ka karaar nahi hota hai tab..na mehfil raas aati hai us pal aur naa tanhaai sukoon deti hai......har lamha dil bas sulagta hai gham ki chingaariyon se.
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Woh din bhee sach mein bahaut khaas the
Tum aur mein jab har pal saath saath the

Mehekti thi har shab itar si din gulaab the
Bahon me bikhre unke mere har lamhaat the

Machla dil kaa haal tha behke jazbaat the
Chaahat se bhare mere din aur raat the

Jane kya hua kaise bin bulaye wo tufaan the
Legaye mera sab kuch ab khaali haath the

Khile the gul kabhi ab khiza pasand bahaar the
Daaman me bache bas gham-e-ehsaasaat the

Reh gayi 'farhana' tanha kabhi wo bhi saath the
Jinse chahke bhi nikal na saku ab aise halaat the !

Bahut khub likha hai aapne farhana ji.

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Jiwan to hai ek sangram,
Jise tum jito har DWAR par.

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Parayo ne apnaya,
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1st October 2006, 02:40 PM

priya anil sahab...

jaanke khushi hui ke aapko pasand aaya kalaam...jahan tak kalam ki dhaar ka sawaal hai toh yahi kahungi ke jabtak ehsaas apni gehraayi kam nahi karenge yeh kalam bhi apni dhaar yuhin barkaraar rakkhegi.shukriya


"Roz Kii Taraah Aaj Bhii Taare
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN
Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN
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1st October 2006, 02:41 PM

dost dhaval...

apne kalaam ko tareef-e-kaabil samjha yeh jaanke accha laga...yuhin aage bhi saath denge isi umeed ke saath ijazat lerahi hoon.


"Roz Kii Taraah Aaj Bhii Taare
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN
Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN
Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN."


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1st October 2006, 02:44 PM

priya rajveer...

aapki shubhkaamnaayon ke liye dhanyawaad.....aapko kalaam pasand aaya yeh jaanke khushi hui...yuhin aate rehna aage bhi.


"Roz Kii Taraah Aaj Bhii Taare
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Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN."


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1st October 2006, 02:45 PM

shukriya tumhara kunal.


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Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN
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hi - 1st October 2006, 06:58 PM



bahoot khoob likha hai faru aap ne, aap ko padhana hameshaa hi ek khoobsurat ahsaas hotaa hai

jaise gham se gham milte hai
aise ehsaas bhi kam milte hai



aise hi likhati raho
khush raho yahi dua hai

regards
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2nd October 2006, 10:28 AM

Hello Farhana...

Happy belated B'day my dear! Wo din bhi khaas thhe aur aaj se yeh din khaas ho jaayeinge...tumne apne janmdin pe kitna pyaara tohfa diya hum sabko...bhagwaan kare wo khaas din, wo pyaar bhare lamhe hamesha rahein tumhare saath...khush raho


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bahut Hi Khoobsurat Ghazal Per Dil Se Daad Qubool Kijiye Farhana Jee......yuhi Likhti Rahiye,aur Bazm Me Aati Rahiye....bahut Hi Jald Aapki Aur Se Ek Aur Khoobsurat Ghazal Ka Intezaar Hai........hamesha Khush Rahiye.....

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