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Meri Kamzori - 5th January 2005, 04:24 PM

Zindagi tere bin adhuri hai
Na jane kyu tere-mere bich ye duri hai
Sochta hu kabhi bhuladu tujko
Per teri muskurahat meri kamzori hai....!!!!
   
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5th January 2005, 04:53 PM

Bahut khub Sachin..... Bahut hi lazwaab expression hai. Aisha sirf dil se hi nikal sakta hai. Keep it up. Maan gaye ustaad. Daad deta hoon . Apni dimag ki syahi ko yuhin thoda thoda karke khurch karte jaiye. woh din door nahin jab aapki kamzori apki strength ban jayegi.

Woh mujhe bhool gayi iski sikayat kya hai
gham to yeh hai ki ro-ro ke bhulaya hoga.


-BPUB


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5th January 2005, 05:31 PM

wah sachin ji!! kya shr likhaa hai aapne? aise hi likhte rahiye!!

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