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Dushman - 21st November 2010, 08:48 PM

Uske dushman hai bhut adami acha hoga,
Voh bhi meri he tarah shehar me tanha hoga.

Itna sach bol ki hontho ka tabasum na bujhe,
Roshni khatam na kr aage andhera hoga.

Payas jis nehar se takraye voh banjar nikali,
Jisko piche kahin chor aye voh dareya hoga.

Ek mehfil me kaye mehfile hoti hai sharik,
Jisko bhi pass dekhoge akela hoga.

Mere bare me koi rai to hogi uski,
Uss ne mujh ko bhi kabhi tod kr dekha hoga.


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21st November 2010, 09:00 PM

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Uske dushman hai bhut adami acha hoga,
Voh bhi meri he tarah shehar me tanha hoga.

Itna sach bol ki hontho ka tabasum na bujhe,
Roshni khatam na kr aage andhera hoga.

Payas jis nehar se takraye voh banjar nikali,
Jisko piche kahin chor aye voh dareya hoga.

Ek mehfil me kaye mehfile hoti hai sharik,
Jisko bhi pass dekhoge akela hoga.

Mere bare me koi rai to hogi uski,
Uss ne mujh ko bhi kabhi tod kr dekha hoga.
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21st November 2010, 10:14 PM

bahot khoob Anil bhai.. bahot acchaa likha hai aapne.. yoonhi mahfil ko apne sheron se roshan karte rahen... khush rahen aabaad rahen...

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22nd November 2010, 07:52 AM

Ek mehfil me kaye mehfile hoti hai sharik,
Jisko bhi pass dekhoge akela hoga.

Mere bare me koi rai to hogi uski,
Uss ne mujh ko bhi kabhi tod kr dekha hoga.


Bahut Umdaa Soch ke saath nazar aaye iss peshkash me ... Anil Ji ! bahut baDiyaa likha hai aapne ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ...

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22nd November 2010, 07:55 AM

http://www.friendskorner.com/forum/f...r-badar-35237/

Anil sahab,

Dusri baar aap se guzarish hai ke kisi aur shayer ki shayri,is section meiN post na kareiN

Anjuman-e-shayri ya mashhoor shayer section per post kijiye aur agar shayer ka naam pata na ho tou yaad se niche (nm) likh diya kareiN..




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22nd November 2010, 12:02 PM

Arey main wah nhi lena chahta,or ek baat anil sahab ko shayri forum pe aye hue 3month ho chuke hai main unki friend seema hu unki id ka password mere pass tha mujhe nhi pata kisi ki shayri kahan post kr ne hai.Woh bata kr b gaye the main bhool gye thi.
Anil sahab vaise b apni mata ji k pass punjab gye hue hai. Unke shaddi ki taiyariya ho rahi hai. Main sorry mangti hu.
Agar unko pata lag gya voh mujh se naraz ho jayenge,pls isko utha k kahin or dal de.


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Arey main wah nhi lena chahta,or ek baat anil sahab ko shayri forum pe aye hue 3month ho chuke hai main unki friend seema hu unki id ka password mere pass tha mujhe nhi pata kisi ki shayri kahan post kr ne hai.Woh bata kr b gaye the main bhool gye thi.
Anil sahab vaise b apni mata ji k pass punjab gye hue hai. Unke shaddi ki taiyariya ho rahi hai. Main sorry mangti hu.
Agar unko pata lag gya voh mujh se naraz ho jayenge,pls isko utha k kahin or dal de.

koe nahi ji, kya fark padta hai, dont afraid

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koe nahi ji, kya fark padta hai, dont afraid

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hahahaha..... farq kaise nahi padhta. vikas bhai, farq tou padhta hai..

kisi aur ki shayri apne naam se post karna....

khair ,

@ Anil sahab, Sdc parivar ki or se aapko shadi ki mubarakbaad...

khush rahiye.............




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Uske dushman hai bhut adami acha hoga,
Voh bhi meri he tarah shehar me tanha hoga.

Itna sach bol ki hontho ka tabasum na bujhe,
Roshni khatam na kr aage andhera hoga.

Payas jis nehar se takraye voh banjar nikali,
Jisko piche kahin chor aye voh dareya hoga.

Ek mehfil me kaye mehfile hoti hai sharik,
Jisko bhi pass dekhoge akela hoga.

Mere bare me koi rai to hogi uski,
Uss ne mujh ko bhi kabhi tod kr dekha hoga.
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aap ka ye kalaam kiyaa dekhaa maano meree bhi peyaas kisee nahr se takraayi hai haan magar main apne aqab me koi daryaa nahi chhor ke aayaa hahahaha
dost aap ke kalaam ne aisaa mashoor kiyaa hai ki dil me jaltarang se baj gaye hain
main mobaarakbaad detaa hun ki aap me is qadar salaahiyat maojood hai jis ke istemaal se intehaayi baareek khiyaalaaat ki gahraaiyon me jhaank sakte hain
ghazal be panaah haseen hai bas is me do jagah typing ki kamee nazar aa rahee hai use durust farmaa len
jis ko bhi paas ,,,, is ke baad ,, se ,, chhhoot gayaa hai jabki
us ne mujhko bhi kabhi tod kar dekha hogaa ,, kar ,, ke bajaaye ,, ke ,, banaa den
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hahahaha..... farq kaise nahi padhta. vikas bhai, farq tou padhta hai..

kisi aur ki shayri apne naam se post karna....

khair ,

@ Anil sahab, Sdc parivar ki or se aapko shadi ki mubarakbaad...

khush rahiye.............
fir batao kya fark pada,

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aap ka ye kalaam kiyaa dekhaa maano meree bhi peyaas kisee nahr se takraayi hai haan magar main apne aqab me koi daryaa nahi chhor ke aayaa hahahaha
dost aap ke kalaam ne aisaa mashoor kiyaa hai ki dil me jaltarang se baj gaye hain
main mobaarakbaad detaa hun ki aap me is qadar salaahiyat maojood hai jis ke istemaal se intehaayi baareek khiyaalaaat ki gahraaiyon me jhaank sakte hain
ghazal be panaah haseen hai bas is me do jagah typing ki kamee nazar aa rahee hai use durust farmaa len
jis ko bhi paas ,,,, is ke baad ,, se ,, chhhoot gayaa hai jabki
us ne mujhko bhi kabhi tod kar dekha hogaa ,, kar ,, ke bajaaye ,, ke ,, banaa den
ghazal is qadr oumdah hai ki ek ek harf pe nigaah jamaane pe majboor kar diyaa mobaarakbaad qabool karo bhai
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I know aysa pehle bhi hua hai...Per, maine jab bhi note kiya, directly ya indirectly ,warn kiya hai members ko...

Aur Sdc ke sabhi members se, phir se guzarish karti huuN, agar aap aysa kuch note kareiN, tou moderators ko zarur inform kareiN....




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