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Thumbs up if i knew - 22nd June 2005, 01:03 PM

hi every one here one more stuff to read for u all i think u all getting bore with my silly poem but this poem is not written fully by be but there is another partner who guide me ......... she is my sister ....... .... but plz plz do reply e back how u all like this ..

If I knew it would be the last time...
I'd see you fall asleep
I would tuck you in more tightly,
and pray the lord, your soul to keep.

If I knew it would be the last time...
that I see you walk out the door,
I would give you a hug and a kiss,
and call you back for one more.

If I knew it would be the last time...
I'd hear your voice lift up in praise,
I would video tape each action and word,
so i could play them back day after day.

For surely there's always tomorrow...
to make up for an oversight,
and we always get a second chance,
to make everything right.

There will always be another day...
to say our "I love you's",
And certainly there's another chance,
to say our "Anything I can do's?"

But just in cause I might be wrong...
and today is all I get,
I'd like to say how much I love you,
and I hope we never forget.

Tomorrow is not promised to anyone...
young or old alike,
and today may be the last chance you get,
to hold your love ones tight.

and if your waiting for tomorrow...
why not do it today?
For if tomorrow never comes,
you'll surely regret the day,

You didn't take the extra time...
for a smile, a hug, or a kiss,
and you were to busy to grant someone,
what turned out to be their one last wish.

So hold your loved ones close today...
and whisper in their ear,
that you love them very much,
and you'll always hold them dear.

Take the time to say...
"I'm sorry" "Please forgive me" and "Thank you" or "it's ok"
and if tomorrow never comes,
you'll have no regret about today.

hey everyone this one is my sisters poem and me and her would really like it if you would read n comment on this we will very thank ful to u all.......... thanks!


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5th July 2005, 09:11 AM

hello sir,
a humble request tht if u really dont know about the rules of the site please go through it again. well i am sorry this poem is not of urs as it is already there on net. i was informed by one of the writers out here and he was shocked to read it with ur name. i m srry i had no intentions to hurt ur feelings but if u post anything tht is not writtemn by u just write NM at the bottom. thx so much n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=408151



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ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha!
na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!

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Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki…..
Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav….
Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai…
Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai….
Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman….
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6th July 2005, 12:59 PM

Nice poem Faiq ji,

But i cant understand one thing RuhaniJi,

i went to the link u have given..

that poem was posted on 24th June 2005

and faiq Ji's poem was posted on 22nd June 2005.

That means that Faiq Ji posted first ..

Just wanted to confirm with u

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6th July 2005, 01:16 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by niral
Nice poem Faiq ji,

But i cant understand one thing RuhaniJi,

i went to the link u have given..

that poem was posted on 24th June 2005

and faiq Ji's poem was posted on 22nd June 2005.

That means that Faiq Ji posted first ..

Just wanted to confirm with u

Best Wishes,

Niral
hi niral,
how are u? well this was sumthing even me didnt knew. i just checked wen u replied here. well niral all i know is tht watever he had been posting its sumwhere or the other on site. well i wud now make sure wat the exact thing is, becoz i dont want to leave a question mark to myself too. well i will get back to u as soon as i gather the imformation, n if its my fault i wud ask him to excuse me. all this was told to be by karthik. he gave me the links. neways i will get back to u soon with proper thing. till then take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.



mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha,
ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha!
na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!

*****************************

Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki…..
Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav….
Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai…
Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai….
Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman….
Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar….

   
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