Mere dil mein kiya hai yeh tum kaab jano gay
Meri ankhoon mein kiya hai yeh tum kaab jano gay
Mere labhoon mein kiya hai yeh tum kaab jano gay
Dil, Ankhein, Labh, yeh teen raastein hain jo pyar ki manzil ki taraf jate hain.
Koun sa choose karna hai yeh tumhara faisala
Izhare Ishq kar keh to dekho nahi to humara faisala suno
mein to bilkol agree karti hoon. agar hum nahi kuch kehain gay logoon ki shayri keh bare mein tab phir koun shayri lekhe gha or phir kis ki honsala afzai hogi..sab to phir yeh club chor keh chale jain gay or phir there would be nothing...hum sab ka farz hai tareef karna or issi tarhan humri shayri lekhne ko bhi dil chahe gha..everyone will be happy or koi mayoos nahi hokar jai gha..
right??????????????????
yes you are absolutly right. or agar hum kisi ka taref nahi kara ga to log to mayos ho ja a ga. or is webside per hum sub ka farz banta ha ka hum logo ki help kara. or un ki madat kara. un ka muskil waqt ma sath da . or un sa kha ka or boht acha likhta ha taka o log likhta raha.
allah hafiz
Woh Mere Dil ko Kuchal ke Chala Gaya .
Anjane Mein Mujko Woh Shayar Bana Gaya
jee bilkol...
yakeen karti hoon keh jis din se maine shayri.com ko sign in kiya hai uss din se sab ko reply milta hai n koi mayoos nahi dekhta inshallah ageh bhi aisa hi hoga koi mayoos nahi dekhe gha..inshallah humara farz sar ankhoon per..
allah hafiz
frist of aal great poem bhut hi acha likhti hein aap. aap aur zahri bilkul teek kehti ho i agree with u guys encouragment boost up people self confidence and esteem and helps us to write even better and agar hum kuch parein to humein reply karna chaiye because it shows that person if their poetry is good or not and wheather they can improve it or not.
Thank u both of u guys Zeeshan and romana jii..
I will keep righting..and Zeeshan jii....I know keh izhar karna zaroori nahi lekin kabhi kabhi insaan mayoos hojata hai..keh yeh wohi insaan hai jis mujhe jaha hai lekin izhar nahi kiya...i agree lekin kabhi to karna chahiye bechak aik hi baar,,well ne way
thanku all for appreciating my works...
allah hafiz
sab khush raho allah hai na sab theek hojai gha...
rabi
ara mera matlab ya nahi ha ka app sub hamara liya acha comments likha. agar app logo ko koi chez acha nahi lagti ha to ya app logo ka farz banta ha ka app log us per likha ka i don't like your shayri. iso we can make are shayri better. is depend on all of you. ka ya app logo ko decide kerna ho ga ka kia chez achi lagti ha app logo ko or kia chez buri. zarori nahi ha ka app logo ki sirf taref hi kara. kyu rabi ma thek keh rahi ho na?
Woh Mere Dil ko Kuchal ke Chala Gaya .
Anjane Mein Mujko Woh Shayar Bana Gaya
yes exactly..bilkol theek hai yahi to hum sab ki khobhi hai keh achi lagi hai shayri to phir insaan ka farz to banta hai keh tarieef kare...i agree. with ya..
love rabi