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Hum tum juda ho gaye....! - 20th July 2006, 04:49 PM

Dosto yeh meri phele kosish hai kuch likhney ki, patta nahi thik hai ja galat, umeed karti hu app mrea saath dogey aur appney views bhi bataeygey.

"Sochti hu ki mere alfaaj kaha kho gaye,
mere mehboob hum tum juda ho gaye,

dil par chad chukey thy teri mohabat ke rang,
jahan mai hum tere naam se mashoor ho gaye,

appni pahchaan ab nahi rahi meri,
sochti hu kyu hum appse juda ho gaye,

umr bhar rougi mai teri waffo ki yaad mai,
tu nahi jaanta, teri waffa ke jakhm kitney gahrey ho gaye.

waiting for u r reply.......................!


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thanx - 20th July 2006, 06:07 PM

Sochti hu ki mere alfaaj kaha kho gaye,
mere mehboob hum tum juda ho gaye,

dil par chad chukey thy teri mohabat ke rang,
jahan mai hum tere naam se mashoor ho gaye,

appni pahchaan ab nahi rahi meri,
sochti hu kyu hum appse juda ho gaye,

umr bhar rougi mai teri waffo ki yaad mai,
tu nahi jaanta, teri waffa ke jakhm kitney gahrey ho gaye.





sunita ji apki koshish dil ko shoo gai agar app yuuhi koshish karti rahengi to ek din aasmaan ko bhi shoo logi .




jabh bhi koi apni shayri beyan karta hai ,
aisa lagta hai wo mere dil ko padta hai,
zakham judai ke jabh nasoor ban ne lage ,
aisa lagta hai wo iski dawaa karta hai .
jabh bhi koi apni shayri beyan karta hai......


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Re: thanx - 20th July 2006, 06:12 PM

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Sochti hu ki mere alfaaj kaha kho gaye,
mere mehboob hum tum juda ho gaye,

dil par chad chukey thy teri mohabat ke rang,
jahan mai hum tere naam se mashoor ho gaye,

appni pahchaan ab nahi rahi meri,
sochti hu kyu hum appse juda ho gaye,

umr bhar rougi mai teri waffo ki yaad mai,
tu nahi jaanta, teri waffa ke jakhm kitney gahrey ho gaye.





sunita ji apki koshish dil ko shoo gai agar app yuuhi koshish karti rahengi to ek din aasmaan ko bhi shoo logi .




jabh bhi koi apni shayri beyan karta hai ,
aisa lagta hai wo mere dil ko padta hai,
zakham judai ke jabh nasoor ban ne lage ,
aisa lagta hai wo iski dawaa karta hai .
jabh bhi koi apni shayri beyan karta hai......
hi kirti
tumney esy pasand kiya accha lagga aur tumney mujhe etna baada sapna bhi dikha diya. kosish karugi ki esy pura kar sakku.
vaise kirti tum ho to bahut chotti par shayri mai bahut baddi lagti ho


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23rd July 2006, 08:27 PM

bohat acha likha aap ne keep it up khaas tor per aap ne alfaaz ka istamaal bohat acha kia hai really very touchy


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dil se - 24th July 2006, 08:51 AM

tumhree kavita na lafzon main hai na zehan main woh tumahre dil main hai . dil se niklate ehai tabhee dil ko choo detee hai bahut achha lagata hai tumhe parhana
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27th July 2006, 04:56 AM

didi...

itni khoobsoorat nazm likhi hai aapne.. chaahe pehli ho.. chaahe koi bhi.. dil se likhi har cheez laajawab hi hoti hai..

bahut khoob..

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27th July 2006, 10:36 AM

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bohat acha likha aap ne keep it up khaas tor per aap ne alfaaz ka istamaal bohat acha kia hai really very touchy
appko meri shayri pasand aaye, appka bahut bahut shukriya.


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Re: dil se - 27th July 2006, 10:38 AM

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tumhree kavita na lafzon main hai na zehan main woh tumahre dil main hai . dil se niklate ehai tabhee dil ko choo detee hai bahut achha lagata hai tumhe parhana
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appka meri shayri ko pasand karna aur mujhe padna, yeh appka badapan hai. yu hi aatey rahna, aur humey housla detey rahna.

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4 Friend. - 27th July 2006, 10:39 AM

Hi.
Sunita ...
Good Morning
How r u.?

Har aahat yeshas hamara dilayegi.
Har hava kissa hamara sunayegi.
Hum itni yaade bhar denge apke dil main,
Na chahate huye bhi apko hamari yaad ayegi.


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27th July 2006, 10:41 AM

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didi...

itni khoobsoorat nazm likhi hai aapne.. chaahe pehli ho.. chaahe koi bhi.. dil se likhi har cheez laajawab hi hoti hai..

bahut khoob..

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aree meri gazal etne khoobsurat hai nahi, yeh to tumari dil ki nazro ki khoobsurti hai. jo tumey meri gazal mai dikh rahi hai. meri housla afjeai karney ke liye tumara bahuuuuuuutttttttttt shukriya. yu hi atti rahna.

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Re: 4 Friend. - 27th July 2006, 10:48 AM

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Hi.
Sunita ...
Good Morning
How r u.?

Har aahat yeshas hamara dilayegi.
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Hum itni yaade bhar denge apke dil main,
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Your New Friend - 27th July 2006, 10:57 AM

Jab aap apni dosti ka darwaja khole ge tab hum aane ge na.

Jab mil beten gey 3yaar..to khub jame rang.. May, Tum or Apne Shayri..
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27th July 2006, 04:03 PM

jitne dil se apne likha hai,utni hi gehrayi se keh rahi hun
ki yeh bohat hi ghazab ki hai...

khaaskar second sher...late padha uske liye maafi...


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28th July 2006, 11:51 AM

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jitne dil se apne likha hai,utni hi gehrayi se keh rahi hun
ki yeh bohat hi ghazab ki hai...

khaaskar second sher...late padha uske liye maafi...
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sach kahti hu ki meri phele post thi aur maine esko likha bhi bahut dil se tha. par post kartey bahut dar tha dil mai ki patta nahi kaya response mileyga. ab jab app jaise shayro ne kaha ki accha hai. to batta nahi sakti ki kitni kush hu. yu hi attey rahna aur housla badatey rahna.


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28th July 2006, 11:59 AM

Hi
Sunita.. , Ruchika ji and all of friends.
Good Morning

Dono aankho mein ashq diya karte hai,
Hum apni ninden aapke naam kiya karte hain.
Jab bhi palakein jhuke aap ki,
Samjho k hum appko yad kiya karte hai.

Is pather ki duniya mein,
aksar dil tut jaaya karte hai,
aankhen bhi sambhalkar bandh karna mere dost palko ke beech bhi sapne tut jaaya karte hai.


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hi - 4th October 2006, 01:48 PM

Dosto yeh meri phele kosish hai kuch likhney ki, patta nahi thik hai ja galat, umeed karti hu app mrea saath dogey aur appney views bhi bataeygey.

"Sochti hu ki mere alfaaj kaha kho gaye,
mere mehboob hum tum juda ho gaye,

dil par chad chukey thy teri mohabat ke rang,
jahan mai hum tere naam se mashoor ho gaye,

appni pahchaan ab nahi rahi meri,
sochti hu kyu hum appse juda ho gaye,

umr bhar rougi mai teri waffo ki yaad mai,
tu nahi jaanta, teri waffa ke jakhm kitney gahrey ho gaye.

waiting for u r reply.......................!


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Re: Hum tum juda ho gaye....! - 4th October 2006, 06:42 PM

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Dosto yeh meri phele kosish hai kuch likhney ki, patta nahi thik hai ja galat, umeed karti hu app mrea saath dogey aur appney views bhi bataeygey.

"Sochti hu ki mere alfaaj kaha kho gaye,
mere mehboob hum tum juda ho gaye,

dil par chad chukey thy teri mohabat ke rang,
jahan mai hum tere naam se mashoor ho gaye,

appni pahchaan ab nahi rahi meri,
sochti hu kyu hum appse juda ho gaye,

umr bhar rougi mai teri waffo ki yaad mai,
tu nahi jaanta, teri waffa ke jakhm kitney gahrey ho gaye.

waiting for u r reply.......................!

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sister aapki purani rachna hai

padh ke bhaot khusi hui aapki peshkas shayri e ishq me bhi hai kya bat hai!!!!!!!!

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Dosto yeh meri phele kosish hai kuch likhney ki, patta nahi thik hai ja galat, umeed karti hu app mrea saath dogey aur appney views bhi bataeygey.

"Sochti hu ki mere alfaaj kaha kho gaye,
mere mehboob hum tum juda ho gaye,

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jahan mai hum tere naam se mashoor ho gaye,

appni pahchaan ab nahi rahi meri,
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pranaam di,

my pyari pyari di, kyu jhooth bolti hain aap. apki ye pahali koshish hai

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dil par chad chukey thy teri mohabat ke rang,
jahan mai hum tere naam se mashoor ho gaye


hi didi kaisi hain aap

aapka aaaj purana kalam padne main aaya
mashaallah kya khoob likha hai aapne bakai
is sher per to main kurban jaunn kya baat hai
ese hi likhte rahe.n aap
is tammana ke sath

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dil par chad chukey thy teri mohabat ke rang,
jahan mai hum tere naam se mashoor ho gaye


hi didi kaisi hain aap

aapka aaaj purana kalam padne main aaya
mashaallah kya khoob likha hai aapne bakai
is sher per to main kurban jaunn kya baat hai
ese hi likhte rahe.n aap
is tammana ke sath

dilip
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mera yeh kalaam tumhey pasand aaya, shukriya !

koshish karungi es se bhi behtar likhney ki. bas aap sab ka saath aur duay chahiye.

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Dosto yeh meri phele kosish hai kuch likhney ki, patta nahi thik hai ja galat, umeed karti hu app mrea saath dogey aur appney views bhi bataeygey.

"Sochti hu ki mere alfaaj kaha kho gaye,
mere mehboob hum tum juda ho gaye,

dil par chad chukey thy teri mohabat ke rang,
jahan mai hum tere naam se mashoor ho gaye,

appni pahchaan ab nahi rahi meri,
sochti hu kyu hum appse juda ho gaye,

umr bhar rougi mai teri waffo ki yaad mai,
tu nahi jaanta, teri waffa ke jakhm kitney gahrey ho gaye.

waiting for u r reply.......................!

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