"Ishk Ek Ibadat" ji se guftagu ka Silsilla(01.07.2015)

[ISHK EK IBADAT]

Originally Posted by naresh_mehra110

BaDhe Bhai ! Radhe Radhe !!!

Aap Koi Sher ... Ghazal ... Nazm Likhne Se Pahle UssKi ZameeN Taiyaar Karte HaiN ... Yaa Koi Khayaal Aate Hi Seedha Kahna Shuroo Kar Dete HaiN ... Yaa Phir Koi Aur ... ?

Naresh bhai, kuchh bhi likhne se pahle jo khayaal ya emotions man me aate hai unko seedha hi kaagaz par utaar deta hoon vo kisi bhi shakl me ho sakta hai kavita ke rup ya kisi lekh ke rup me fir agar lagta hai ki kuchh ghazal ka rup le sakta hai to ghazal me aur kavita ke rup me hi rah sakta hai kavita ke rup me aur nahi to lekh to hai hi bas shabdon ko sahi form de deta hoon jisse us khyaal ka mool rup na khatam ho isliye jyada technic me nahi jaata. jab bhai khyaal aaye bas utaar leta hoon yahi prakriya hai meri. Khyaal kab aayega yeh mere haath me nahi hai kabhi bhi aa sakta hai isliye kai baar aisa hota hai raat me aaya aur subah nahi likh paaya vo khyaal dhoomil ho gaya.

radhe radhe

[naresh_mehra110]

Originally Posted by ISHK EK IBADAT

Naresh bhai, kuchh bhi likhne se pahle jo khayaal ya emotions man me aate hai unko seedha hi kaagaz par utaar deta hoon vo kisi bhi shakl me ho sakta hai kavita ke rup ya kisi lekh ke rup me fir agar lagta hai ki kuchh ghazal ka rup le sakta hai to ghazal me aur kavita ke rup me hi rah sakta hai kavita ke rup me aur nahi to lekh to hai hi bas shabdon ko sahi form de deta hoon jisse us khyaal ka mool rup na khatam ho isliye jyada technic me nahi jaata. jab bhai khyaal aaye bas utaar leta hoon yahi prakriya hai meri. Khyaal kab aayega yeh mere haath me nahi hai kabhi bhi aa sakta hai isliye kai baar aisa hota hai raat me aaya aur subah nahi likh paaya vo khyaal dhoomil ho gaya.

radhe radhe

Good One ! Bhaisahab Ji !! Aap Ke Jaagrit Emotions Par Nirbhar Karta Hai ... tehreer Konsa Libaas Pahan Kar Niklegi .. Aapne Apni SanRachna Ka Prabhavshaali Vishleshan Kiya ... PaDhkar AchChha Laga ... ShukriyaaH !!!