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13th September 2011, 05:26 PM
tanhaiyo me khayaal aata
khayalo me wo naam chala aata
beqrara dil ko karara nahi aata
milne ka wo unko khayaal nahi aata
jage to wo soye to wo , ye silsila tham hi nahi pata
soche to kya soche, koi vichar aur smaj nahi aata
rab se ajij wo kaisa saya hai,itna kya man ko bhaya
naam lena chahu rab ka, aur usika naam aa jata
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13th September 2011, 06:25 PM
Bahot khoob koshish rahi aapki veena jee... bas likhti raheN, ehsaasoN ko kaagaz pe utaarti rahiye... shukriyaa
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14th September 2011, 02:30 PM
Veena jii....bahut khoob likha aapne...dil ki baat sahi lafzoN mei kahi aapne....tabhi to kahte hai ki ISHQ aache bhale ensaaN ko behka deta hai....
keep writing
god bless u
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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16th September 2011, 04:40 PM
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Bahot khoob koshish rahi aapki veena jee... bas likhti raheN, ehsaasoN ko kaagaz pe utaarti rahiye... shukriyaa
Shaad..
rahgir manjil ka kya thikana
aapki tarif se aasan gujara
sukriya, pryass rahega
geto me kahi ho naam hamara
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16th September 2011, 04:42 PM
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Veena jii....bahut khoob likha aapne...dil ki baat sahi lafzoN mei kahi aapne....tabhi to kahte hai ki ISHQ aache bhale ensaaN ko behka deta hai....
keep writing
god bless u
thanks a lot
ishq ke chakkar ne bhalo bhalo ko mara
fir bhi chute na ye kaisa ishq ajab nyara
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16th September 2011, 04:58 PM
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thanks a lot
ishq ke chakkar ne bhalo bhalo ko mara
fir bhi chute na ye kaisa ishq ajab nyara
hmmmmmmmmm...........sahi hai jii
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16th September 2011, 08:59 PM
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rahgir manjil ka kya thikana
aapki tarif se aasan gujara
sukriya, pryass rahega
geto me kahi ho naam hamara
Aapke jawaab me kuch aashar yaad aa rahe hain, kabhi likhaa thaa chahta hoon aap padheN...
Aatee nahi ho Saamne Lekin Mujhe Yaqee'N hai,
Chupke Se Tum bhi Padhtee ho Mere Kalaaam ko.
GhazloN Mein merii jab huaa Zikre-Sanam kabhi,
LafzoN meiN kho kar DhooNdti ho apne Naam ko.
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18th September 2011, 01:07 AM
Acchi soch hai..bas yuhi likhte rahiye,aap ko dhek kar hume bhi likhne housla milta rahega..
Tareef ke liye sukriya,tareef ke kabil hum kahan,
tareef to hunar ki hai..
Sabhi ko diya hai usne,
der to bas pehchan ne ki hai..
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19th September 2011, 04:53 PM
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Acchi soch hai..bas yuhi likhte rahiye,aap ko dhek kar hume bhi likhne housla milta rahega..
housalo se housale mila kare hai
aap jaise housalo ko badaya karte hai
soch to soch hai ,
achi kahi aapne isse bad kar kya soch hai
sukriya meri aur se,is per aapka jor hai
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24th September 2011, 11:11 AM
A little bit more polish and this can be turned into diamond....
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26th September 2011, 09:24 PM
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A little bit more polish and this can be turned into diamond....
sukriya
paras ke chune se, lohe bhi sone ban jaya karte hai
kuch lafj apne se, pather me bhi jaan le aate hai
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