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Love શબ્દો ઓછા પડી ગયા - 21st April 2010, 04:35 PM


દોસ્તો,

એક નવી ગઝલ લખવાની કોશીશ કરી છે. આપના પ્રતિભાવ નો મને ઇંતઝાર રહેશે.


Kalam ni shyahi ma kalam na aaNsu bhadi gayaa

Mandyaa jya pagla kaagad par kagad radi gayaa

Madta rahiyaa ekmek ne tarsi tarsi chhataa paN
Aksharoo na samundar ma itihaas chhodi gayaa

Karyaa rang rogaan dukh mahel na sukh rang thi
Samaavyaa jema prem akshr te kagad badi gayaa

lakhaaNa lekh laakho na lakhaaNa aaNsu virahna
Anek dukho bhegaa thai ek hasya ma madi gayaa


Na thaki Nihar kalam ke na prempatr puraa thayaa
Khatm thai shyaahi ne, shabdo oochha padi gayaa
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કલમ નિ શ્યાહી મા કલમ ના આઁસુ ભડી ગયા
માન્ડ્યા જ્યા પગલા કાગડ પર કાગડ રડી ગયા

મડ્તા રહયા એકમેક ને તરસી તરસી છતા પણ
અક્ષરો ના સમુંદર મા ઈતિહાસ છોડી ગયા

કર્યા રંગ રોગાન દુ:ખ મહેલ ના સુખ રંગ થી
સમાવ્યા જેમા પ્રેમ અક્ષર તે કગડ બડી ગયા

લખાણા લેખ લાખો ન લખાણા આઁસુ વિરહ ના
અનેક દુ:ખો ભેગા થઈ એક હાસ્ય મા મડી ગયા

ના થાકી નિહાર કલમ કે ન પ્રેમપત્ર પુરા થયા
ખત્મ થઈ શ્યાહી ને, શબ્દો ઓછા પડી ગયા


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તમારા અભીપ્રાય નો અભીલાસી તમારો મિત્ર નિહાર.


Kitne mare kitne aabhi rahoo.N me hai
Kuch aa.Nsoo baki nigahoo.N me hai


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કલમ નિ શ્યાહી મા કલમ ના આઁસુ ભડી ગયા
માન્ડ્યા જ્યા પગલા કાગડ પર કાગડ રડી ગયા

મડ્તા રહયા એકમેક ને તરસી તરસી છતા પણ
અક્ષરો ના સમુંદર મા ઈતિહાસ છોડી ગયા

કર્યા રંગ રોગાન દુ:ખ મહેલ ના સુખ રંગ થી
સમાવ્યા જેમા પ્રેમ અક્ષર તે કગડ બડી ગયા

લખાણા લેખ લાખો ન લખાણા આઁસુ વિરહ ના
અનેક દુ:ખો ભેગા થઈ એક હાસ્ય મા મડી ગયા

ના થાકી નિહાર કલમ કે ન પ્રેમપત્ર પુરા થયા
ખત્મ થઈ શ્યાહી ને, શબ્દો ઓછા પડી ગયા

BAHOT HI AARCHI GAZAL LIKHI HAI APANE NIHAR BHAI .....................MERE DIL KO CHU GAI HAI AAP KI GAZAL BAS AISHE HAI LIKHATE RAHIYE......VAJSHI
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BAHOT HI AARCHI GAZAL LIKHI HAI APANE NIHAR BHAI .....................MERE DIL KO CHU GAI HAI AAP KI GAZAL BAS AISHE HAI LIKHATE RAHIYE......VAJSHI

Thank you Dear

yunhi hosla badhate rahiyega

aap ka dost nihar


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Nihar,

bahuj sundar lakhyu chhe.... aa rachna ma darshavela tamara bhaav mara dil ma utri gaya... khubaj sunder shabdo ma tame aa rachna ne anjaam sudhi pahuchadi chhe.... lakhta raho... khush raho....

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Nihar,

bahuj sundar lakhyu chhe.... aa rachna ma darshavela tamara bhaav mara dil ma utri gaya... khubaj sunder shabdo ma tame aa rachna ne anjaam sudhi pahuchadi chhe.... lakhta raho... khush raho....

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tamaro khoob khoob aabhar
aamaj mari rachnao ne mehkawta rehjo


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really really nice
mare pan yaar kavita lakhavi che
but I know its very hard
thanxs for nice posting


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thanks to both of you

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Nihar Ji tame bahuj saras lakhyu chhe. Tamari aa kavita na badhaa shabdo dil maa utari gaya. Ketali gaheraai chhe tamaara shabdo ma ane ketali saraltaa thi tame mann ni badhi vaat vyakt kari didhi. bahuj impressive lakhyu chhe. aamaj lakhata raho.


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tamaro khoob khoob dhanyawaad parwaazz bhai and mittal

mari nanakadi koshish ne tamo badhana abhiopraay j sada mehkaavta rahiya che

mate tamo na aabhipraay no sada aabhilashi chu


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ખત્મ થઈ શ્યાહી ને, શબ્દો ઓછા પડી ગયા


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ek dam saras ..

thanks Mr. Dharmesh

koshish sada karish ke tamo ne mari rachnao sada pasand aavti rahe

bas aamaj tamara abhipraay mane paathavta rehjo

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