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Love wo aaye jo meri zindagi main - 17th May 2012, 05:46 PM

wo aaye jo meri zindagi main, to lagta jaise mil gayi manzil mujhe

main bhatak raha tha kab se samandar main,ab mil gaya saahil mujhe

ab to halaat aaise hain ki na raha jaaye unke baghair ek pal bhi

dil ko sukoon-o-chain aaye, jo wo ho jaaye hasil mujhe

main khoya tha kahan is kashmakash ki dahar main

wo aaye meri zindagi main ,unki jahan main kiya shamil mujhe

alfaaz nahi mere paas kya bayan karu dil ki khushi main

k unki nazaroon ne paaya ishq k qaabil mujhe





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Love 24th May 2012, 01:13 PM

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wo aaye jo meri zindagi main, to lagta jaise mil gayi manzil mujhe

main bhatak raha tha kab se samandar main,ab mil gaya saahil mujhe

ab to halaat aaise hain ki na raha jaaye unke baghair ek pal bhi

dil ko sukoon-o-chain aaye, jo wo ho jaaye hasil mujhe

main khoya tha kahan is kashmakash ki dahar main

wo aaye meri zindagi main ,unki jahan main kiya shamil mujhe

alfaaz nahi mere paas kya bayan karu dil ki khushi main

k unki nazaroon ne paaya ishq k qaabil mujhe
bahot khub ananthpak ji aap ki ye ghazal behadh pasand aayi mujhe
yuhi likhte rahiyen

Regards


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26th May 2012, 09:15 PM

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wo aaye jo meri zindagi main, to lagta jaise mil gayi manzil mujhe

main bhatak raha tha kab se samandar main,ab mil gaya saahil mujhe

ab to halaat aaise hain ki na raha jaaye unke baghair ek pal bhi

dil ko sukoon-o-chain aaye, jo wo ho jaaye hasil mujhe

main khoya tha kahan is kashmakash ki dahar main

wo aaye meri zindagi main ,unki jahan main kiya shamil mujhe

alfaaz nahi mere paas kya bayan karu dil ki khushi main

k unki nazaroon ne paaya ishq k qaabil mujhe
Bahut hee khubsurat lines hain ananthpak jee, sabhi aashaar dil ko chu gaye, aise hee likhte rahein khush rahein.daad.



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27th May 2012, 10:01 AM

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bahot khub ananthpak ji aap ki ye ghazal behadh pasand aayi mujhe
yuhi likhte rahiyen

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Bahut hee khubsurat lines hain ananthpak jee, sabhi aashaar dil ko chu gaye, aise hee likhte rahein khush rahein.daad.
ji bohat bohat shukriya arvind ji......iss housla affzaayi ka tah-e-dil se shukr guzaar hun.....





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bahut pyare ahsaas hai.....dil se nikle lafz aksar acche hi hote hai


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7th January 2013, 02:42 PM

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bahut pyare ahsaas hai.....dil se nikle lafz aksar acche hi hote hai

ji bohat bohat shukriya sunita ji ..is hausla affzaayi ka shukrguzaar hun main





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