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banjar banjar... - 10th February 2015, 09:57 AM

Banjar banjar sara manzar,khandar aur virana hai,
Uske bin din saare gin gin maut ko paas bulana hai.

Taare waare saare pyaare,tute gire kinare hai,
Jaane maane gaane bisre, mukh pe dard taraana hai.

youvan tadpan, man me krandan, uljhan sara jeevan hai,
Chhan chhan kangan uske kshan kshan gunje dard deewana hai.

Khil khil haste dil milte the, ab til til marte jana hai.
Ishq wale dil ke chhaale ta-umra sambhale jana hai.


gul ko zamane mein, gul-e-nayaab kehte hai,
kuchh likhne ke pehle aapko aadaab kehte hai.
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10th February 2015, 10:04 AM

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10th June 2015, 07:35 PM

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Banjar banjar sara manzar,khandar aur virana hai,
Uske bin din saare gin gin maut ko paas bulana hai.

Taare waare saare pyaare,tute gire kinare hai,
Jaane maane gaane bisre, mukh pe dard taraana hai.

youvan tadpan, man me krandan, uljhan sara jeevan hai,
Chhan chhan kangan uske kshan kshan gunje dard deewana hai.

Khil khil haste dil milte the, ab til til marte jana hai.
Ishq wale dil ke chhaale ta-umra sambhale jana hai.
Wah.. Bohot khuub jenab.
Umdaah peshkash.
Likhte rahiye.


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