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Kuch kaha jaye kuch suna jaye..... - 26th October 2016, 04:04 PM

kuch kaha jaye kuch suna jaye
betaqalluf zara jiya jaye

reshmi khwab koi ankhon mei.n
chupke chupke chalo buna jaye

apne saye se jism darta hai
kaise tanha basar kiya jaye?

haal e dil ishq me hua hai yu.n
baat rone ki, par hansa jaye

ghar ki deewarei.n bhi ye kahti hain
koi to aaye ghar saja jaye.

hai 'madhu' kab se muntzar aaja
vaqt darya sa hai baha jaye..

Madhu..



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apne saye se jism darta hai
kaise tanha basar kiya jaye?

bahut khoob Madhu

khush rho


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kuch kaha jaye kuch suna jaye
betaqalluf zara jiya jaye

reshmi khwab koi ankhon mei.n
chupke chupke chalo buna jaye

apne saye se jism darta hai
kaise tanha basar kiya jaye?

haal e dil ishq me hua hai yu.n
baat rone ki, par hansa jaye

ghar ki deewarei.n bhi ye kahti hain
koi to aaye ghar saja jaye.

hai 'madhu' kab se muntzar aaja
vaqt darya sa hai baha jaye..

Madhu..

Aadaab madhu sahiba

Aap ke ghazal ki tareef mai kuch alfaaz kehna yaani suraj ko aaeina dikhane ke barabar hai

Khaaksaar ki daad qubool farmaiye

Zor-e-kalaam aur hote rahey

Dua ke saath ijaazat


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MADHU Ji bahut hi umda ashar se dard ki
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30th October 2016, 12:28 AM

kuch kaha jaye kuch suna jaye
betaqalluf zara jiya jaye


WWaahhhh kyaa start liyaa hai..................



reshmi khwab koi ankhon mei.n
chupke chupke chalo buna jaye

bahot naazuq se ehsaas, kyaa baat hai.....................


apne saye se jism darta hai
kaise tanha basar kiya jaye?

uffff qatal hai ye sher to......................


haal e dil ishq me hua hai yu.n
baat rone ki, par hansa jaye


baot acche...........................



ghar ki deewarei.n bhi ye kahti hain
koi to aaye ghar saja jaye.


waahhh waaahhhhhhh shaandaar........................



hai 'madhu' kab se muntzar aaja
vaqt darya sa hai baha jaye..


kamaal ke ser se is ghazal ko anjaam diyaa hai aap ne madhu ji... bahot muqammal ghazal huiii hai..... dher saari daad peshe khidmat hai........

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apne saye se jism darta hai
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bahut khoob Madhu

khush rho
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Aadaab madhu sahiba

Aap ke ghazal ki tareef mai kuch alfaaz kehna yaani suraj ko aaeina dikhane ke barabar hai

Khaaksaar ki daad qubool farmaiye

Zor-e-kalaam aur hote rahey

Dua ke saath ijaazat
Sharminda na karein mujahid sahab.......aapke tawajjo aur apnepan ka behad shukriya aap sab yun hee sath dete rahenge aisi ummeed karti hun....

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"haal e dil ishq me hua hai yu.n
baat rone ki, par hansa jaye"


Waaaaaahhhh kya baat hai bahot zabardast
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Aato raha karo..

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Lovely Composition Madhu.Daad kabul kijeyega.

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kuch kaha jaye kuch suna jaye
betaqalluf zara jiya jaye

reshmi khwab koi ankhon mei.n
chupke chupke chalo buna jaye

apne saye se jism darta hai
kaise tanha basar kiya jaye?

haal e dil ishq me hua hai yu.n
baat rone ki, par hansa jaye

ghar ki deewarei.n bhi ye kahti hain
koi to aaye ghar saja jaye.

hai 'madhu' kab se muntzar aaja
vaqt darya sa hai baha jaye..

Madhu..
Umdaa hameshaa ki tarah Madhu har sher ek bulaand awaaz aur nayaab kahaani ban ke ubhar raha hai...yunhi likhte rahiye



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MADHU Ji bahut hi umda ashar se dard ki
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Aate rahiyega....

Salamat rahein..



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kuch kaha jaye kuch suna jaye
betaqalluf zara jiya jaye


WWaahhhh kyaa start liyaa hai..................



reshmi khwab koi ankhon mei.n
chupke chupke chalo buna jaye

bahot naazuq se ehsaas, kyaa baat hai.....................


apne saye se jism darta hai
kaise tanha basar kiya jaye?

uffff qatal hai ye sher to......................


haal e dil ishq me hua hai yu.n
baat rone ki, par hansa jaye


baot acche...........................



ghar ki deewarei.n bhi ye kahti hain
koi to aaye ghar saja jaye.


waahhh waaahhhhhhh shaandaar........................



hai 'madhu' kab se muntzar aaja
vaqt darya sa hai baha jaye..


kamaal ke ser se is ghazal ko anjaam diyaa hai aap ne madhu ji... bahot muqammal ghazal huiii hai..... dher saari daad peshe khidmat hai........

Shaad...........




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Kya baat hai...ghazal ki is qadar tareef kar di aapne shukriya kin alfaz me karun main...har sher par tawajjo dene ke liye dil se bahot bahot shukriya......hausla afzai karte rahiyega..
Bahot saree duayein aapke liye..

Salamat rahein.....



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Bahot bahot shukriya ocean ji..mujhe bahot achcha laga apko yahaan dekhkar....aate rahiyega. ....

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Lovely Composition Madhu.Daad kabul kijeyega.

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kuch kaha jaye kuch suna jaye
betaqalluf zara jiya jaye

reshmi khwab koi ankhon mei.n
chupke chupke chalo buna jaye

apne saye se jism darta hai
kaise tanha basar kiya jaye?

haal e dil ishq me hua hai yu.n
baat rone ki, par hansa jaye

ghar ki deewarei.n bhi ye kahti hain
koi to aaye ghar saja jaye.

hai 'madhu' kab se muntzar aaja
vaqt darya sa hai baha jaye..

Madhu..
Bahut sunder lika hai aapne.. padh ke ek ajjeb si feeling huyi.. khubsurat feelings ke liye dhanyvaad.. you hi likhate rahiye..

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kuch kaha jaye kuch suna jaye
betaqalluf zara jiya jaye

reshmi khwab koi ankhon mei.n
chupke chupke chalo buna jaye

apne saye se jism darta hai
kaise tanha basar kiya jaye?

haal e dil ishq me hua hai yu.n
baat rone ki, par hansa jaye

ghar ki deewarei.n bhi ye kahti hain
koi to aaye ghar saja jaye.

hai 'madhu' kab se muntzar aaja
vaqt darya sa hai baha jaye..

Madhu..

wah madhu jee behtreen rachna daad kubul karen.....


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