Sochta Hoon Mai Is Kadar---------

[off_shore]

hi friends
fir ek koshish ki hai, ummid karta hoon pasand aayegi-----

sochta hoon mai is kadar, ki
udaasi ki jindgi ji kar kaya karoon,
har ask meri aankho ka,
teri yaadon ko bayan karta hai,
tadapta rahta hoon har waqt,
teri dastak ke intjaar me
soochta rahta hoon har ghadi,
teri salamati ke baare me,
gar hote pankh to ud aata tere aangan me,
poochta tere yaar se teri bebafaai ke baare me.

---------off_shore--------mukesh

[Sharaabi]

sochta hooN kii jo aise lafz beyaan kar sake, us dil pe kyaa guzrii hogii? khair.. bahot pasand aaye aapke jazbaat, par aapke dard mehsoos karne kii jurrat nahiiN karooN gaa..

mehfil sajaate rahiiye,
kisse sunaate rahiiye.

[KunaaL]

Originally posted by off_shore
hi friends
fir ek koshish ki hai, ummid karta hoon pasand aayegi-----

sochta hoon mai is kadar, ki
udaasi ki jindgi ji kar kaya karoon,
har ask meri aankho ka,
teri yaadon ko bayan karta hai,
tadapta rahta hoon har waqt,
teri dastak ke intjaar me
soochta rahta hoon har ghadi,
teri salamati ke baare me,
gar hote pankh to ud aata tere aangan me,
poochta tere yaar se teri bebafaai ke baare me.

---------off_shore--------mukesh

bhai mukesh...

har lafz waise to ek dastan keh raha hai... bohat hi accha khyal hai.. par aapke dard pe wah ka gunah na hoga mujhe bas ye aashar hi aapko roshni de sakte hai ...

har khanjar bewafai ka seene main utra jata hai
nasha phir bhi na jane kyun aankhon main chata hai
kyun ye raste duhai dete hai madad-e-"saccha_pyar"
tune ki bewafai par dil kyn teri yaad main jal jata hai..

bas bhai yahi khak lafz pir apke samne ...

vida chahta hun

apna khayal rakhna

kunal

[off_shore]

hi kunal bhai
aapke jawaab ka bhi koi jawaab doondthe hain---------par kaya karein hamaare paas lafjon ki kami pad jaati hai.
mera hausla badaane ka bahut bahut shukriya---
aapka eh sher hame behad pasand aaya--

har khanjar bewafai ka seene main utra jata hai
nasha phir bhi na jane kyun aankhon main chata hai.

bas aise hi hausla badaate rahiye
apna khayal rakhiye
deepawali ki shubh kaamnayon ke saath ------
--------------off_shore--------mukesh

[off_shore]

hi sharaabi bhai
bahut bahut dhanyabaad mera hausla badaane ke liye.
apna khayal rakhiye
deepawali ki shubhkaamnayon ke saath
vida lite hein

-------off_shore--------mukesh

[sukanya]

Namskar mukesh ji

Maafi chahungi dair se reply karne kay liye.thode waqt ki kami rehti hay.First of all welcome to shayri.com.

teri dastak ke intjaar me
soochta rahta hoon har ghadi,
teri salamati ke baare me,
gar hote pankh to ud aata tere aangan me,

Bahut masuum se lafz chuney hain aapne...........aage bhi aise hi likhtey rahein.

Sada muskurate rahiye

[off_shore]

HI SUKANYA JI
aasha karta hoon ki aap kushal mangal honge. thanks for ur welcome in shayri com. mere likhte hue khaak lafzo ko aapne saraha., iske liye bahut bahut shukriya. maine aapke likhe hue saare kalaam pade hein, aap to bahut hi umda likhtee hein, aur aasha karta hoon aap aise hi likhte rahenge.

---------off_shore-------mukesh-------

[kaif]

Originally posted by off_shore
hi friends
fir ek koshish ki hai, ummid karta hoon pasand aayegi-----

sochta hoon mai is kadar, ki
udaasi ki jindgi ji kar kaya karoon,
har ask meri aankho ka,
teri yaadon ko bayan karta hai,
tadapta rahta hoon har waqt,
teri dastak ke intjaar me
soochta rahta hoon har ghadi,
teri salamati ke baare me,
gar hote pankh to ud aata tere aangan me,
poochta tere yaar se teri bebafaai ke baare me.

---------off_shore--------mukesh

Janab Mukesh sahab,

Aapki koshish nakaam nahi gayi.. aapki kalam ne hame bhi kuch kehne ke liye majboor kar diya hai.. to lage hathon ek aur naye shayar ki koshish bhi padh lijiyega...

yeh zehan mein teri tasveer hai fakat,
kisi aur ko dekhu to gunaah lagta hai

kahi mile to "poochta unke yaar se" kya ye ishq hai dost
ya tujse bhi unko, mahaz dosti ka jazbaah lagta hai

-Kaif

[Mushkan]

Hello Mukeshji

pehli bare aapka share pada hi lakine bahote hi aacha laga dil ko chuliya bahote hi kame sabde hia lakine bahote kuahce kaha hia aapne keep it up nice work

Mushkan

[off_shore]

hi kaif saheb
bahut bahut shukriya sarahane ko meri ek chhoti si kosis.
bahut sahi likha hai aapne

yeh zehan mein teri tasveer hai fakat,
kisi aur ko dekhu to gunaah lagta hai

abhi itna hi chaliye baad me milte hain.
--

[off_shore]

hi mushkan ji
aapne mere khaak lafjon ko pasand kiya, shukriya. bas kabhi kabhi jo shabd juwa se nahi kah paate woh kagaj par uttar jaate hain.
baise aap bhi bahut umda likhte ho, maine aapke bahut saare kalam pade hein. bas aise hi likhte rahiye---
hamesha khush rahiye

[ghayalparwana]

Shayad main nacheez aapke dard ko kuchh samajh paaya..

Andaaz-e-bayaan khoob hai aapka.