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armaan - 10th June 2003, 06:18 PM

marne ki khwahish hai dil mein
to kabhi jine ka armaan bhi rakha hoga
chahe jitna muskuraye koi insaan
sine mein kahin-na-kahin koi gum chupa rakha hoga......






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Wah!..bohat khoob likha hai Gaurav ji..


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13th June 2003, 11:22 PM

Hmm, reality sounds in it
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13th June 2003, 11:28 PM

well written sagar ji pasand aaya aapka armaan..aapke armaan ke saath hamari zara hi hasrat nazar kare..

yun to kahiye to isme dosh aapna bhi to nahin
kya maloom ki garib ki taqdeer mein kya likha hoga

ghum to bahut hai aapne bhi sine mein
koi aisa bhi nahin jisne jhank ke dekha hoga



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