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Dil mein shama'a-key kisee noor-saa jaltaa hai woh! - 16th July 2010, 08:35 PM

Meyrey uyoon-o-jigar mein kaheen paltaa hai woh!
Meyrey dil-o-dimaag mein kaheen chaltaa hai woh!!

Roo-b-roo ho to, haqeeqat hai, khushee hai; warnah,
Dil mein shama'a-key kisee noor-saa jaltaa hai woh!

Baad-e-garmaa sey pighaltee hai barf: sarmaa mein,
Meyrey seeney mein shab-o-roz pighaltaa hai woh!

Koun hai? Kis jagah kaa hai? Woh, magar, hai meyraa!
Mein hun hairaan: kis najeeb ko khaltaa hai woh?

Aadmee, aadmee naheen, to, phir woh kyaa hogaa?
Deykhtaa hoon, ki, sirf haath hi maltaa hai woh!

Apney dil mein hai kahaan kyaa? Na bataayen, to kyaa?
Waheen qayaam hai us kaa! Kahaan taltaa hai woh?

Khoob bahteen hain, go, aab-e-uyoon kee dhaareyn:
Aaj jaanaa hai, nihaan ho, waheen galtaa hai woh!

Dhhaaltey hain sharaab khaak key paikar mein ham!
Sach to yeh hai, har eik jaam mein dhhaltaa hai woh!!

Saath saaye-saa baraabar hai, 'abd', muttahidah!
Ham samajhtey hain, har maqaam pai, chhaltaa hai woh!!


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19th July 2010, 07:45 PM

Aapkii yeh Ghazal bhii bahot pasand aayii. seedhe saadhe alfaaz , pur-asar baat kah dii aapne. dil ko chho lene waali peshkash hai. ek achchhii Ghazal par merii jaanib se dili mubaarakbaad qubool kijiye.


Koun hai? Kis jagah kaa hai? Woh, magar, hai meyraa!
Mein hun hairaan: kis najeeb ko khaltaa hai woh?

Saath saaye-saa baraabar hai, 'abd', muttahidah!
Ham samajhtey hain, har maqaam pai, chhaltaa hai woh!!


yeh ash'aar nisbatan ziyaada pasand aaye




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Love 19th July 2010, 09:11 PM

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Meyrey uyoon-o-jigar mein kaheen paltaa hai woh!
Meyrey dil-o-dimaag mein kaheen chaltaa hai woh!!

Roo-b-roo ho to, haqeeqat hai, khushee hai; warnah,
Dil mein shama'a-key kisee noor-saa jaltaa hai woh!

Baad-e-garmaa sey pighaltee hai barf: sarmaa mein,
Meyrey seeney mein shab-o-roz pighaltaa hai woh!

Koun hai? Kis jagah kaa hai? Woh, magar, hai meyraa!
Mein hun hairaan: kis najeeb ko khaltaa hai woh?

Aadmee, aadmee naheen, to, phir woh kyaa hogaa?
Deykhtaa hoon, ki, sirf haath hi maltaa hai woh!

Apney dil mein hai kahaan kyaa? Na bataayen, to kyaa?
Waheen qayaam hai us kaa! Kahaan taltaa hai woh?

Khoob bahteen hain, go, aab-e-uyoon kee dhaareyn:
Aaj jaanaa hai, nihaan ho, waheen galtaa hai woh!

Dhhaaltey hain sharaab khaak key paikar mein ham!
Sach to yeh hai, har eik jaam mein dhhaltaa hai woh!!

Saath saaye-saa baraabar hai, 'abd', muttahidah!
Ham samajhtey hain, har maqaam pai, chhaltaa hai woh!!


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Aapkii yeh Ghazal bhii bahot pasand aayii. seedhe saadhe alfaaz , pur-asar baat kah dii aapne. dil ko chho lene waali peshkash hai. ek achchhii Ghazal par merii jaanib se dili mubaarakbaad qubool kijiye.


Koun hai? Kis jagah kaa hai? Woh, magar, hai meyraa!
Mein hun hairaan: kis najeeb ko khaltaa hai woh?

Saath saaye-saa baraabar hai, 'abd', muttahidah!
Ham samajhtey hain, har maqaam pai, chhaltaa hai woh!!


yeh ash'aar nisbatan ziyaada pasand aaye
Thanks a lot, zainy ji!

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'ISHK EK IBADAT' ji, bahut-bahut shukriyah!

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