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सर्वेश्वरदयाल सक्सेना अजनबी देश है यह
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सर्वेश्वरदयाल सक्सेना अजनबी देश है यह - 28th July 2010, 03:34 PM

अजनबी देश है यह, जी यहाँ घबराता है
कोई आता है यहाँ पर न कोई जाता है

जागिए तो यहाँ मिलती नहीं आहट कोई,
नींद में जैसे कोई लौट-लौट जाता है

होश अपने का भी रहता नहीं मुझे जिस वक्त
द्वार मेरा कोई उस वक्त खटखटाता है

शोर उठता है कहीं दूर क़ाफिलों का-सा
कोई सहमी हुई आवाज़ में बुलाता है

देखिए तो वही बहकी हुई हवाएँ हैं,
फिर वही रात है, फिर-फिर वही सन्नाटा है

हम कहीं और चले जाते हैं अपनी धुन में
रास्ता है कि कहीं और चला जाता है

दिल को नासेह की ज़रूरत है न चारागर की
आप ही रोता है औ आप ही समझाता है
   
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Smile 28th July 2010, 11:33 PM

kya khoob likha hai, simple yet impressive. thanks for sharing.


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8th August 2010, 02:19 AM

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kya khoob likha hai, simple yet impressive. thanks for sharing.

thanks a lot

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