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Mere Maula - 28th April 2012, 05:33 PM

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Har dua kabul hui merri
Phira se koi intazaar de mere maula,
Aankhon ke iss banjarpan ko,
Phir ashkon ki baarish de maula.

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Har dua kabul hui merri
Phira se koi intazaar de mere maula,
Aankhon ke iss banjarpan ko,
Phir ashkon ki baarish de maula.

For complete visit: http://pennedscripts.blogspot.in/200...post_1071.html
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Har dua kabul hui merri
Phira se koi intazaar de mere maula,
Aankhon ke iss banjarpan ko,
Phir ashkon ki baarish de maula.

For complete visit: http://pennedscripts.blogspot.in/200...post_1071.html
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