Mere Maula

[aashish41284]

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Har dua kabul hui merri
Phira se koi intazaar de mere maula,
Aankhon ke iss banjarpan ko,
Phir ashkon ki baarish de maula.

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[Ahmad Hyderabadi]

Originally Posted by aashish41284

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Har dua kabul hui merri
Phira se koi intazaar de mere maula,
Aankhon ke iss banjarpan ko,
Phir ashkon ki baarish de maula.

For complete visit: http://pennedscripts.blogspot.in/200...post_1071.html

Janaab Ashish Saahab, aap ayk umdah shayar ma'loom partay hayn laykin taajjub hamayn is baat ka haye kii aapko is forum say kya dushmani haye ya is mayn aysee kounsee khaamee haye jo aap apni mukammil kaavish yahaan post kerna nahee pasand kertay?? Har website ki azmat hotee haye mujhay koft is baat say hotee haye jab aap is website ko Billboard ya Street lamp post ki terha mahaz promotion kay liyay iste'maal kartay hayn! Janaab hamayn zyaada khushee hotee gar aap yahaan apnay kalaam mukammal post kertay! Yay mayree zaatee raaye haye jo maynay khulay dil say aapkay saamnay rakh dee ommeed haye aap iss par ghaur farmayayngay!

Your Friend
Ahmad

[Neetu Bala]

Originally Posted by aashish41284

(Critics/comments invited on blog)

Har dua kabul hui merri
Phira se koi intazaar de mere maula,
Aankhon ke iss banjarpan ko,
Phir ashkon ki baarish de maula.

For complete visit: http://pennedscripts.blogspot.in/200...post_1071.html

nice one
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