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aj bhi sulagta dard purana - 12th November 2014, 11:38 AM

frm my pen.

yaad me unki guzra zamana,
aj bhi sulagta dard purana.

ashq sukhana ashq bahana,
aj bhi sulagta dard purana.

har dehleez aahatein unki,
har aahat me baatein unki.
bistar bistar silwatein unki,
chandni unki raatein unki.
waqt bhi raha unka deewana,
aj bhi sulagta dard purana.

hothon pe aj bhi wohi naam,
palkon pe aj bhi wohi shaam.
hathon me tha jab unka haath,
hothon se piye the labon ke jaam.
bhule toh kaise woh safar suhana.
aj bhi sulagta dard purana.


gul ko zamane mein, gul-e-nayaab kehte hai,
kuchh likhne ke pehle aapko aadaab kehte hai.
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12th November 2014, 02:29 PM

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frm my pen.

yaad me unki guzra zamana,
aj bhi sulagta dard purana.

ashq sukhana ashq bahana,
aj bhi sulagta dard purana.

har dehleez aahatein unki,
har aahat me baatein unki.
bistar bistar silwatein unki,
chandni unki raatein unki.
waqt bhi raha unka deewana,
aj bhi sulagta dard purana.

hothon pe aj bhi wohi naam,
palkon pe aj bhi wohi shaam.
hathon me tha jab unka haath,
hothon se piye the labon ke jaam.
bhule toh kaise woh safar suhana.
aj bhi sulagta dard purana.
unki yaad gehra jakham ban kar reh gye,
warna.....bhool jaane ka irada to tha..!


Sushil ji, aapke ehsaas padkar yeh ooper likha sher jehan meiN aa gya...bahut sahi likha hai aapne...kehte hai na ki "dard mehkate hai raat-raani ki tarah" (raat-rani, aisa phool hai jiski kushboo din meiN nahi aati..aur raat ko eski khshboo har su bikhar jati hai)



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12th November 2014, 04:29 PM

nice lines sunitaji..
and thanks a lot ..........


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