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14th May 2006, 03:48 PM
AadaaB ek arse Baad,..
Yun hi meri bebasi ka sabab mera pyar.. meri khamoshi maiN sun lo meri darkaaar... koun si raah pe chot khayi hai maine... koun si manzil apnayi hai maine ... par mere jhakhmoN pe aasmaan roO na sakega... mere ghamoN ko dil se dho na sakega .. mere aansuN inhe kured denge mere yaar.. YUN HI MERI BEBASI KA SABAB MERA PYAAR... .... °°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°° Chiraag haiN roshan andheraa par hata nahiN... Barsaat bhi tez hai, aasmaan main ghata nahi... Is sehar* ka aalam ye jagmagaata to dekhiye... hasNte haiN log, par khushi ka koi pata nahiN… *city Alag ho hi chuke jab jism phir wadoN ka kya... Bewafa mil hi jaynege bachi kahiN wafa nahiN Mujhe zindgi kehne wale baat bhi nahi karte ab... BeintehaN pyaar hi kiya, ki koi aur khatha nahi,. SaBki chahat ka sila hota nahi ye ‘saccha_pyar’… Khuda ki marji se humeN bhi ab koi gila nahiN… Aur zindgi ka kya jo humeN judai se daraate ho … Jee hi lenge ye soch, ki rone wala koi bacha nahi… °°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°° Kunaal --14-05-06 Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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14th May 2006, 04:33 PM
Chiraag haiN roshan andheraa par hata nahiN...
Barsaat bhi tez hai, aasmaan main ghata nahi... Is sehar* ka aalam ye jagmagaata to dekhiye... hasNte haiN log, par khushi ka koi pata nahiN… waah... very well said... Alag ho hi chuke jab jism phir wadoN ka kya... Bewafa mil hi jaynege bachi kahiN wafa nahiN Mujhe zindgi kehne wale baat bhi nahi karte ab... BeintehaN pyaar hi kiya, ki koi aur khatha nahi,. Nice words again... SaBki chahat ka sila hota nahi ye ‘saccha_pyar’… Khuda ki marji se humeN bhi ab koi gila nahiN… Aur zindgi ka kya jo humeN judai se daraate ho … Jee hi lenge ye soch, ki rone wala koi bacha nahi… hmmmm..... Kunal, Jab bhi likhte ho expressive likhte ho... aur yeh bhi koi exception nahi hai... accha likha hai... do keeo writing.... take care... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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Re: Koi Aur KHATA nahiN...! -
14th May 2006, 06:35 PM
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hi kunal sahab bohat khoob likha hai.specialy this lines....... SaBki chahat ka sila hota nahi ye ‘saccha_pyar’… Khuda ki marji se humeN bhi ab koi gila nahiN… Aur zindgi ka kya jo humeN judai se daraate ho … Jee hi lenge ye soch, ki rone wala koi bacha nahi… keep posting kunal sahab bye.........tk care.... mai kabhi kuch nahi likhta bas dusron ka likha post karta hoon kyonki mai shayar nahi hoon lekin mujhe shayri bohat pasand hai |
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14th May 2006, 09:12 PM
ek baat bata ki jab tak koi tujeh press naa kare tu aagey kyo nahi badta
maine tujeh kal he yaad kiya tha or tune aaj he 1 naye post send kar de. khair koi baat nahi kiosi bahane to aaya tu hamare bitch main waise hamesha ki tarha bahut accha likha hain tune tera monti jigri |
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15th May 2006, 01:39 PM
“zamane beete....dhadkane abb sunai kahan deti hain
pehli saans toh aayi thi doosri kab guzar gayi pata nahin khata kya teri ke tujhe ilzaam mile "wafa" musafir hai wo kahan gaya kuch pata nahin” bahut khoob !. Ek behtreen kalaam pesh kiya hai aapne….dil se nikli daad kabool kijiyega apna khayal rakhyiega |
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15th May 2006, 04:34 PM
Alag ho hi chuke jab jism phir wadoN ka kya...
Bewafa mil hi jaynege bachi kahiN wafa nahiN Mujhe zindgi kehne wale baat bhi nahi karte ab... BeintehaN pyaar hi kiya, ki koi aur khatha nahi,. bahut khub Kunnal ji.............. ranju |
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15th May 2006, 04:55 PM
kunal,acchi likhi hai
jo cheez acchi lagti hai use kisi bure ki wajah se mat chodna kabhi...shayri likhte ho to hamesha likhna ,chahe dard koi bhi de,koi bhi ... aik mutthi main kaid kar loon, yeh aasman hai jitna!" |
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wah -
15th May 2006, 10:16 PM
kunal bahut gahara jura huya chahta hoon tujhe shayree se aaj kee ghazal ne phir mere bharose ko jagaya hai ki tum main jo shayri sans letee hai bahut khoobsoorta hai ek ek baat beshkeemtee hai aghaz bahut khoob hai
Chiraag haiN roshan andheraa par hata nahiN... Barsaat bhi tez hai, aasmaan main ghata nahi... Is sehar* ka aalam ye jagmagaata to dekhiye... hasNte haiN log, par khushi ka koi pata nahiN wah Anil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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16th May 2006, 06:55 AM
kunal ji
aapko kafi dino baad fir se padhne ka avsar mila aur bhaut bhaut bhaut hi achha laga har sher mai dard aur unke ehsas ko sade lafzon mai baya.n kiya hai aap aise hi likhte rahe yahi dua hai shrdh 
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17th May 2006, 12:23 PM
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Bohat bohat shukria aapka .. aapne mujhe tareef ke kabil samjha ... aur sahi batauN to mujhe junoon hai jitna seekhne ka ... utna hi ye baat ka ki jitna likhuN ... asar kare ... aap aaye accha laga Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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17th May 2006, 12:25 PM
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aap aaye mujhe bhi bohat accha laga .. likhta to rahuNga .. waqt aur aapka sath raha to... aapka apna Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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Re: hi kunne -
18th May 2006, 12:03 PM
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mujhe press karne ki kya jaroorat .. jab dard press karega .. mai khud chala aaunga ... well aur jab chahne wale bulayeNge to maiN chala hi aauNga.. Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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18th May 2006, 12:05 PM
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Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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18th May 2006, 12:06 PM
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Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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18th May 2006, 12:07 PM
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Ye dard kisse milta hai ye pata chalta kab hai .. par kalam to ise mehsoos kar hi leti hai .. likhta hi rahuNga jab tak saNs hai Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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19th May 2006, 10:18 PM
Dear kunal,
Tum aur tumhare khyaal, kya kahu mein? bahut bahut bahut badhiya likha hain aur sahi bhi. sabhi sher pasand aaye mujhe. dil se daad kubul kijiyega aur likhte rahiyega. Aur haan apna khyaal bhi rakhiyega. |
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Re: Koi Aur KHATA nahiN...! -
20th May 2006, 06:25 PM
"Chiraag haiN roshan andheraa par hata nahiN...
Barsaat bhi tez hai, aasmaan main ghata nahi... Is sehar* ka aalam ye jagmagaata to dekhiye... hasNte haiN log, par khushi ka koi pata nahiN" very nice....pasand aaye "Aur zindgi ka kya jo humeN judai se daraate ho … Jee hi lenge ye soch, ki rone wala koi bacha nahi…" ye sabhi kuch jayada hi ache lage............ shukriyah Quote:
kabhi humne yu khud ko harata naa dekha Kaise Samjhau Dil-e-hasarat-nasiib Ko Apne K Sab Kuch Milta Nahi Chah Lene Se Ish Zamane Mein..... "Diggaj" |
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Re: Koi Aur KHATA nahiN...! -
23rd May 2006, 05:06 PM
Aur zindgi ka kya jo humeN judai se daraate ho …
Jee hi lenge ye soch, ki rone wala koi bacha nahi… KYA BAAT HAI....KUNAAL tumhe padh kar janab Bejad Lucknowi saheb ka likha fil Aag ka ek khoobsurat geet jehan mein ubhar aaya.."jinda hoon is tarah ki gam-e-jindagi nahin/// jalta hua dia hoon magar roshni nahin//....WO MUDDATEIN HUI HAI KISI KE JUDA HUE///lekin yeh dil ki aag abhi tak bujhi nahin "" meri daad kuboool karo...ek behtreen kalaam par -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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26th May 2006, 11:50 AM
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MaiN kam se kam ye to janta hi huN ki koun mujhse kya umeed rakhta hai .. pata nahi sabki poori kar paunga ya nahi .. par koshish to rahegi hi .. aap aaye bohat accha laga mujhe .. aapka apna Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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26th May 2006, 11:54 AM
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jhoomte hai ban deewane.. aur ghar maiN dete hai ghum itne. ki aaNkhoN mai ban gaye maikhane.. aap aayi accha laga bas aur kya kahuN... -Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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26th May 2006, 11:56 AM
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mere khayal to mere dostoN ke dil se hoke hi nikalte hai ... aapko pasand aaya mujhe behad khushi hai ... aapka apna -kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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26th May 2006, 11:57 AM
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apna khayal rakhna aapka apna -kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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26th May 2006, 12:00 PM
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apni aaNkheN masalne pe majboor ho gaya huN .. ki mohtram manoj saahab humari tukbandi pe nazar daali... warna hum to har baar apne kalaam dekhte hi reh jaate the ki kabhi to itna accha likhun ki manoj bhai hum tak aa pahunche... khair aap aaye aapka behad shukra gujaar huN maiN .. apna khayl rkhiyega behtari ke sath aapka apna Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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26th May 2006, 02:42 PM
aksar har kisi ki zindagi mein unki bebasi ka sabab yeh kambakth pyaar hi hota hai........
isiliye pyaar hi nahi karna chahiye kyunki bahaut takleef hoti hai jab jise aap dilo jaan se zyada chahein aur wo aapko us pyaar ka koi sila na de sake.jab pyaar ke badle sirf aasoon hi aasoon milein.... lekin jaane kyun dil nahi manta hai is pyar iki haqeeqat ko janne ke bawajood..hum phir bhi pyaar karte hain aur bahaut pyaar karte hain us shakhs se. tumne bahaut accha likkha hai.khush raho. Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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26th May 2006, 03:11 PM
hi dear kunal,
bahot dino ke baad yaha par aayi hu,' bahot khushi hui ke aapse baat karne ka mauka mila......... *****Mujhe zindgi kehne wale baat bhi nahi karte ab... BeintehaN pyaar hi kiya, ki koi aur khatha nahi,***** hey mujhe nahi lagta itne pyaare aur sacche insan se koi bewafai karega ho sakta hai pyaar me kai Majburiya ho, aur rahi jindagi ki baattttt to................... aap abhi bhi hum sabki jindagi ho aur hamesha rahoge........ aaapki har 1 shayri bahot hi acchi hai..................... tnx 4 sharing with us................... tune pyaar u sikhake Jindgi ho jindagi badal di....... **~ Aashi ~** |
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27th May 2006, 10:58 AM
kunal dost
saadgi aur purkaari ke saath dard ko kis tarhara bayaan kiya jaata hai aap ne is ghazel mein bataya hai. bohat khoob kunal mere bhai. meri bharpoor daad qabool karein. aap ke is kalam se ehd-e-rafta ki yaad aayee hai. ajab si tishnigi, aur lateef se jazbe ke ehsaas ujaagar hota hai aise kalam ko parh ker. meri dua hai aap ki kaamiyaabi ke liye, khushiyon ke liye. musharrafhusain |
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27th May 2006, 02:08 PM
bade bhai ko chote ka aadaab,
kya kahoon,fir se ek kalaam jo mujhe khamosh kar gaya.ab to aapne apni aadat si bana li hai aise kalaam pesh karne ki,jinse main khamosh ho jata hun.bas ek baat jaroor hai aapki baat me sachhai kaafi hai.ye aap v jaante hain aur main v.umeed hai ki aap yunhi hume khamosh karte rahenge. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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2nd June 2006, 04:33 PM
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sakhi with love शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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3rd June 2006, 02:49 PM
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khair tum aayi accha laga tumhe dekh ke ... apna khayal rakhna aapka apna Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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3rd June 2006, 02:50 PM
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kya jane koun saccha hai hai is duniya main.. kyuNki koi to gunahgaar hoke bhi safedposh ghoomete hai aur kayi to bina kisi dosh ke hi gunahgaar ban jaaate hai .... aap aayi accha laga mujhe bhi.. apna khayal rakhiyega Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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3rd June 2006, 02:53 PM
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aapko jab jab apni post pe padha hai .. bas ek hi baaat sochne baith jaata huN... ki kya maine itna accha likha tha ki aap aaye .. aapne bohat jyada tareef kar di hai is khaaksaar ki .. par aapke lafzon ka isteqbaal karta huN maiN ... aap apna khayal khyal rakhiyega aapka apna Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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3rd June 2006, 03:00 PM
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KUNAAL BHAI AISA KEH KAR MUJHE SHARMINDA NA KARO....tum hamesha se hi acha likhte the...aur "suraj" ko bhala"chiraag" ki kya jaroorat??? bas baat itni si hai ki kabhi mera is mehfil mein aana kam raha aur jab aana hua to tum masroof rahe. apni dilkash gazal par meri daad ek baar fir kubool kijiye take care -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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3rd June 2006, 03:35 PM
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Bhai khamoshi hi to sabse jyada asar rakhti hai apne aap maiN ... aur jazbaat samajh hi lete hai har khamoshi ko .. meri aadat maiN kya kya shumaar karuN .. ki meri to khud ki aadat khamosh rehne ki ho gayi hai ... tum aaye mujhe bohat jyada accha laga ... Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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Re: Re: Koi Aur KHATA nahiN...! |
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Re: Re: Koi Aur KHATA nahiN...! -
3rd June 2006, 03:37 PM
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Aap ke dil ko kya chuUnga maiN .. aap to antardhayan hai khud main .. aap aayi yahi kaafi hai .. ki shikayat kya karooN maiN ... apna khayal rakhna kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Koi Aur KHATA nahiN...! |
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Koi Aur KHATA nahiN...! -
3rd June 2006, 03:39 PM
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Sharminda aap hue to meri khud ki nazar jhuk jayegi .. accha likhta huN maana .. par aap khud ko chiraag kehte hai to maiN sooraj to kabhi nahi ho sakta .. haN us chiraag ki parchai jaroor ho sakta huN ... bhai waqt ki kami is kadar ridhtoN pe asar karegi .. socha na tha .. par ab maiN to poori koshish karunga .. ise poora karne ki ... aapki daad ko sambhal ke rakh liya gaya hai... aapka bhai Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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6th June 2010, 03:29 PM
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phir dil me aaya bina member bane ...... kabhi reply nahi de paaunga....aur andar se bahut din se aawaaz aa rahi thi ....ghazal kehna seekhu.....mujhe isse accha school kaha milta... phir 14-april-2009 ko me aapke SDC parivaar ka member ban gaya......janha mujhe Zidd sahab sameer ji Diya ji praneeta ji vikas ji kunaal ji Danny ji dhaval ji mayank ji sunita ji aur zainy ji ka bharpur pyaar aur sehyog mila...aap dosto ki badolat thodha bahut ghazal kehna seekh gaya....! aise hi ek yaad ......aap sabse baantne ka dil kar aaya.... kunaal ji ki iss ghazal se behtar .....koi jagaha samajh nahi aai....kiyonki yaad ka janam iss ghazal se hi huaa tha.... !  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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7th June 2010, 12:05 PM
Hmmmmmmm main samjahta hu waqt ke sath sath kisi bhi shayer ki sahyri me bohat nikhaar aata hai........aur agar main Kunaal saheb ki 2006 me likhi gayee peshkash par abhi comment du to sahi nahi hoga........yeh alag baat hai ke yeh kalam bhi behad khoobsurat hai.
Well Kunaal saheb keep going..........aap hai to hum hai janab. Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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8th June 2010, 09:35 PM
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kaise haiN aap...? qafi pehle ki likhi hai aapki ye ghazal... har sher khoob laga mujhe.... bahut pasaNd aayee aapki ghazal....daad haazir hai qubuul kijiyega... Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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