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14th May 2008, 06:09 PM
Arse se ghum raha.. arse maiN hosh aaya … mila nahi kuch mujhe … ho gaya apna har paraaya … ab bas aakhri ye raasta hai … zindgi se nahi maut se ab vaasta hai… har zarre se sailaab hai ab aaya … sach arse se gum raha aur arse main hosh aaya…! Milta mujhe kuch kaise ho gaya apna har paraya…!
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Kis ki ye kahaani kis ka wo fasaana..
Mere ye aansuN, hai mera taraana…
Chubhenge armaaN, wo toote hue..
Rukh par unhe, holeY se bahaana..
Hum to lut kar bhi ameer hai yaar..
mehloN mai tang-dil, gareeb zamana..
sun lo ..!
Mujhe sambhalne ka junooN hai bada..
Uth na pauN kabhi aisa mujhe giraana…
Jannat ki rah pe akhiri ye zulmi aah..!
Savaari ko meri phooloN se sajaaNa..
Meri Yaad zameeN maiN reh na jaye…
Mujhe raakh kar, hawa mai udaana..
Aur …!
har kisi ki kismet nahi “sacccha_pyar”..
sochna samajhna phir ise aazmaana..
Meri ye kahaani mera hi wo fasaana..
Bikhre hue aansuN, hai mera taraana…
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Kunaal :- 14/05/2008
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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14th May 2008, 06:17 PM
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sun lo ..!
Mujhe sambhalne ka junooN hai bada..
Uth na pauN kabhi aisa mujhe giraana…
Meri Yaad zameeN maiN reh na jaye…
Mujhe raakh kar, hawa mai udaana..
Meri ye kahaani mera hi wo fasaana..
Bikhre hue aansuN, hai mera taraana…
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Bahut Khoob...............!!!!
yeh mujhy sab se zyada passand aye
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14th May 2008, 07:30 PM
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Arse se ghum raha.. arse maiN hosh aaya … mila nahi kuch mujhe … ho gaya apna har paraaya … ab bas aakhri ye raasta hai … zindgi se nahi maut se ab vaasta hai… har zarre se sailaab hai ab aaya … sach arse se gum raha aur arse main hosh aaya…! Milta mujhe kuch kaise ho gaya apna har paraya…!
°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°
Kis ki ye kahaani kis ka wo fasaana..
Mere ye aansuN, hai mera taraana…
Chubhenge armaaN, wo toote hue..
Rukh par unhe, holeY se bahaana..
Hum to lut kar bhi ameer hai yaar..
mehloN mai tang-dil, gareeb zamana..
sun lo ..!
Mujhe sambhalne ka junooN hai bada..
Uth na pauN kabhi aisa mujhe giraana…
Jannat ki rah pe akhiri ye zulmi aah..!
Savaari ko meri phooloN se sajaaNa..
Meri Yaad zameeN maiN reh na jaye…
Mujhe raakh kar, hawa mai udaana..
Aur …!
har kisi ki kismet nahi “sacccha_pyar”..
sochna samajhna phir ise aazmaana..
Meri ye kahaani mera hi wo fasaana..
Bikhre hue aansuN, hai mera taraana…
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Kunaal :- 14/05/2008
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bahut khub KUNAL.....wakehi kabil-e-tarif hai....keep it up......
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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16th May 2008, 12:37 AM
Bahut dino ke baad aap aaye bhaiya..
Dard se bhari aapki yeh rachna dil ko choo gayi..
Humesha khush rahiye!
Take Care Bhaiya!
~Priya
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
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17th May 2008, 11:29 PM
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Arse se ghum raha.. arse maiN hosh aaya … mila nahi kuch mujhe … ho gaya apna har paraaya … ab bas aakhri ye raasta hai … zindgi se nahi maut se ab vaasta hai… har zarre se sailaab hai ab aaya … sach arse se gum raha aur arse main hosh aaya…! Milta mujhe kuch kaise ho gaya apna har paraya…!
°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°
Kis ki ye kahaani kis ka wo fasaana..
Mere ye aansuN, hai mera taraana…
Chubhenge armaaN, wo toote hue..
Rukh par unhe, holeY se bahaana..
Hum to lut kar bhi ameer hai yaar..
mehloN mai tang-dil, gareeb zamana..
sun lo ..!
Mujhe sambhalne ka junooN hai bada..
Uth na pauN kabhi aisa mujhe giraana…
Jannat ki rah pe akhiri ye zulmi aah..!
Savaari ko meri phooloN se sajaaNa..
Meri Yaad zameeN maiN reh na jaye…
Mujhe raakh kar, hawa mai udaana..
Aur …!
har kisi ki kismet nahi “sacccha_pyar”..
sochna samajhna phir ise aazmaana..
Meri ye kahaani mera hi wo fasaana..
Bikhre hue aansuN, hai mera taraana…
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Kunaal :- 14/05/2008
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Dard se bharpur aap ki yaha kavita ka kya kahein, Kunnu Bhaiya...? Bas jigar pe teer chalaata raha...!
Har ek sher kabil e tareef hai...!
Arse baad aap ko parhne ka sawbhagya mila humko...!
Yun hi likhein aur aate rahein...!
Aap ke khayaal abhi tak rakhte hein hum...!
Duaaon ke saath...!
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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18th May 2008, 01:44 PM
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Arse se ghum raha.. arse maiN hosh aaya … mila nahi kuch mujhe … ho gaya apna har paraaya … ab bas aakhri ye raasta hai … zindgi se nahi maut se ab vaasta hai… har zarre se sailaab hai ab aaya … sach arse se gum raha aur arse main hosh aaya…! Milta mujhe kuch kaise ho gaya apna har paraya…!
°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°
Kis ki ye kahaani kis ka wo fasaana..
Mere ye aansuN, hai mera taraana…
Chubhenge armaaN, wo toote hue..
Rukh par unhe, holeY se bahaana..
Hum to lut kar bhi ameer hai yaar..
mehloN mai tang-dil, gareeb zamana..
sun lo ..!
Mujhe sambhalne ka junooN hai bada..
Uth na pauN kabhi aisa mujhe giraana…
Jannat ki rah pe akhiri ye zulmi aah..!
Savaari ko meri phooloN se sajaaNa..
Meri Yaad zameeN maiN reh na jaye…
Mujhe raakh kar, hawa mai udaana..
Aur …!
har kisi ki kismet nahi “sacccha_pyar”..
sochna samajhna phir ise aazmaana..
Meri ye kahaani mera hi wo fasaana..
Bikhre hue aansuN, hai mera taraana…
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Kunaal :- 14/05/2008
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Bohat ba asar likha hai kunaal ji daad to hergiz nahi doongi aesay dard pe haan mager itna kahoongi bohat se dilon pe asar karega ye kalaam aate rahiyega allah aapko khush rakhe ameen
Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
apne ander se pash pash hoon main
zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin
ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin
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20th May 2008, 05:14 PM
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Bahut Khoob...............!!!!
yeh mujhy sab se zyada passand aye
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Shukriya .. mujeeb ..
aur kya kahuN aate rehna
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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20th May 2008, 05:25 PM
aaj to sachhi bahut accha din hai....aatey hi 2-2 acchey shayro.n ko padna naseeb hua....abhi abhi danny ji ko padda hai aur ab kunal aapko.....bahut dard bhara likha hai aapne....padkar dil mein ek kasak ahsaas hua.....hum to sochtey hain hi hamare paas hi baht dard hai...par yaha to hum se badkar kai haiN
kush rahiye aur mahfil mein aatey raha kijiye
duao.n ke saath
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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27th May 2008, 01:17 PM
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bahut khub KUNAL.....wakehi kabil-e-tarif hai....keep it up......
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Shukriya....
Aapka bhi... apna waqt dene ke liye
Kunaal
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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29th May 2008, 05:23 PM
so nice of you mr.kunal
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2nd June 2008, 03:12 PM
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Bahut dino ke baad aap aaye bhaiya..
Dard se bhari aapki yeh rachna dil ko choo gayi..
Humesha khush rahiye!
Take Care Bhaiya!
~Priya
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Shukriya meri gudia...
aur aisi cheezoN ko dil se nahi lagana chaiye ... ye kisi ko khushi nahi de sakti ...
tumhari khushi ki dua humesha se hai aur rahegi
tumhara apna
kunaal
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
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2nd June 2008, 03:15 PM
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Dard se bharpur aap ki yaha kavita ka kya kahein, Kunnu Bhaiya...? Bas jigar pe teer chalaata raha...!
Har ek sher kabil e tareef hai...!
Arse baad aap ko parhne ka sawbhagya mila humko...!
Yun hi likhein aur aate rahein...!
Aap ke khayaal abhi tak rakhte hein hum...!
Duaaon ke saath...!
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Danny bhaiya..
bas aise hi likh ke chala gaya tha .. pareshani maiN ghire hue ...
accha laga aapko dekh kar yahan ...
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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13th June 2008, 02:13 PM
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Bohat ba asar likha hai kunaal ji daad to hergiz nahi doongi aesay dard pe haan mager itna kahoongi bohat se dilon pe asar karega ye kalaam aate rahiyega allah aapko khush rakhe ameen
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shukriya aapka bhi
kyuNki main daad ka haqdaar huN bhi nahi ... aur na iske liye likhta huN .. dard bas rista hai ragoN se .. aur kisi ko uska ehsaas ho jaye badi baat hai ... aapka shkriya ...
Kunaal
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
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18th December 2008, 01:50 AM
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aaj to sachhi bahut accha din hai....aatey hi 2-2 acchey shayro.n ko padna naseeb hua....abhi abhi danny ji ko padda hai aur ab kunal aapko.....bahut dard bhara likha hai aapne....padkar dil mein ek kasak ahsaas hua.....hum to sochtey hain hi hamare paas hi baht dard hai...par yaha to hum se badkar kai haiN
kush rahiye aur mahfil mein aatey raha kijiye
duao.n ke saath
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Sunita ji
Muai ka adad talabgaar huN itne dino baad aapse mukhatib ho raha hun aapke khat ke jawaab main ... khair dair aaye durust aaye .. aur accha bhi hai tab ye keh nahi sakta tha ... ki aata rahunga .. par aaj dekhiye kehne ki zaroorat nahi kyuNki aapko roz dikh hi jata houNga yahan ... aapke pyar aur duaoN ka dil se shukraguzaar ...
aapka apna
Kunaal
KunaaL (Sifar).........
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Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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25th March 2009, 09:37 AM
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so nice of you mr.kunal
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Thanks Jinal... sorry for being late
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
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7th December 2009, 01:02 AM
Hum to lut kar bhi ameer hai yaar..
mehloN mai tang-dil, gareeb zamana..
Mujhe sambhalne ka junooN hai bada..
Uth na pauN kabhi aisa mujhe giraana…
ye dono sher bhayee bahut asar liye hia.... kisi ke liye bhi raam-baan hai ye ....
bahut sahi kaah hai aur pur-asar kaha hai
Meri Yaad zameeN maiN reh na jaye…
Mujhe raakh kar, hawa mai udaana..
kunaal bhayee .. this one is my favt........... dil foota hai yaha
yun laga jaise aapne kaah hia aur
mere sath ye ho gaya hai
jiyo bahut jiyo ......
mere pas lafz nahi hia... jane kya kahna chahta hun aur kyu nahi kah pa raha hun
Aur …!
har kisi ki kismet nahi “sacccha_pyar”..
sochna samajhna phir ise aazmaana..
ahh
ye bhi sahi hai
mere 'Baba' ki baat kahi hai
likhabat mai apni rote ho
tum bhi mere baba ke pote ho
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7th December 2009, 01:55 AM
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Arse se ghum raha.. arse maiN hosh aaya … mila nahi kuch mujhe … ho gaya apna har paraaya … ab bas aakhri ye raasta hai … zindgi se nahi maut se ab vaasta hai… har zarre se sailaab hai ab aaya … sach arse se gum raha aur arse main hosh aaya…! Milta mujhe kuch kaise ho gaya apna har paraya…!
°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°
Kis ki ye kahaani kis ka wo fasaana..
Mere ye aansuN, hai mera taraana…
Chubhenge armaaN, wo toote hue..
Rukh par unhe, holeY se bahaana..
Hum to lut kar bhi ameer hai yaar..
mehloN mai tang-dil, gareeb zamana..
sun lo ..!
Mujhe sambhalne ka junooN hai bada..
Uth na pauN kabhi aisa mujhe giraana…
Jannat ki rah pe akhiri ye zulmi aah..!
Savaari ko meri phooloN se sajaaNa..
Meri Yaad zameeN maiN reh na jaye…
Mujhe raakh kar, hawa mai udaana..
Aur …!
har kisi ki kismet nahi “sacccha_pyar”..
sochna samajhna phir ise aazmaana..
Meri ye kahaani mera hi wo fasaana..
Bikhre hue aansuN, hai mera taraana…
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Kunaal :- 14/05/2008
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Kunal ji …ab is ke reply main hum kya kahe yeh to samajh hi nahi aa raha. Aap se ek sawaal puchhe … dil mai chhupe dard ke tukado ko aap yahaan ek saath jod ke kaise lafzon mai bayaan kar dete hai ????
Itana hi kahungi ki ……palako se aansoon gire nahi ..par haan dil ko zaroor rula diya …..aapke likhe ne… Hum jaanate hai kahena asaan hai …. Aur hona bahot mushkil …fir bhi hum dil se duaa karate hai ki …aap ko zindagi ki har khushi mile.
Shaayad bahot kuchh hai abhi kahene ko ise padhane ke baad … aur shaayad kuchh bhi nahi …. Par abhi kuchh kahe nahi paaungi …. Fir kabhi aaungi waapas is post par shaayad tab kuchh bayaan kar paaun…. Abhi ke liye hume maaf kar dijiye please.
Bhagwaa ji aapko hammesha khush rakhe,
Aapki Dost: Gudia
Jay Ambe.
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Ek Dil Jiski Dhadkan Ruksi Gai,
Ek Zindagi Jiski Manzil Ka Koi Pata Hi Nahi,
Ek Daaman Jahaan Se Khushiyaan Galti Se Bhi Guzarti Nahi.
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11th December 2009, 12:35 AM
kunal Bhai,
Jo mujhe kehna hai, vo gudiaji ne upar bahut hi bekhoobi se keh diya hai....
aur jyada kuch nahi...aapke vishay me ab kehne layak mere paas kuch bhi nahi hai....
Bas likhte raho bhai....aapki awaaz shyad hamari bhi awaaz hai....
amit7600
Aandhiya Gam Ki Chalegi To Sawar Jaoonga Me
Mai To Dariya Hu Samoondar Me Utar Jaaonga Me
Mujhe Suli Pe Chadane Ki Jaroorat Kya Hai Logo
Mere Haato Se Kalam Cheen Lo Yuhi Mar Jaoonga Me
(When i received You in my heart everything changed for me)
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11th December 2009, 07:42 AM
Bohat khoob kunaal saheb........khoobsurat peshkash.
Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...
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