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Arsh-O-Deewar-O-Dar Hai Nam mera...! - 19th November 2014, 12:31 AM

अर्श*-ओ-दीवार-ओ-दर है नम मेरा..
इसमें घुटता है अब तो दम मेरा..

है वो अज्म-ओ-कमर** की दुन्या से..
मुझसे मिलता नहीं सनम मेरा.

तुम जो बदलो तो बदले शायद अब...
कब से बदला नहीं मौसम मेरा..

ख्वाब ही ख्वाब है मिरी किस्मत..
ख्वाब ही लज्जत-ए-अलम मेरा..

मिल गए होते कब के बढ़ता जो..
एक कदम तेरा एक कदम मेरा..

जो गए लौट कर नहीं आते..
कम करे कोई तो ये ग़म मेरा..

है 'सिफर' का वजूद ग़ज़लों से..
शौक से कर तू सर कलम मेरा..

*छत
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19-11-2014


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19th November 2014, 09:55 AM

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अर्श*-ओ-दीवार-ओ-दर है नम मेरा..
इसमें घुटता है अब तो दम मेरा..

है वो अज्म-ओ-कमर** की दुन्या से..
मुझसे मिलता नहीं सनम मेरा.

तुम जो बदलो तो बदले शायद अब...
कब से बदला नहीं मौसम मेरा..

ख्वाब ही ख्वाब है मिरी किस्मत..
ख्वाब ही लज्जत-ए-अलम मेरा..

मिल गए होते कब के बढ़ता जो..
एक कदम तेरा एक कदम मेरा..

जो गए लौट कर नहीं आते..
कम करे कोई तो ये ग़म मेरा..

है 'सिफर' का वजूद ग़ज़लों से..
शौक से कर तू सर कलम मेरा..

*छत
** सितारे और चाँद

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19-11-2014


Kunaal ji.........subha haseen ho gye aapki gazal padte hi, subha subha bahut umda gazal padne ko mili, sabhi ashiyaar bemisaal hai....!

अर्श*-ओ-दीवार-ओ-दर है नम मेरा..
इसमें घुटता है अब तो दम मेरा..

pehle sher hi qayamat hai...baakiyoN ka to kya kehna...yu hi likhte rhiye aur bazm ki ronak badate rahiye.

duaoN ke saath


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19th November 2014, 07:25 PM

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अर्श*-ओ-दीवार-ओ-दर है नम मेरा..
इसमें घुटता है अब तो दम मेरा..

है वो अज्म-ओ-कमर** की दुन्या से..
मुझसे मिलता नहीं सनम मेरा.

तुम जो बदलो तो बदले शायद अब...
कब से बदला नहीं मौसम मेरा..

ख्वाब ही ख्वाब है मिरी किस्मत..
ख्वाब ही लज्जत-ए-अलम मेरा..

मिल गए होते कब के बढ़ता जो..
एक कदम तेरा एक कदम मेरा..

जो गए लौट कर नहीं आते..
कम करे कोई तो ये ग़म मेरा..

है 'सिफर' का वजूद ग़ज़लों से..
शौक से कर तू सर कलम मेरा..

*छत
** सितारे और चाँद

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19-11-2014
Good one Sifar,

अर्श*-ओ-दीवार-ओ-दर है नम मेरा..
इसमें घुटता है अब तो दम मेरा..

very nice..........


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19th November 2014, 07:54 PM

तुम जो बदलो तो बदले शायद अब...
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Kunaal ji.........subha haseen ho gye aapki gazal padte hi, subha subha bahut umda gazal padne ko mili, sabhi ashiyaar bemisaal hai....!

अर्श*-ओ-दीवार-ओ-दर है नम मेरा..
इसमें घुटता है अब तो दम मेरा..

pehle sher hi qayamat hai...baakiyoN ka to kya kehna...yu hi likhte rhiye aur bazm ki ronak badate rahiye.

duaoN ke saath
Bohat shukriya sunita jii..

Aapke khuloosi andaaj se kiye isteqbal ka main bhi isteqbal karta huN.. manmoon huN aapki baatoN ko paa ke .. bohat bohat shukriya ..

Khyaal rakhiye apna

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अर्श*-ओ-दीवार-ओ-दर है नम मेरा..
इसमें घुटता है अब तो दम मेरा..

है वो अज्म-ओ-कमर** की दुन्या से..
मुझसे मिलता नहीं सनम मेरा.

तुम जो बदलो तो बदले शायद अब...
कब से बदला नहीं मौसम मेरा..

ख्वाब ही ख्वाब है मिरी किस्मत..
ख्वाब ही लज्जत-ए-अलम मेरा..

मिल गए होते कब के बढ़ता जो..
एक कदम तेरा एक कदम मेरा..

जो गए लौट कर नहीं आते..
कम करे कोई तो ये ग़म मेरा..

है 'सिफर' का वजूद ग़ज़लों से..
शौक से कर तू सर कलम मेरा..

*छत
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19-11-2014

तुम जो बदलो तो बदले शायद अब...
कब से बदला नहीं मौसम मेरा..

ख्वाब ही ख्वाब है मिरी किस्मत..
ख्वाब ही लज्जत-ए-अलम मेरा..

Kunaal ji bhut uttam bhut khub....mazaa aa gyaa...khush rahai.n..Raj...


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