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parda yaha ghar mai hi reh jaata hai... -
19th May 2009, 03:27 PM
parda yaha ghar mai hi reh jaata hai...
socho toh kitni jaldi ye waqt Guzar jaata hai
aaina wahi rehta hai chehra badal jaata hai ...
aur kitna main apne aap se mukhaatib rehta
saamne wale ko sab kuch pata chal jaata hai...
tum se maine apni zindgi ka zikr kar toh liya
magar isske baad sirf intezaar reh jaata hai...
iss purane shehar mai main jis ummid se aaya hu
uss baat ka parda yaha ghar mai hi reh jaata hai...
---naresh mehra---
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19th May 2009, 08:02 PM
bahot achha likha hai aapne
socho toh kitni jaldi ye waqt Guzar jaata hai
aaina wahi rehta hai chehra badal jaata hai ...
sach kaha hai aapne
daad
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
Diya
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19th May 2009, 08:22 PM
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bahot achha likha hai aapne
socho toh kitni jaldi ye waqt Guzar jaata hai
aaina wahi rehta hai chehra badal jaata hai ...
sach kaha hai aapne
daad
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Diya ji
aapne meri iss Ghazal ko padha....jitna bhi pasand kiya...uske liye aapka bahut bahut shukriya.....aap bhi bahut acha likhti hai...mujhe bhi aapki nayi rachna ka itnezaar rehta hai...
---naresh mehra--
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jab bhi main aasma pe uddte parindo ko dekhtaa hu
jiyada kuch nahi apne dosto ke baare mai sochta hu...
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19th May 2009, 08:47 PM
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Diya ji aapne meri iss Ghazal ko padha....jitna bhi pasand kiya...uske liye aapka bahut bahut shukriya.....aap bhi bahut acha likhti hai...mujhe bhi aapki nayi rachna ka itnezaar rehta hai... ---naresh mehra-- -------------------------------------------------- jab bhi main aasma pe uddte parindo ko dekhtaa hu jiyada kuch nahi apne dosto ke baare mai sochta hu...
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sukriya Naresh jee,
mujhe ghazal kehna nahin aati........bas youN hi tahreer likhti hu kabhi kabhi ........aap is site per Manoj jee,Mayank jee,Kshitiz jee,Dheer jee,rajveer jee,Dhaval jee,Mujeeb jee,Ghayal jee ke ghazal ko padhiye aapko bahot madad milega ghazal kahne keliye ..........
ek din aap ka naam bhi inke saath aayegi
AmeeN
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
Diya
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19th May 2009, 09:14 PM
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Originally Posted by naresh_mehra110
parda yaha ghar mai hi reh jaata hai...
socho toh kitni jaldi ye waqt Guzar jaata hai
aaina wahi rehta hai chehra badal jaata hai ...
aur kitna main apne aap se mukhaatib rehta
saamne wale ko sab kuch pata chal jaata hai...
tum se maine apni zindgi ka zikr kar toh liya
magar isske baad sirf intezaar reh jaata hai...
iss purane shehar mai main jis ummid se aaya hu
uss baat ka parda yaha ghar mai hi reh jaata hai...
---naresh mehra---
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nareshji........ aapki baatei sach mei dil chhu leti hai...... aap behad khoobsurat likhte hai par shayad mai sochti hoo aap apni baat sahi dhang se keh nahi paati............ aapki likhi panktiyaa pasand aayi
socho toh kitni jaldi ye waqt Guzar jaata hai
aaina wahi rehta hai chehra badal jaata hai ...
.......................... ye bohat achchi lagi
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19th May 2009, 10:03 PM
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sukriya Naresh jee,
mujhe ghazal kehna nahin aati........bas youN hi tahreer likhti hu kabhi kabhi ........aap is site per Manoj jee,Mayank jee,Kshitiz jee,Dheer jee,rajveer jee,Dhaval jee,Mujeeb jee,Ghayal jee ke ghazal ko padhiye aapko bahot madad milega ghazal kahne keliye ..........
ek din aap ka naam bhi inke saath aayegi
AmeeN
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Daya ji
shukriyaa.........aapka ! margdarshan ke liye... acha laga.....Lekhan mai har waqt sudhaar ki gunzaish hoti hai........
---naresh mehra---
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19th May 2009, 10:09 PM
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nareshji........ aapki baatei sach mei dil chhu leti hai...... aap behad khoobsurat likhte hai par shayad mai sochti hoo aap apni baat sahi dhang se keh nahi paati............ aapki likhi panktiyaa pasand aayi
socho toh kitni jaldi ye waqt Guzar jaata hai
aaina wahi rehta hai chehra badal jaata hai ...
.......................... ye bohat achchi lagi
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khanak ji
jo aapko mera likha pasand aaya uske liye shukriya....aage aur behtar kehne ki koshish karunga....
---naresh mehra---
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19th May 2009, 10:13 PM
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Originally Posted by naresh_mehra110
parda yaha ghar mai hi reh jaata hai...
socho toh kitni jaldi ye waqt Guzar jaata hai
aaina wahi rehta hai chehra badal jaata hai ...
aur kitna main apne aap se mukhaatib rehta
saamne wale ko sab kuch pata chal jaata hai...
tum se maine apni zindgi ka zikr kar toh liya
magar isske baad sirf intezaar reh jaata hai...
iss purane shehar mai main jis ummid se aaya hu
uss baat ka parda yaha ghar mai hi reh jaata hai...
---naresh mehra---
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its really awesome
naresh ji
har lafz main aisa lagta hai
jaise schhai hai
keep it up
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19th May 2009, 10:22 PM
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its really awesome
naresh ji
har lafz main aisa lagta hai
jaise schhai hai
keep it up
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shukriya.........aapne meri koshish ko sarhaa.....aur pasand kiya....
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19th May 2009, 10:38 PM
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shukriya.........aapne meri koshish ko sarhaa.....aur pasand kiya....
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anytime ji,,,,,
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24th May 2009, 08:19 AM
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anytime ji,,,,,
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Rani ji
aapke sher ke ehsaas bahut ache lage
Raat guzri phir mehekti subah aayi,
dil dharka phir tumhari yaad aayi,
aankho ne mehsoos kiya uss hawa ko ,
jo tumhe chookar hamare paas aayi.
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24th May 2009, 10:04 AM
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Rani ji aapke sher ke ehsaas bahut ache lage Raat guzri phir mehekti subah aayi, dil dharka phir tumhari yaad aayi, aankho ne mehsoos kiya uss hawa ko , jo tumhe chookar hamare paas aayi.
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thank you naresh ji,,,,,,,,,,
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8th July 2009, 10:48 PM
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thank you naresh ji,,,,,,,,,,
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Rani ji......aaj kal aap kaha hai.....dikhai nahi de rahe....kis kaam mai busy ho..........bazm ki ronak zara kam ho gai hai.....
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
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9th July 2009, 03:02 PM
naresh jii.......bahut accha likha hai aapne, hume phele wala sher bahut pasand aaya !
aur jis geet ki zameen aapne li hai, woh bhi kamaal ki hai, hume to esko padkar "Anand Bakshi jii" ka likha "Lata jii" ka gaaya "Shalimaar" film ka geet yaad aa gaya.
"aaina wahi rehta hai chehre badal jaate haiN"
etna accha geet yaad dilane ke liye bahut bahut shukriya.
god bless u
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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15th July 2009, 01:05 AM
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naresh jii.......bahut accha likha hai aapne, hume phele wala sher bahut pasand aaya !
aur jis geet ki zameen aapne li hai, woh bhi kamaal ki hai, hume to esko padkar "Anand Bakshi jii" ka likha "Lata jii" ka gaaya "Shalimaar" film ka geet yaad aa gaya.
"aaina wahi rehta hai chehre badal jaate haiN"
etna accha geet yaad dilane ke liye bahut bahut shukriya.
god bless u
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Sunita ji..........meri koshish aapko pasand aai ....mujhe is baat ki bahut khushi hai.....yeh padhkar aur acha laga ki aapko apna pasand dida geet bhi yaad aa gaya.........aapne mere liye kimti waqt nikala.... iske liye........aapka bahut bahut shukriya........
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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15th July 2009, 05:36 AM
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Originally Posted by naresh_mehra110
parda yaha ghar mai hi reh jaata hai...
socho toh kitni jaldi ye waqt Guzar jaata hai
aaina wahi rehta hai chehra badal jaata hai ...
aur kitna main apne aap se mukhaatib rehta
saamne wale ko sab kuch pata chal jaata hai...
tum se maine apni zindgi ka zikr kar toh liya
magar isske baad sirf intezaar reh jaata hai...
iss purane shehar mai main jis ummid se aaya hu
uss baat ka parda yaha ghar mai hi reh jaata hai...
---naresh mehra---
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Bahut khoob naresh ji......
Aapki har gazal me khaasiyat ye hoti hai ki aap badi masoomiyat se kaafi badi baat keh jaate hai.....
aapki aur gazlon ka intzaar rahega.....
likhte rahiye....
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18th July 2009, 06:32 AM
naresh bhai............... behad khubsurat, pehla sher dil ko chuu gaya.............
apka nalin
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Originally Posted by naresh_mehra110
parda yaha ghar mai hi reh jaata hai...
socho toh kitni jaldi ye waqt Guzar jaata hai
aaina wahi rehta hai chehra badal jaata hai ...
aur kitna main apne aap se mukhaatib rehta
saamne wale ko sab kuch pata chal jaata hai...
tum se maine apni zindgi ka zikr kar toh liya
magar isske baad sirf intezaar reh jaata hai...
iss purane shehar mai main jis ummid se aaya hu
uss baat ka parda yaha ghar mai hi reh jaata hai...
---naresh mehra---
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Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe
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18th July 2009, 09:37 AM
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parda yaha ghar mai hi reh jaata hai...
socho toh kitni jaldi ye waqt Guzar jaata hai
aaina wahi rehta hai chehra badal jaata hai ...
aur kitna main apne aap se mukhaatib rehta
saamne wale ko sab kuch pata chal jaata hai...
tum se maine apni zindgi ka zikr kar toh liya
magar isske baad sirf intezaar reh jaata hai...
iss purane shehar mai main jis ummid se aaya hu
uss baat ka parda yaha ghar mai hi reh jaata hai...
---naresh mehra--
Naresj ji aap sach meiN bahut khoobsrat likhte haiN..
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19th July 2009, 09:39 AM
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naresh bhai............... behad khubsurat, pehla sher dil ko chuu gaya.............
apka nalin
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Nanil ji ..........aapne kimti samaye nikal ke meri rachna ko padha aur saraha iske liye aapka bahut bahut shukriya............
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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" Bahut mumkin hai is baar tum yaad aao
Bahut mumkin hai tum khud hi chali aao
Par isse ab kiya fark padhegaa mujhe
Murjhaaye phoolon mai jaise paani daal aao..."
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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2nd June 2014, 04:38 PM
naresh jee.....aapki is purani ghazal pe nazar padi......us samay bhi aap kya khoob likhte the......ek ek aashaar pasand aaye....
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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2nd June 2014, 04:51 PM
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parda yaha ghar mai hi reh jaata hai...
socho toh kitni jaldi ye waqt Guzar jaata hai
aaina wahi rehta hai chehra badal jaata hai ...
aur kitna main apne aap se mukhaatib rehta
saamne wale ko sab kuch pata chal jaata hai...
tum se maine apni zindgi ka zikr kar toh liya
magar isske baad sirf intezaar reh jaata hai...
iss purane shehar mai main jis ummid se aaya hu
uss baat ka parda yaha ghar mai hi reh jaata hai...
---naresh mehra---
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Nareshji, kya laajawaab ashaar likheN haiN aapne....
bahot hi umda hai ye qalaam aapka...
duaoN ke saath, Adil ka salaam qabul kareN...
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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2nd June 2014, 09:22 PM
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parda yaha ghar mai hi reh jaata hai...
socho toh kitni jaldi ye waqt Guzar jaata hai
aaina wahi rehta hai chehra badal jaata hai ...
aur kitna main apne aap se mukhaatib rehta
saamne wale ko sab kuch pata chal jaata hai...
tum se maine apni zindgi ka zikr kar toh liya
magar isske baad sirf intezaar reh jaata hai...
iss purane shehar mai main jis ummid se aaya hu
uss baat ka parda yaha ghar mai hi reh jaata hai...
---naresh mehra---
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waahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh bahot hi khoob peshkash hai aapki Naresh ji.... kyaa kahne... har sher ek se ek huaa hai.... khoob se khoob bahot khoob.... likhte rahen bas aur aate rahen..
shukriyaa
Shaad....
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11th June 2014, 11:16 AM
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parda yaha ghar mai hi reh jaata hai...
socho toh kitni jaldi ye waqt Guzar jaata hai
aaina wahi rehta hai chehra badal jaata hai ...
aur kitna main apne aap se mukhaatib rehta
saamne wale ko sab kuch pata chal jaata hai...
tum se maine apni zindgi ka zikr kar toh liya
magar isske baad sirf intezaar reh jaata hai...
iss purane shehar mai main jis ummid se aaya hu
uss baat ka parda yaha ghar mai hi reh jaata hai...
---naresh mehra---
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Bohut Hi Sundar aur gehri, Apki Tareef ke liye shabd kam pad rahe hain ..............
Bas isi tarah likh kar humara margdarshan karte rahein.
Shukriya
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