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Woh mujhsay sa yoon daaman churaane lagay
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Woh mujhsay sa yoon daaman churaane lagay - 8th August 2010, 02:40 AM

wo mujh se yoon daaman chuRaane lage
ki guzre huwe din fasaane lagay


jo kal tak muhabbat ka izhaar the
wahi ab hawas ke bahaane lagay

lagaa`o na pehre yooN khushbu`oN par
haiN haasil meN jin kay zamaane lagay

pighal jaate baahoN maiN jo thay kabhii
bahut faasle ab banaane lagay

guzishta jo shab ka hai aayaa khayaal
vo sharma ke ankheiN jhukaane lagay

jo poochhaa to keh daalii hai dil kii baat
na kehna tujhe ab rulaane lagay
   
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8th August 2010, 03:00 AM

Brijinder sahab AadaaB!

Kya baat hai janab ishkiyaa andaaz bhi aur tanziyaa bhi bahut khoob..... sabhi sher ekdum umdaa..... kafi achcha laga padhker ....

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8th August 2010, 03:53 AM

jo kal tak muhabbat ka izhaar the
wahi ab hawas ke bahaane lagay

BAHUT ACHHE AHSAAS HAI'N BARJINDER JI . KEEP IT UP


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wo mujh se yoon daaman chuRaane lage
ki guzre huwe din fasaane lagay


jo kal tak muhabbat ka izhaar the
wahi ab hawas ke bahaane lagay

lagaa`o na pehre yooN khushbu`oN par
haiN haasil meN jin kay zamaane lagay

pighal jaate baahoN maiN jo thay kabhii
bahut faasle ab banaane lagay

guzishta jo shab ka hai aayaa khayaal
vo sharma ke ankheiN jhukaane lagay

jo poochhaa to keh daalii hai dil kii baat
na kehna tujhe ab rulaane lagay

Brijinder ji,

bahut khoob ....dil se daad.... likhte rahiye.... khush rahiye....

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