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ki karaan? - 8th February 2011, 03:41 PM

ਕੀ ਕਰਾਂ??

ਮੇਰੇ ਚੁਪ -ਚੁਪੀਤੇ ਕੀਰਣੇ
ਮੇਰੇ ਹੋਕੇ ਨਜ਼ਰੀਬੰਦ
ਮੇਰੇ ਬੇਆਵਾਜੇ ਵੈਨ ਵੇ
ਪਾਟਨ ਦਿਲ ਦੀ ਕੰਧ

ਹਿਕ ਵਿਚ ਘੁਟ ਘੁਟ ਮਰਦਾ
ਪਿਆ ਅਜ ਮੇਰਾ ਵਿਰਲਾਪ ਵੇ
ਮੇਰੀ ਸੋਚਾਂ ਨੀਲੀ ਹੋਈਆਂ
ਅਜ ਪੀਤਾ ਐਸਾ ਪਾਪ ਵੇ

ਜਿੰਦ ਹੋਈ ਮੇਰੀ ਝਲ-ਵਲਲੀ
ਲਗਿਆ ਐਸਾ ਘਾਤ ਵੇ
ਦੀਦੇ ਵਿਟ-ਵਿਟ ਵੈਖਦੈ
ਪਕਢ਼ ਨਾ ਆਵੇ ਬਾਤ ਵੇ

ਅਜ ਗਲੀ ਤਕਦੀਰ ਖਲੋਤੀ
ਹਸ-ਹਸ ਪਾਟੇ ਸੰਘ
ਮਨ ਅਰਦਾਸਾਂ ਸੋਧਧਾ
ਕਿਤੇ ਚੁਪ -ਚੁਪੀਤੇ ਲੰਘ

ਅਜ ਨੈਨ ਪਯੇ ਕੁਰ੍ਲਾੰਨ ਵੇ
ਵਿਚ ਹੰਝੂਆਂ ਨੂੰ ਲਾ ਕੇ ਬੰਨ
ਇਹ ਤੂ ਕਰੇਂਗੀ ਨਾਲ ਮੇਰੇ
ਮੈਂ ਕਿੰਵੇ ਲਵਾਂ ਮੰਨ ?
ਇਹ ਖੇਡ ਤੇਰਾ ਫਰੇਬ ਸੀ
ਮੇਰਾ ਧੁਆਂਖ ਗਿਆ ਹੈ ਚੰਨ

ਮੇਰੇ ਵਿਸ਼ਵਾਸਾਂ ਦੇ ਭਗਵਾਂਨ ਨੂੰ
ਸੁਟ ਗਿਆ ਵਿਚ ਮਸਾਂਨੰ ਤੂੰ

ਗਿੱਲੀ ਲ੍ਕ੍ਕ੍ਰਡ ਤੀਲੀ ਲਾ ਕੇ

ਛੱਡ ਗਿਆ ਮੈੰਨੂ ਭਖਾਂਨੰ ਨੂੰ-

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10th February 2011, 10:58 AM

nice sad poem. thanks for sharing................


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1st April 2011, 12:35 PM

Brijindar ji bahut hi sohna likhea hai tusi.... likhde rehna...
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Birjinder ji kamaal hai.... sach much kamaal hai.... Sona hai tuhadi kalam wich... I'm imressed..... bahut hi shaandaar shabdaawli......

Merey be-awaajey vain ve paadan dil di kandh....


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21st April 2011, 06:22 AM

originally posted by Brijinder

ਅਜ ਨੈਨ ਪਯੇ ਕੁਰ੍ਲਾੰਨ ਵੇ
ਵਿਚ ਹੰਝੂਆਂ ਨੂੰ ਲਾ ਕੇ ਬੰਨ
ਇਹ ਤੂ ਕਰੇਂਗੀ ਨਾਲ ਮੇਰੇ
ਮੈਂ ਕਿੰਵੇ ਲਵਾਂ ਮੰਨ ?
ਇਹ ਖੇਡ ਤੇਰਾ ਫਰੇਬ ਸੀ
ਮੇਰਾ ਧੁਆਂਖ ਗਿਆ ਹੈ ਚੰਨ

ਮੇਰੇ ਵਿਸ਼ਵਾਸਾਂ ਦੇ ਭਗਵਾਂਨ ਨੂੰ
ਸੁਟ ਗਿਆ ਵਿਚ ਮਸਾਂਨੰ ਤੂੰ

ਗਿੱਲੀ ਲ੍ਕ੍ਕ੍ਰਡ ਤੀਲੀ ਲਾ ਕੇ

ਛੱਡ ਗਿਆ ਮੈੰਨੂ ਭਖਾਂਨੰ ਨੂੰ-

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ik bahut hi sohni kavita padan nu miili

thanks Birjinder ji

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21st April 2011, 08:18 AM

ਅੱਜ ਇਕ ਵਾਰੀ ਫੇਰ ਤੋਂ ਕਿਸੇ ਕਲਮ ਚੋਂ " ਸ਼ਿਵ ਕੁਮਾਰ ਬਟਾਲਵੀ " ਦੇ ਦਰਸ਼ਨ ਹੋਏ ਨੇ ।no comments. ਹਰ ਬਾਰ ਇਕ ਇਕ ਲਫਜ ਦੁਬਾਰਾ ਪੜਨ ਨੂੰ ਦਿਲ ਕਰਦੈ । THANKS FOR SHARING ...................
   
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28th April 2011, 03:55 AM

Brijinder g, Tusi bahuuuuuuuuuuuuuut hi piyara te bahuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut shaaandar likhiya aa


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ਇਹ ਖੇਡ ਤੇਰਾ ਫਰੇਬ ਸੀ
ਮੇਰਾ ਧੁਆਂਖ ਗਿਆ ਹੈ ਚੰਨ


Bahut khoob bai ji...shabdawli bahut sohni ...thnx for sharing and keep posting


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