Chahet bhi thak gayee...( Ghayel )

[sajid_ghayel]

Itna chaha tumhe maine ke meri chahat bhi thak gayee
Tum itna huye zaruri ke meri zarurat bhi thak gayee

Main kafir nahi hu yaro na bandagi me aib hain
Hain itna manaya Rab ko ke ab ibadat bhi thak gayee

Koi ilzam na raha baki jo woh Ghayel pe lagate
Zamane me dushmano ki ab shararat bhi thak gayee

Kuch bhookh ne haraya kuch tadaad me kami thi
Mere shehar ke sharifo ki ab sharafat bhi thak gayee

Kab tak bachati aabroo tulsi gareeb ke aagan ki
Majbooriyo ke bojh tale izzat bhi thak gayee

Sach ki batein to hain sab karte sach kehta nahi hain koi
Jhooto ke sath rehkar bagaavat bhi thak gayee

Aur kaise kare zulm aur kitna hame sataye
Yeh soch soch kar ab hukumat bhi thak gayee

Itna chaha tumhe maine ke meri chahat bhi thak gayee
Tum itna huye zaruri ke meri zarurat bhi thak gayee

-Sajid Ghayel-

[kwahish]

Originally Posted by sajid_ghayel

Itna chaha tumhe maine ke meri chahat bhi thak gayee

Tum itna huye zaruri ke meri zarurat bhi thak gayee

Main kafir nahi hu yaro na bandagi me aib hain
Hain itna manaya Rab ko ke ab ibadat bhi thak gayee

Koi ilzam na raha baki jo woh Ghayel pe lagate
Zamane me dushmano ki ab shararat bhi thak gayee

Kuch bhookh ne haraya kuch tadaad me kami thi
Mere shehar ke sharifo ki ab sharafat bhi thak gayee

Kab tak bachati aabroo tulsi gareeb ke aagan ki
Majbooriyo ke bojh tale izzat bhi thak gayee

Sach ki batein to hain sab karte sach kehta nahi hain koi
Jhooto ke sath rehkar bagaavat bhi thak gayee

Aur kaise kare zulm aur kitna hame sataye
Yeh soch soch kar ab hukumat bhi thak gayee

Itna chaha tumhe maine ke meri chahat bhi thak gayee
Tum itna huye zaruri ke meri zarurat bhi thak gayee

-Sajid Ghayel-

Sajid sahab Aadaab,

Mudat bad aapse ruberu hone ka maukha mila, kaise hai aap?
Aapki gazal ka mazmoon bahut khoob hai kuch sher achche lage highlighted sher kafi achche hai...
Aur is sher ka to bhai jawab hi nahi, bahut bemisal soch hai aur adaygii bhi bahut khoob rahi..

Kab tak bachati aabroo tulsi gareeb ke aagan ki
Majbooriyo ke bojh tale izzat bhi thak gayee

Aate rahiye apna khayal rakhiye ..
Aur mehfil ko sajate rahiye..
Khuda Hafez..

[sajid_ghayel]

Originally Posted by kwahish

Sajid sahab Aadaab,

Mudat bad aapse ruberu hone ka maukha mila, kaise hai aap?
Aapki gazal ka mazmoon bahut khoob hai kuch sher achche lage highlighted sher kafi achche hai...
Aur is sher ka to bhai jawab hi nahi, bahut bemisal soch hai aur adaygii bhi bahut khoob rahi..

Kab tak bachati aabroo tulsi gareeb ke aagan ki
Majbooriyo ke bojh tale izzat bhi thak gayee

Aate rahiye apna khayal rakhiye ..
Aur mehfil ko sajate rahiye..

Khuda Hafez..

Khwaish sahab bas kya kahu aapki is mohabbat bhari dad padhkar yu laga mano mujhe meri mehnat ka mehantana mil gaya.

Apni gair hazri ke liye aapse mafi ka talabgaar hu, aur yeh koshish karuga ke aapko shikayat ka mauka na du aur mehfil me barabar hazri deta rahu.

Allah Hafiz