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Chupnae laga hai chaand nazar sae,,,,چھپنے لگا ہے چاند نظر سے
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Chupnae laga hai chaand nazar sae,,,,چھپنے لگا ہے چاند نظر سے - 10th September 2011, 06:59 PM

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Chupnae laga hai chaand nazar sae
Badal aaya,janae kidher sae

Us nae hi jeena kya ajeeran
Jis ko chaha,jaan-o-jiger sae

raunaq thi gulshan main jissae
tord kae laayaegul wo shajer sae

Wabasta theen jis sae ummeedaen
wapus aaya wo bhi sheher sae

Ab to sukoon sae sonae do RAz
Soae hoae hain,thak kae safar sae

Razia Yasmeen RAZ

چھپنے لگا ہے چاند نظر سے
بادل آیا جانے کدھر سے

اس نے ہی جینا کیا اجیرن
جس کو چاھا جان و جگر سے

رون*ق تھی گلشن میں جس سے
توڑ کے لاۓ گل وہ شجر سے

وابستہ تھیں جس سے امیدیں
واپس آیا وہ بھی شہر سے


اب تو سکوں سے سونے دو راز
سوۓ ھوۓ ھیں تھک کے سفر سے
   
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10th September 2011, 07:22 PM

Razia Yasmeen RAZ ji,

Chupnae laga hai chaand nazar sae
Badal aaya,janae kidher sae

Wabasta theen jis sae ummeedaen
wapus aaya wo bhi sheher sae


bahoot khoob ji.....daad hazir hai .......!!!

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Love 11th September 2011, 06:44 AM

Us nae hi jeena kya ajeeran
Jis ko chaha,jaan-o-jiger sae

waise to puri ghazal hi achchi hai par ye do lines kuch khaas lage
dil ko chu gaye
thanks for sharing

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11th September 2011, 11:01 AM

Razia jee:

namaste!

kaise haiN aap? bahot Khoob Ghazal kahi hay aapne.. dil se daad

KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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Love 11th September 2011, 01:54 PM

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Chupnae laga hai chaand nazar sae
Badal aaya,janae kidher sae

Us nae hi jeena kya ajeeran
Jis ko chaha,jaan-o-jiger sae

raunaq thi gulshan main jissae
tord kae laayaegul wo shajer sae

Wabasta theen jis sae ummeedaen
wapus aaya wo bhi sheher sae

Ab to sukoon sae sonae do RAz
Soae hoae hain,thak kae safar sae

Razia Yasmeen RAZ

چھپنے لگا ہے چاند نظر سے
بادل آیا جانے کدھر سے

اس نے ہی جینا کیا اجیرن
جس کو چاھا جان و جگر سے

رون*ق تھی گلشن میں جس سے
توڑ کے لاۓ گل وہ شجر سے

وابستہ تھیں جس سے امیدیں
واپس آیا وہ بھی شہر سے


اب تو سکوں سے سونے دو راز
سوۓ ھوۓ ھیں تھک کے سفر سے

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28th September 2011, 07:48 PM

Chupnae laga hai chaand nazar sae
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Us nae hi jeena kya ajeeran
Jis ko chaha,jaan-o-jiger sae

Bohat khoob Razia ji..........................




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